We Break up and Meet Again, the Prince Is My Wealthy Stepbrother
分手再重逢，太子爷是我豪门继兄
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 607k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Workplace & Marriage
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
1.8kReads
5.7Score
243Shelves
353Chapters
320Listens
75.5kReads · all time
So far, it seems to be okay, the ideas are very good, and the rhythm is quite well controlled. So far, although the abuse of the female protagonist is still in the main line, some other events will be interspersed to maintain the threshold of abuse. The bad point is that the main line of abuse is too long, and the cool point is always pressed. It is recommended not to press the ground for too long, and slowly release it one by one in conjunction with the abuse point to maintain a balance between the two. Also, I hope there won't be too many male supporting characters who like the heroine. The heroine's ordinary appearance has been written in the early stage, so I hope it won't be written as a heartthrob. Moreover, there are already a few male characters who have shown that they may like the female protagonist. If there are more male characters, I hope the author can be more biased towards pure friendship or pure appreciation. In fact, it is easier and less bloody to write a character who does not participate too much in the main plot, but who is just an outstanding male or female who helps out of admiration and friendship and then fades out of the story. (Personal suggestion)
Well, can the author advance faster? Why does the plot always drag on? It's bullshit from beginning to end, only the heroine is being abused from beginning to end
The author's overall writing is very good, but from a personal point of view, I don't like to abuse the heroine too much. From the beginning of the chapter to now, I have been abusing the heroine. I really can't stand watching [crying] [crying]
Please update! ! ! The author's writing style is good and his narrative skills are skillful. Especially the depiction of the heroine is both real and touching, making people moved. I look forward to the heroine having a sweeter time in the subsequent story.
Looks good @
Not bad, worthy of praise
It's actually pretty good, and the plot is reasonable, but there are a lot of awkward couplets. Overall OK