Traveling Through MC, the Chat Group Follows

Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is four The rebirth of a great masterpiece, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? Feelings fade away in front of it! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literature of the 21st century Xueju On! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo Laozhuang, Poet Immortal, Poet Sage, Sansu Jiaxuan; since Qin Emperor, Han Wu, Tang Zong and Song Dynasty Zu, Chengji Sihan, to Gautama Buddha, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle Dodd --Who wouldn't be in awe after reading this? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! Excellent literary talent and exquisite rhetoric Wonderful, inherited The character of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties, is profound! Lifetime Gotta see this Books are truly a blessing for three lifetimes! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: Such a magical thing Make, if the day If we never meet again, what's the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can lead to success Have a moment of peace Ning. Otherwise! Such masterpieces, if the pearls were covered with dust, the world would not be able to see them. Isn't it violent A waste of natural resources, a waste of the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice my ego, Chengquanda Me! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be read again and again Top, top to Let the whole world know about it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book enjoyable enough? -No Enough! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas serve as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? --No Enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on]

In the MC chat group, you are the kind of person who writes very well (author, although you have been made difficult by many people and given low marks, please don't be influenced by them, just write what you want to write [like] Come on!)

Well, in the Minecraft novels, I personally think your writing is quite good. I hope you won't finish the other novels. The ones I read before were a bit unfinished at the back, and some of the early writings were particularly good. The later writings became less and less like MC, so I gave up afterward. To be honest, I think your writing is quite good. Your rating is low. I will help you. I hope you stick to it. Come on, write at least 300 or 200 pictures. If I look at your progress, you should finish with more than 200 pictures, or the score is too low. If you are not in the mood to write, you should finish with more than 180 pictures, but I think it is good to write faster. If it is too long, there are too many things that have changed. Take a look and hope that your writing will get better and better in the future [Like][Like][Like]

The author has a supernatural resurrection, and the martyrs will protect their homeland again.

There is indeed a reason why the score is not high, but it would be nice if the newcomer could write down the cool points. I've seen some authors write six or seven books before, and they just write with a lot of frustration and a little bit of excitement. Overall, it is something that a normal reader who has read a certain amount of novels can write. Although the writing style is average and the plot is mediocre, the basic refreshing feeling of the novel is still well written. I've seen it said before that for newbies to write exciting articles, they should first write down the exciting points in their imagination before they really get started. The author is probably at this stage. There aren't too many bad points. There are probably some, such as the female character being too deviant from the original work and being given away when you meet her, and being a bit awkward from time to time. Basically, they are all introductory cool novels. Give the newcomers some support, okay?

If the MC cheats, I feel like I can write about the electricity generation. I never seem to see anyone writing about the electricity chat group.

The author doesn't want to write about a harem, right?

I am very curious about one thing, that lazy angel Gabriel. Wouldn't she be curious about a real game world and addicted to games? Don't you care at all about a real game world?

@ Young Hacker

My problem is, I really don't like lolicon, but other than that, everything is fine.

At this stage, I think it looks good, and I'm waiting for the follow-up, hoping it won't be discontinued.

Author, can you add a jar mod?

It's pretty good, and the coordination between the characters is pretty good so far, and it's quite interesting, except for the fact that the MC world is on the high side. At present, there are no weapons that exceed the standards (they are all read as cool articles, so don't think too much)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A poisonous point for me is Lily The lifespan of the cells in the working cells is vague. Even if the lifespan is up, they just change into new clothes. Except for being killed by bacteria and viruses or being pulled out of the human body, which is the real death. Looking at the plot of the working cells, it is obvious that the seasons are different for several episodes. It is obvious that the cells in the working cells only die unexpectedly, and there are no cells that die when their lifespan expires.

Do you know why the rating is not high? If the plot changes too much, it will be invincible. Secondly, there are mostly Japanese comics and less luck. The novels are either difficult to change or leisurely, easy to follow and cherish.

Awesome era future?

Chapter 33, is the protagonist a eunuch? ?

Author, your pace is too fast. Although there is a lot of content, we can try to write this book to 600,000 words or more. Mainly, I think it's not two-dimensional and it seems a bit strange. To put it bluntly, it's still a bit pedantic😅. But there is really nothing wrong with the writing. It's just that I can't accept it. For the author, please restrain yourself. There are big companies behind human games. If your book is blocked, there will be no place to read it.

Normal newcomer level

Very good idea, not bad

Looks better, okay

Not bad, give it five stars

Hohohohohohoho

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking.

Five-star encouragement, everyone understands

Is it okay? The writing doesn't look like a chat group article.

Although I don't like it that much, I still encourage the author to work hard

Just because you killed Azar and the skirmishers, I'll give you four stars, and resurrecting the Great Mercy Tree King will give you one star! ! !

I personally prefer reading this kind of book, but in the end it still depends on everyone's choice.