HPI Am an Assistant at Hogwarts

It's very good-looking. The protagonist is very charming, but also very real. It restores Malfoy's annoying energy in the original work, and Professor Snape's shadow of a child without a filter [laughing and crying] If I were the protagonist, I would leave a shadow, but Little Seagull is worthy of being the chosen protagonist. He is highly talented, has a tough and just character, and is gentle and kind. Anyone will be attracted to this kind of person. If Professor Snape doesn't work harder in the later period, I will not agree to promise my son to him. It gets better and better later on, as the little seagull proves himself, gradually establishes himself in the magical world and integrates with everyone. Teacher Si's description is really realistic, and the charm that is consistent with the original work gradually emerges, great. Why do I feel that the writing in the later part is a bit rushed, not as detailed as before, and the emotional development is also a bit abrupt, with some highs and lows.

I really like the setting of this book! I have read many novels about Chinese students studying abroad, and this is the one that suits me the most! He did not use Chinese metaphysics to enter the magical world, nor did he follow the path of becoming a god by calling the shots, nor did he become a flawless heartthrob. The protagonist is just an ordinary Chinese teenager who encounters various accidents and misfortunes and is redeemed at Hogwarts. It contains the various difficulties encountered when studying abroad, the urgent desire to change one's destiny, the dark side of going astray in the face of temptation, and the most innocent friendship in student days. Author, please keep updating😭I can't wait to steal the author's manuscript box The writing style becomes more exciting as it goes on, and the recent plot design is amazing. Many foreshadowings seem casual, but if you think about it carefully, they are actually interlocking. I love the author's calm and British humorous writing style.

Very beautiful! It feels like one of the top three fics I've ever read! The author is always humorous, and the characters are very good and not OOC. The protagonist is written like a Chinese student, and the growth line is well depicted [shy][shy] I love the author so much! ! ! ! Quick update[KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

I have read almost 200 chapters so far. The Sri Lankan teachings are very good. They don't always talk about "splendens" or "trolls". They have a strong sense of being alive. The protagonist, Little Seagull, is really miserable. A Chinese child was trafficked to the UK and was imprisoned and beaten. When he was overage, he was discovered and rescued by Deng Duoduo, and was assigned to the Lion House. The big family has cured some little seagulls to some extent, and it is warm and sweet to work as a potion class assistant for Teacher Si. However, little seagulls really circle around the protagonist, deeply participate in the main plot, and have been nannies for Harry's injury resistance several times. I can't help but call him a holy father. Later, with the help of Deng Duoduo, he dropped out of school. I worked as Voldemort's subordinate for a year, followed the old path of a Sri Lankan double agent, was sent back to school by Voldemort to steal the Sword of Gryffindor, and was questioned, hostile and isolated by my roommates and the Iron Triangle. I just want to say that the protagonist's life is really too hard. The Obscurus in his body may take his life at any time, and his body is even more injured. It's a common occurrence, can it make the child's life better... The author really could have removed the superscript in the copywriting that the protagonist will not join the Order of the Phoenix and AD. It's a bit of a fraud in the copywriting. Lei Youyou can withdraw. I persisted because of the emotional line between Si Jiao and the protagonist.

The writing is very nice. Unlike other stories written by Chinese students studying abroad, the protagonist blends in very smoothly and is not obtrusive at all. The character design is not OOC. Does the scar on the little seagull still exist? If there are any, I am looking forward to the reaction of the personal trainer [Chigua]

It's good to read. It's almost one of the best novels of the same type that I've read. It doesn't give the protagonist an exaggerated plot or an awesome life experience. It feels a bit novel and at the same time, I am unconsciously sucked into the storyline.

This book is very interesting. It is not just Long Aotian, but a step-by-step integration into that world. The protagonist had a hard time in the early stage, but fortunately he met a group of like-minded friends and a lover who shared life and death. The author's writing is very interesting. Reading the book is relaxing and there is nothing disturbing. It's very good.

The writing is good, it's witty and humorous, and it's interesting, which is good But there is no justice, there is no justice, The facts are there but there is no justice The Harry trio, Dumbledore, seem to be very vividly written, but they have not made any progress. Two of the Harry trio have always had the same IQ as Sirius, and the smart one will be led astray by the first two. Lupine is responsible for talking. I feel that except for the increase in the protagonist's strength and the reduction of Voldemort's Horcruxes, everything else has not changed. Everyone's cognition is still standing still. This is terrible. After reading this, I still hope to see some people, at least one person, change for the better. The main plot is that after Dumbledore gave the protagonist a chance to go to school, he has been prostituted to the protagonist to become a Death Eater for free. He easily gave the protagonist the Dark Mark. It was very natural. He has prostituted 3 Horcruxes so far. Deng's record is zero and he says he is very busy. Therefore, the daily life of the subplot is to be misunderstood, suspected, and scolded behind the scenes. The protagonist is strongly suspected and slandered, but he is selfless and feels guilty as naturally as if he does not feel it. I don't talk about fairness, nor do I talk about upholding justice. Many things at the bottom feel chaotic. The school is a small evil, Voldemort is a big evil, and then it's just a free-for-all.

It's a tie and I just want to give it a rating. It's a very well-written article by a Sijiao fan. The following review may contain some plot spoilers, so please read with caution. It can be seen that the author has carefully thought about what the life of SS in the office and on vacation will be like, in addition to the original work showing us the SS in the classroom and the final battle in the later period - which is a picture given to us based on the main line requirements of HP's story. Participating in academic exchanges is a very interesting thought. When I watched it, I really laughed out loud. How is this different from a tutor in the "Muggle world" taking students out for a meeting? But this is a very reasonable extension! If we just write around the content of the original work, we can only write about SS in Harry's eyes, but not in Li Yiou's eyes. We will not be able to use the author's words to enrich SS's different private faces. At this point in the story, the emotional line between the two people is still unfolding very restrainedly, because the two people still retain their own thoughts and secrets, and the emotions cannot burst into each other until they reach their peak. I am waiting for the two selfish protagonists to reveal everything and analyze their feelings to themselves and each other. But I think it's not far away. I'm really looking forward to how the author will describe the scene when Yiou realizes his own feelings. I'm also very curious about how SS will break through the constraints of being a teacher and a student and take that step. The main story line is also very good. There are some small bugs but they do not affect the viewing experience. The description of the original characters is also relatively restored. There is no whitewashing or smearing (in my opinion, this kind of plot in many fandoms is a catharsis of the author's attitude and will affect the reader's emotions when watching). It allows people to retain their emotions in the experience of the plot. Overall, it is a very comfortable reading experience. Come on, madam, update it!

This is one of the better books I have read so far. The characters are well handled. Malfoy is still the same as he is. He also handles the Sri Lanka religion very well. The protagonist is also very attractive. There is no dimensionality reduction attack like the flower grower I have read before. I like this kind of realistic setting. I am very much looking forward to the author's big update. Just follow it at your own pace and don't interrupt it (kneel down)

The writing is very good, it is very good among fans, in my opinion, and the language is very plain, there is some casual black humor, and some details are handled very well. It has a vivid feeling. The life of the protagonist in the magical world, and some of Severus' sometimes lively actions are very interesting. Come on, I stayed up all night and finished it for me. Author, come on, author, can you sleep? I can't sleep, so keep writing. Of course, the above reminders are all joking. You have to go at your own pace, as long as you keep updating ٩(♡㉨♡)۶

The author writes very well. It is in line with the original work, and the characters have not collapsed. The updates are very stable and I will reply to many people's comments very seriously. I have a very good attitude and I love this book. I can't find any major flaws or flaws at the moment. It just feels like there is no foreshadowing in the early stage, and the character creation is still okay. The protagonist is very lovable and is very influenced by Snape. It seems that my body feels warm. I can imagine him as a young man, but I still can't imagine how explosive and wonderful it will be when he falls in love with the protagonist later. I hope the author can describe the emotional line well. It is also very good to listen to other people's comments and read the later content. I am looking forward to it more and more. I hope this book will get better and better. ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

(This review contains spoilers) The delicate emotional lines and three-dimensional character creation made me fall in love with this book deeply. Of course, what I like the most is Xiaoou. He has shortcomings and advantages. Even if he is misunderstood by his former good friend, he still works as an undercover agent. Xiaoou and Si Jiao are both ready to die. Little Ou's childhood was very dark, but he never became very dark, never has, and he bravely faced many problems. This may be the reason why he was assigned to Gryffindor. He joined the Death Eaters and served Voldemort for the sake of the wizarding world and the future of the wizarding world. He chose a path that was not understood by his friends, but Xiaoou never blamed his friends for not believing in him. He Sijiao's emotional line is one of the best I have seen in so many fanfics. Their love is not passionate from the beginning, but a long, trickling kind of love. They are like a bonfire in each other's darkness, not only bringing light, but also a little bit of warmth. This article is considered excellent among fanfics. Although some people think it is not excellent, everyone has their own opinions. In my eyes, this article is excellent. I also sincerely hope that this book, which I particularly like, will get better and better! This is the only book that makes me look forward to updating and reading it every day!

I feel that the protagonist was really miserable before, but life has gotten better after going to school ⌯ᵔᵕᵔ⌯ಣ At present, the emotional line is not particularly obvious, and the character design does not have too many OOC, it is very restored, the pace is relatively slow, and the daily description is very natural and looks very comfortable ( *▽), the protagonist gradually became cheerful from the initial unconfidence. It really feels like watching the protagonist grow up. It's really super beautiful✌︎⌯ᵔᗜᵔ⌯✌︎

The author's description simply shocked me to the bone. It made me remember all the plots deeply (in my bones) and never forget them. The author is also very humorous and knows a lot of jokes. I found this humorous.

My Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and I don't have to cut pig's trotters anymore. I just want to see 200 pictures of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author, and Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and os finally allowed me to eat something delicious. It must be highly praised and supported. Well, the writing is awesome and Klass directly ended the game. ! It's awesome, ok, I wish the author directly - one gets one, two-two gets four, four-forty-six, seven-seven-four, nineteen.

This is the only HP article with OC that I can read. But it interferes too much with the main plot, and there is no inexplicable increase in favorability. It is simply a rare and good article. It will definitely become popular in time. Come on, author [send heart][send heart][send heart]

After reading so many hps, this is a real book that makes me feel like I am immersed in it. I liked it so much that I originally wanted to wait until it was finished before reading it, but I couldn't bear it at all. The author's writing style is great, the protagonist has a distinct personality, and the professor describes it very delicately. I will keep waiting for your updates! [Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss] I love the author and look forward to the end!

This author's writing style is really good, with a little bit of humor and most of it is not the bad jokes on the Internet. It is very naturally integrated, so the author will update soon! ! ! I want to see the sweetness between the two of them, and don't abuse them.

This is the first time I have read all of a fan novel in which the main character is not a supermodel. It's hard to describe the feeling. I am a very empathetic person and I often see Snape's edited videos. How can I put it... It's the sad feeling of being undercover. It becomes even more sad when you add the protagonist of this book. The two of them wondered how long they could live together, struggled with the tasks Voldemort had given them that they didn't want to complete, and endured all kinds of ridicule from the children of the people who had hurt their loved ones. I hope the author will update more... Otherwise, it will be super uncomfortable if I forget about the next update.

It feels very good now that I see it. The writing style was a little green at the beginning but has gradually grown. Overall, it is still very good! Like it very much! I just feel a little regretful about the year when Xiao Ou didn't go to school and failed to skip a grade. The two loveless childhoods of Si Jiao and Xiao Ou put together a loving home [I almost cried] I hope Xiao Ou can get out of danger as soon as possible and eat meat as soon as possible [sneaky laugh]

Super beautiful ୧•̀ꇴ•૭, the relationship between Xiao Ou and Si is long and thin, and the two gradually develop feelings during the interaction. Their personalities are very complementary, and there is no sense of OOC. The author's writing style is also very good. It can be said that I have read HP fan fiction CP is the best among Snape.

The original character has a lovable personality, is not silly and sweet, does things in an orderly manner, and has the consciousness of a Gryffindor when facing danger. The HP characters are not out of shape, and there is no OOC in either dialogue or behavioral motivations. In terms of emotional flow, Sijiao is quite natural. The flow of the protagonist is a bit deliberate, but it is still a very good fan work.

I cried. I really like this book. I will read it from the beginning again if I want to catch up on it... After Xiao O and Sifu were together, Sifu became less gloomy. I really liked the cute interaction between the two (><). The characters are well drawn. I could watch it 100 times when I turned into an Animagus for the first time. Even the little O who does everything extremely well is still a boy who has just grown up ꒦ິ^꒦ິ Every time I see little O failing to integrate into his original partners and Narcissa's love for her family, I feel so sad... Little O will be happier and happier in the future! [Cry]

It's a super nice article. The author's writing is very good and he's very good at making jokes (not bad jokes!!! Not bad jokes!!!). People like me who don't usually like to read comments can't help but open the comment area to see if there are any interesting comments from the author.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! Such delicious food! ! Big. If you can write, write more! ! ! One chapter a day is simply not enough! ! ! But you should also pay attention to your body. Don't get tired. If you are tired, take a rest❛‿˂̵✧ _(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

It feels like a good fanfic. The protagonist does not travel through time, there is no system, and the golden finger is not that big. The author writes very uniquely with his own ideas, and the stories he writes are humorous and vivid. Personally, I really like the interaction between the protagonist and Sri Lanka, and it's a super loving story.

Seriously, this is the best novel I've ever read. Each character image jumps out on the page, the characters' emotions are very real, the plot connections are very vivid, and the logic is rigorous, as if writing a real history. The details in the article are already very good, after all, no one is perfect.

Nice! The ss is very realistic, the main character is quite interesting, and the characters are very rich. He is indeed a Gryffindor but not particularly reckless. He has a good relationship with the trio but does not have that licking feeling. Moreover, it is not very repetitive with the original text, and the development is relatively reasonable. The little seagull is unlucky. I thought the author couldn't write emotional lines before when I saw SS's heart-wrenching scene, but I didn't expect you to be so good at it. It's so frustrating! Moreover, the whole text is full of life-or-death humor, which is very enjoyable to read.

It's very beautiful and the writing is great [Love] Great support