Unparalleled Taoism: Start Cultivating Immortality from the Top Second Generation

The writing is very good. Although it is a genius flow, it is not awkward at all. Keep up the good work (by the way, be careful and try not to have a female protagonist. I am afraid that the protagonist will be OOC)

Not bad, not bad. It's my favorite type of genius. The plot is compact and refreshing. It's one of the few books that makes me want to read more. Please keep updating the author. Also, I hope it won't have cp. I always feel that having a female protagonist will be weird.

It's okay. I feel like it's a relatively rare type. The protagonist doesn't do much, and basically practices on his own, such as formations, swordsmanship, and daily practice. However, there are also more typical ones. The protagonist's friend almost became another villain similar to the protagonist of Destiny, and the same goes for that person's sister. It's too typical, but it has nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist should be the strongest among his batch now. It's okay. The main reason is that the protagonist doesn't like to be famous, so his cultivation is not exposed.

I think it's pretty good. Many things can be written more clearly, such as the specific operation of formations, and other aspects are very good. However, I think there is a big pacing problem. I don't think the sacred land has been arranged well, but it is still very beautiful and very good (I was halfway through it and then quit the background due to something. When I came back, there was no record of this book. I searched for half an hour. I couldn't remember the name of the protagonist. I searched for Luoshu and Wu Dingshan Lingshi, but I couldn't find it. I found it later through the AI, hahaha, it is really good) and the author will update soon.

Overall it's good. Grasp the big ones and let go the small ones. The overall direction of the story is smooth. The protagonist comes from a wealthy family and Goldfinger has the information. There is currently no ambiguous or particularly slap-in-the-face plot. But it does have some minor flaws, which are fine for my own viewing experience. Some of them will be explained later, so it won't affect the viewing experience. So the overall feeling is good. The protagonist is a relatively confident and cold type, and he also has the help of his family. The story also has foreshadowing. I hope the author will work hard and update QUQ

The plot is written without nonsense, and the characters are not stereotyped. The plot is also very good. I am looking forward to the map transition from the six major sects of Beiming Continent to several other continents. So far, the writing is quite good. It is a masterpiece of genius.

Well enough. But it feels like it's not very good to have the protagonist belatedly arrive many times. There is a feeling that the grasp of things is unstable. I hope that the rhythm of the plot can be better later.

Well written, a unique way of cultivating immortality, come on

This book is pretty good. Why don't many people read it? Is it because there are too few?

It looks good, I like the character of the protagonist

This book is very innovative. It belongs to the genius family genre. 99 Of the 100 books on cultivating immortals are from the grassroots genre, the small family genre. I read the 8th novel and found it quite novel. At least it's not the same story. It's quite interesting. I read books on Tomato, and they are all cool novels written by novices with a score of 9 or above. The bad thing is that they don't abuse the protagonist but are like Long Aotian. Only 7/8 can be seen to read good ones. The style is similar to the starting point, and it won't be so exciting.

It's well written, but it feels a bit restrictive. I can't find the results I read yesterday in history today. I'm pretty sure I didn't click delete. Now that I have added a bookshelf, come on.

It's good-looking. The protagonist has a clear self-understanding of himself, and his moral bottom line is not bad. I feel that the protagonist's golden finger has a high upper limit. I haven't seen it work so far, and I'm looking forward to it. Come on, author

Pretty good, super pretty

Not enough, please recommend something like this Are there any of the same type?

It looks pretty good now

It's a bit strange. Xiao Luo in the article is indeed an AI, but other parts, such as the protagonist's moves, also have an AI flavor.

It's okay. Nowadays, if you are either a loser or a loser, the stream of geniuses can be regarded as a clear stream.

So far, it is worth continuing to read.

Very good book, makes my heart beat fast

A rare good article on Tomato, the author will come back soon [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Not bad, good reviews. Not many tomatoes have this level.

It's well written and I like the protagonist's character very much

Non-outline articles are suitable for book lovers who like to read logic and details; unconventional and slap-in-the-face articles are suitable for book lovers who like to read upgrade streams.

Very beautiful, eloquently explained (•̀ᴗ•́)و̑̑

It's what I want, it's a joy

The plot and characters are well described

Liangcao, I feel that going out in the second stage is a little poisonous. Tianjiao article did not solve the experience quickly and took up 7 or 8 chapters. It is a little poisonous.

Take a look and show them all to me. There are just too few chapters. You have to take good care of them.

Although the update has been discontinued, I still give you five stars. I hope the author can continue writing.