The Forsaken Son Murders His Kin

Hehe, actually writing this story was quite a challenge for me! 🥺 I feel that many aspects were not handled well. For example, the business war part may be a bit weak 🤦, and the awkward and deep emotions between the two brothers seem not to be fully written 😜. As a novice, I know that I still have to practice hard on my rhythm control and detail rendering... I would like to thank everyone for taking the time to read my immature story. [Licking screen] I will read every comment carefully! [Laughs] Your feedback is really valuable. I will continue to learn and work hard to tell more touching stories ~ Thank you for your tolerance! 😘