[Reunion After Years Apart + Winning Her Back at Any Cost + Bittersweet Romantic Push and Pull]
Chu Qiao is socially anxious and mute, the most forgettable person on campus. Yet she catches the eye of Qin An, the aloof campus heartthrob, who willingly steps down from his pedestal to pursue her.
He learns sign language for her, keeps her company at her part-time job, and drives away everyone who bullies her.
Chu Qiao often feels lucky to have someone as exceptional as Qin An for a boyfriend.
That is, until a phone call summons her to a bar on the eve of graduation.
When she arrives, she stands outside a private room and hears the people inside eagerly asking Qin An about his relationship with her.
His indifferent reply, “She’s boring,” hits Chu Qiao like a thunderclap.
It turns out he pursued her not because he liked her, but because he’d made a bet with someone.
He had never truly cared for her throughout their relationship.
Heartbroken, Chu Qiao ends things with him.
Five years later, they meet again. She is a single mother who can’t afford her child’s medical bills and has to turn to her mother, who married into a wealthy family. Qin An, meanwhile, has become her wealthy stepbrother.
Chu Qiao is no longer the mute girl who couldn’t speak.
He doesn’t recognize her voice when they speak on the phone.
Chu Qiao thinks that as long as they don’t meet, they can keep out of each other’s way.
But fate has other plans. Her boss asks her to accompany him on a blind date, and the date turns out to be Qin An.
So Chu Qiao pretends to be mute when she’s face-to-face with him, but calls him “Brother” over the phone when he can’t see her.
Every day, she’s on edge, afraid her secret identity will be exposed.
So far, it seems to be okay, the ideas are very good, and the rhythm is quite well controlled. So far, although the abuse of the female protagonist is still in the main line, some other events will be interspersed to maintain the threshold of abuse. The bad point is that the main line of abuse is too long, and the cool point is always pressed. It is recommended not to press the ground for too long, and slowly release it one by one in conjunction with the abuse point to maintain a balance between the two. Also, I hope there won't be too many male supporting characters who like the heroine. The heroine's ordinary appearance has been written in the early stage, so I hope it won't be written as a heartthrob. Moreover, there are already a few male characters who have shown that they may like the female protagonist. If there are more male characters, I hope the author can be more biased towards pure friendship or pure appreciation. In fact, it is easier and less bloody to write a character who does not participate too much in the main plot, but who is just an outstanding male or female who helps out of admiration and friendship and then fades out of the story. (Personal suggestion)
Well, can the author advance faster? Why does the plot always drag on? It's bullshit from beginning to end, only the heroine is being abused from beginning to end
The author's overall writing is very good, but from a personal point of view, I don't like to abuse the heroine too much. From the beginning of the chapter to now, I have been abusing the heroine. I really can't stand watching 😢 😢
Please update!!! The author's writing style is good and his narrative skills are skillful. Especially the depiction of the heroine is both real and touching, making people moved. I look forward to the heroine having a sweeter time in the subsequent story.
Not bad, worthy of praise
It's actually pretty good, and the plot is reasonable, but there are a lot of awkward couplets. Overall OK
Looks good @