Zhu Xian: I Became an Immortal by Fishing in Luoxia Peak

My snow chess is well written and comfortable to read. Come on, author, work hard.

The characters and plots are very well developed, the writing is systematic but not brainless, and the writing is also very good. It is definitely ranked among the best in the Zhu Xian series, but I hope the author will not stop updating. I rarely read Zhu Xian's books.

Do I need to change the title of the book? The system is gone.

What a useless system, it was actually destroyed by the Tiandao techniques of the low-level immortal world. . .

It's okay, you can take a look

Don't cut it! I finally found a good Zhu Xian fanfic.

Don't go into the dark room. To be honest, I haven't seen a Zhu Xian novel that I can finish. [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] I hope you can finish it [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Eat melon]

The best single heroine Zhu Xian fanfic I have ever seen

The writing is okay, but I just want to know where the destiny of this Zhuxian world comes from. Is this world worthy of cause and effect and destiny?

How to say it? It was quite pleasant to watch, and suddenly I had an idea, could I add some Taoist elements such as Wudang Zhengyiquanzhen, which would be inherited in another world, to understand oneself and seek within, similar to the Lu family seeking Taoism under one person, not for the purpose of pursuing miraculous skills, but to describe the Tao beyond miraculous skills.

It's a pity. It's really good. It's a pity that it has been locked up in a dark room. I'm looking forward to the new book.

Although it is modified based on the template of the original work, but after seeing the latest version, I have the idea of ​​​​reopening a new world. It does not steal the opportunity of the protagonist of the original work, but has its own mission. It is also good to be innovative.

If you want to be broad, you don't want eunuchs.

Very good very good

The system just went out [what] [what]

It looks good, but it's too short.

It was okay at the beginning, but the settings after I got off the mountain made me feel very bad. I can only say that it's okay to watch, so I'll keep it for now [Thinking]

Personally, I feel that the characterization is more distinct.

Although it died young, it's still okay. I'm referring to the book before it was changed. If what you are looking at is now after the changes, then everything you said is correct [please review carefully]

If your liver is good [laughing evilly], you should have more liver.

Five points of praise. Strangers, don't be curious. Sharing together is happiness. Being alone is too uncomfortable.

Well written, the changes are reasonable

So far, I've read some good Zhu Xian fics, and you can take a look at Shu Huang

I think it's okay, but some of the settings are not good. I'll read it when I'm short of books [laughing]