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All I can say is it's rare! There are too many colleagues under one person, but there are very few seekers like this. Unlike those cookie-cutter cool articles, there is no logic in the writing. There is nothing wrong with this book and it is worth reading. It became very watery at the end, which was a bit disappointing😞

There are flaws and there are also unreasonable places. But I really like the character of the protagonist😍 and he is not a nanny, nor does he overwhelm his fighting power. I hope the author can keep it up and don't change the setting day and night like some authors do.

I read 44 chapters in one go and thought it was good. I gave it a four-star rating. It doesn't have any bad points, but it does have flaws, but not many. Yes, it's worth a try. I saw that the writing of the next 60 chapters was very slow and not coherent enough. The description of Mr. Lu is very deliberate and OOC. Lu Jin has a generous and righteous character, loves her great-grandchildren, feels guilty for her friends, and has a bottom line in hating evil. However, she also has obvious flaws. She is emotional, "loves her to live, hates her to die", and sometimes shows double standards, and is easily irrational when driven by emotions.

Generally speaking, it's a bit self-explanatory, but the fanfics below Tomato's are all larger, so I can give it four stars. The first thirty or so chapters are okay, pretty standard low-to-intermediate level writing. It will be a big portion later

Compared with other fan authors, the author's level is not low. Other authors cannot even portray the most basic perspective of a practitioner, but the author of this book has unexpectedly been honest. Although there are many shortcomings, this sincerity is already commendable [laughing]

The whole thing is that the protagonist traveled through time, and the omnisexual old man who raised him was crazy. When he left, he left an ordinary skill for the protagonist. Then the protagonist's system awakened and obtained the third level of the Trinity Sect's skills. It took several years to perfect the skills, and he immediately completed the three levels. I feel I needed to repair my life, so I went to find Barron, but because Barron was hard to find, I first went to Granny Jinfeng, and then to Xia Liuqing from her, and then I contacted her. Finally, I decided to have a chat at Luotian Dajiao. On the way there, I got the horse charm from the system, so I used the horse charm to stop by. After saving Chen Duo, he met Xia He again and was beaten away with a slap. He then had a fight with the old Celestial Master and then cured Mr. Tian. Later, in order to repay the favor, the protagonist asked for the Calm Mind Spell, and then chatted with Barron for a few words, and Barron gave him the Immortal Thief of Liuku. After three slaps, only Xia He was beaten up by the four Zhangs. Because Xia He ran fast, he escaped. Later, he went to Biyou Village for further study. Later, the author said that he would go to other worlds in the end. Now the protagonist can be said to have few opponents. It is just an ordinary time-travel novel.

With the mentality of a pure seeker, I do not completely rely on the system, but regard the system as a place of wealth and dharma in the monastic process. The rules of conduct are also very consistent with the philosophical thoughts of the original work, rather than being purely refreshing. The only shortcoming is that the characteristics of the exercises are somewhat different from the descriptions in the original work. It can be said that this is the most ideal fan novel about one person. I really shouldn't take the Tomato novel's score too seriously. Such a good novel only scores 6. What's the mentality of those who give it low scores?

It's okay, it's pretty good written by one person, but then it changes to a world like Demon Slayer. For a novel about the world of heavens, if the world is not selected before writing the book, it will really have a big impact. My recommendation for the author's book is that in the following world, one should choose martial arts, fairy tales, fantasy, and the like. For example, under one person, you can choose Qing Yu Nian → Snow → Zhu Xian → Legend of Sword and Fairy, or The Sun and the Moon, and finally come to a high-end big world, such as the three-in-one world of the Zhe Tian Trilogy. This increase in combat power is more reasonable, and they are all domestic.

I'll give it five stars first. The meaning of comprehensive comics is that it won't have CP, right? The quality and quantity are guaranteed, otherwise I will come back and leave a negative review. Let's end this book here. I really didn't expect it to be Demon Slayer. There are so many national comics in our country, why does it have to be Japanese comics? Forget Japanese comics, why does it have to be Demon Slayer?

Although I have only read a few books, the writing in this one is okay [sneaky laugh] In my opinion, it still looks very good, but the author has updated too little, or maybe the author is too fake, let alone not come out [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] @ The style of painting is not right

One person finished reading it, Demon Slayer skipped it, and Hokage read part of it. Then Conan read three chapters. I feel that the protagonist is very strange, especially Conan. He is a time traveler and has never seen Conan? Change it to one star. Except for one person, all are AI. No interest anymore. The system is gone, the chakra that has been written all the time, and the invincible ki at the beginning are also gone. Naruto also accepts disciples to teach ki, and when it comes to Conan, it is all chakra.

I like this type of protagonist, but the description of the plot is rather blunt. Help Chen Duo is quite good. The descriptions of three depths and different perspectives are very good, and the protagonist's master image is well created.

It's good-looking. I like this kind of person who is focused on cultivating immortality. Although the male protagonist has cheats, he also practices very hard. This is the true attitude of cultivating immortality! ! ! The author is still satisfied after reading more The male protagonist has a system, and he can also choose to make a name for himself in the alien world, upgrade in the face, and then get fame, wealth, power, and beautiful women, punch Europe, the United States, and kick Japan and South Korea... But is it interesting? In the end, that kind of life is nothing more than that. No matter how rich you are, you can only sit in economy class on a private plane. These enjoyments end at the highest level in the world. There is no difference in the quality of life between having a net worth of one billion and ten billion. How can it be compared to cultivating on your own, becoming immortal, controlling the wind with your own imagination, exploring the essence of life, and soaring in the sky? This is the ultimate pleasure!

Can! The plot and emotions are described very delicately, but the process is a bit fast, and many popular characters are introduced in just a few strokes. Then there's the second world, which I personally don't like, so I can only put it on hold for now. Looking forward to the next world! How can I put it, the world chosen by the author perfectly avoids all my preferences. They are all Japanese stuff, but of course the one-man world is really to my liking. I don't know if it's because of this that the rating is so low. Many people were deceived into it by someone like me, and then were persuaded to leave by the Hokage and others. If you can calm down and continue to write the one-person plot slowly, you won't get this rating.

The writing was okay, I quite liked it. Overall, it was a good read, and I was fascinated by the feeling of being away from the world. Because I also want to have the confidence to not care about anything, or the heart to not care about anything.

There are flaws, but it does not mean that the book is not good. It just proves that the author is also working hard to grow. He has abandoned the traditional system-based literary giant that relies purely on the system. The protagonist in the author's writing is still very immature, but he has grown up with the author. I hope the author can continue to work hard to write a work that can leave a name on Tomato or even online articles. Come on!

The writing is very good. I have an idea. When you write about the triple reverse life, it will consume your vitality. Zuo Ruotong will age even more because he has maintained the triple triple all year round and suddenly lifted it. However, the signed horse charm will make people healthy and purified. Doesn't this mean that Barron's Eight Wonders are not needed?

There is a sense of beauty that the left and right brains are fighting each other.

The author's writing is really good. The reason why the rating is so low may be because it is difficult to agree with others. Some people think that the plug-in is not big enough, some people think that there should be a harem, and some people don't like The Adventures of Jackie Chan (manual dog head).

[Laughing evilly] I am very much looking forward to Mr. Lu's expression [thinking] [laughing evilly] and Li Dixuan

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It's rare to come across a good book again, so enjoyable

The part under one person is well written (#^.^#)👍🏻I don't know why I wrote Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba later😢This world can't bring you any blessings.

World of Conan is okay if you say it looks good, or if it doesn't look good. In the world of Conan, his abilities are like that of a very ordinary person. Starting from Naruto, the front and back are not written by the same person. The temperament of the back is changed by a different person. You can still read it when you open it, but you can only read it in the book wasteland. Can't stand it anymore

I just finished reading the one-person volume, and I feel like I can give it 5 stars. I'm not familiar with the rest of it, so I stopped reading it. Anyway, the one-person volume is very well written, and all the regrets that need to be made up for are made up for. The one-person roll is really good.

There is nothing wrong with the protagonist's character, the writing is smooth, the plot is overly natural, and the internal plot is very satisfying. It deserves praise. The only thing it needs is more updates [laughs]

OK, I've tasted it, this book is okay, you can read it Just read the one-person chapter, the rest of it is not interesting and off-putting

The writing style is okay, but not flowing prose. No matter the plot, you can tell your own story

I think it's pretty good. I'll know if you like it if you read a few more chapters. I have read one of the only novels where the protagonist arrives at Longhu Mountain, but it is not inserted into the Luotian Dajiao competition. It is quite good to follow his own "path".

I haven't seen such a pure and refreshing article in a long time. What a detour, what a big circle