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The writing is quite good, and the plot design is okay. Although the protagonist is a male, female readers like me can still read it. There are many places where I feel that the author did not pay much attention to details, such as pouring rice in front of the old lady's door next door, and a wooden bucket suddenly coming into the water curtain cave. These details make people feel that the logic is inconsistent, which affects the quality of the entire work. Of course, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, but I still hope to greatly correct these shortcomings and write better.

It's pretty good, there's no grand narrative, it just focuses on the protagonist's training. It just has too little plot.

Not bad, the same routine, after beating this city, change to another city, one after another [face covering]

The heart and details are captured very well! In this consumer era of fast reading, it is rare. Hope you can stick with it! Come on!

Overall, it's good, but I've been battling with the air [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Pretty good work

Not bad, worthy of praise After chapter 60, I can only give two stars.

Good, good, good, good

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

Okay, I can watch it

Even if you have military power, you still drink porridge and carry sacks every day. It's so frustrating to watch. I've practiced martial arts for hundreds of times.

The logic is clear, the content is engaging, and there are no flaws yet.

A good book, although the protagonist is too young and grows up too quickly and easily, it is still a good book and worth collecting.

Although, it feels okay

Beautiful, so beautiful! Thank you author!

Nice! Food and grass are rare!

Relatively stable, like it

Not bad. I have a cool head.

Great, great, great, great

Come on, try your best to write well

Great writing, good luck to the author!

Very good, good luck to the author

Although, it's a bit mindless, it looks okay

Capricious, not bad, you can check it out.

If the protagonist used swords, guns, swords, halberds, sticks and axes, I would give him one star.

Well, you can come on, come on, come on

Very nice book

The Five-Shaped Fist started out as a tiger, a bear, an ape, a deer and a crane, but later on the bear turned into a snake.

The book is good, don't be eager for quick success and quick success, it's good to practice massage, don't be a eunuch

It was a bit awkward at first, but I gradually became more proficient later on.