Time Travel: I Pretend to Be a Loli in an Online Game

It's very good. It's not toxic at the moment and contains a lot of stems. Also, I hope I won't get married [shy]

As far as it is shown so far, its background structure and narrative structure are particularly interesting, but it lacks a macro-epic feel in the narrative, especially when describing the more ambitious goals and world background. Maybe you can add some environmental descriptions? However, the characters are not as good at controlling the daily routine and game rhythm of OC. At least it makes me feel comfortable to watch, and the length is appropriate. But because of this, part of the sense of expectation that belongs to foreshadowing and hooks is missing? (Come on, author, I may not be right, that's all)

Generally speaking, it's pretty good, with no obvious poisonous spots. Although the small details are a bit confusing, it doesn't matter.

The subject matter is very interesting, and there is nothing poisonous about it. I hope you stick to it.

Good-looking(๑＞ڡ＜)☆ Ask the author, will it change later? If it changes, what about Shan Baiyuan? It's acceptable as long as you don't get married.

Not bad, give it a five-star review

Very good, very interesting

It's good-looking and non-toxic. The premise is that the noble's revenge is avenged. I haven't seen it yet. I will comment if there is any. There are typos, but the author listened to the advice, but the data is not very good. It's a pity.

Since it's brass for life, why don't you just keep opening treasure chests and pack it with pure gold and sell it to pay off your debt?

Although it is still a seedling, the current part is pretty good. I also see that some small foreshadowing has been laid. I hope that the current style will continue in the future.

200,000 Words are not enough [Thinking]

Very good book

It's a little bit poisonous, in more than one place, but it's not poisonous yet. Let's take a look. Just to pass the time?

It's beautiful, the world is terrible, but the novel is pretty good

It's a pretty good book, but not many people have read it.