After the System Took Me Across All Realms, I Turned It In.

The writing is very good, except that the writing style is a bit green, there are no other faults. Anyway, it's my type. The heroine is full of patriotism and her family is relatively harmonious (although she doesn't appear in much, but she feels it) Traveling through time to do business and falling in love (accepting men) at the same time is simply not that exciting! In the end, he took a whole family and people he had connections with to travel through time, and they became gods, which was awesome! (The only thing I can fault is that the ending is too fast and the writing is too general. More elaboration might make it fuller) But it's still good, come on!

It can be seen that the author is a novice, and the subject matter is very good, but there is still a big gap compared with other articles. The content of the article is relatively bland, without any big ups and downs, and it is not very attractive. It is recommended that each world write some conflicts or novel content, and do not want every world to be the same. There is no problem with the heroine having a harem, but there is no need to devote too much space to romance. It is best to focus on transactions. For example, in Food World, a lot of space is written about the food they encountered, and the transaction is just a simple promotion of trading bracelets. The author can look at other articles on the same subject and see how they write the content of each world. So I give four stars to encourage you and hope the author will keep up the good work.

Well written, the article is wonderful, the content is rich and colorful, full of patriotic sentiments, and brings the country to a higher level. The heroine is a super beauty who loves handsome men. Although she is flirtatious, the male protagonists are all negative. They all love the heroine, and they all blame the heroine for being too charming. The heroine finally takes the whole family on a fantasy journey through various worlds. What is sad is that the heroine has no children of her own. It is worth recommending [Like][Like][Like]

Song Qingyuan travels across the world to do trading tasks while falling in love, which is very exciting and beautiful. The heroine of this article may have some minor flaws in her character. She is relatively close to people she recognizes and can act coquettishly. Usually, the heroine gets along with the male protagonists more sweetly. If you can't accept being married, you can read other types of female protagonists. [This is my first time writing a book, so some parts may not be so perfect. I am very willing to accept suggestions from readers. If there are some things that are not good, I will work hard to improve them! But please don't comment negatively! Don't criticize!

Good looking, not much nonsense

Not bad, multiple male protagonists, recommended

Good looking, support the author

It's so beautiful, I like it very much.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Very novel It's a subject I've never seen before Very nice, with family, country and little love

It's a very interesting book. Come on, come on.

Hahaha this book is so interesting and the author is so talented. You can still write a book like this, it makes me laugh to death

The book is very beautiful and exciting. The author writes so well🍇🍇🍇🍇🍇🍇🍇🍇🍇🍇

It's still good and fast-paced. Most of the male protagonists are Quan Jie, but the ending is too fast and a bit rushed.

It looks good, there are many beautiful men, the heroine is so happy, the system is awesome, the father of the country leads him to success, and the hero and heroine are strong.