Dating Simulation: I Rewrite Her Ending with My Sincerity

Here is the author. Tomato's first book. If you have any suggestions, please tell me. Non-professional writer, motivated by interest. Without much support, the author would have no choice but to apply for a civil servant job in the palace. Laugh ~

I have read almost 20 chapters so far (I am talking about the present, this review may be one-sided, I will read the next one again), the author's writing is good, but the plot is a bit too ups and downs and comedy, which in turn makes the story a bit classic and cliche, the narrative is too tense and the transition is a bit abrupt , the male protagonist's character also has some contradictory and sudden changes, and some God's perspective foreshadowing designed by the author can indeed attract readers, but the later revelation will not give readers too much novelty. I think the author can make the details into hidden foreshadowing and reveal them later. (This is just a personal opinion, please be gentle) Also, cheers to the author

After reading the rain chapter, I quickly came over to comment. It was so cool. To sum it up in one word, ice! When I read it, I felt like there were ants crawling on my body [palms my face], and I would be dead without the following chapters [palms my face]. Okay, I'm done with my madness. Let's be serious. I've watched Tao and Yu so far. Yu is undoubtedly quite exciting. The writing is particularly delicate, and the emotional transitions are also on point. Especially as the plot advances, there is no character breakdown at all, at least I didn't see any character breakdown. It's very good. But for the Peach Chapter, to be honest, Tao is really a victim, because Tao was originally a dungeon opened by the male protagonist in order to clear the rain. Therefore, in terms of plot, the author compressed Peach, making the Peach Chapter look very urgent, but the subsequent real simulation made up for this to a certain extent. Overall, it is good, although not as good as the Rain Chapter. One thing that makes me a little uncomfortable is that in this real simulation of the male protagonist, although the time flow rate is different, within the simulation, the male protagonist actually spent decades, especially in the Tao chapter, he completed an experience of old age and death. The impact this has on a person's spirit is quite terrifying. Even if there is no such real thing, we will be slow for a long time after watching a touching movie, let alone decades of real experience, but the male protagonist does not have this buffering process. This is what makes me a little uncomfortable. The male protagonist doesn't even need to adjust his feelings for Tao. He can start attacking Yu after a night's rest. He is just like a scumbag. This seems to me really unreasonable and unreasonable. I don't know if there will be adjustments in the future. But ignoring this point, Yu Pian is undoubtedly quite good. At least I don't see any problems. I look forward to the follow-up strategies for the female protagonists. I just hope that the male protagonists will not be so scumbag [face covering]

The writing style is smooth and gentle, and the characterization is very delicate. Whether it is the male protagonist or the female protagonist, the transformation of the characters in the book is not achieved overnight. They have their own mental journeys. The characters' descriptions are vivid on the page. At the same time, the lines are also imbued with the breath of life. After reading it, I can't help but silently say that it is really well written. I look forward to the following plots.

Yes, the setting of the protagonist is very special. At the end of the rain chapter, I thought the author was going to create supernatural powers or fantasy [facepalm], but the author said no, so the suspense is very interesting. I hope the author will work harder [like]

It can be regarded as a treasure for me. The characters are delicately portrayed, and the ordinary daily life is also very interesting. The vocabulary is beautiful, the peach chapter is a bit rushed, and the character creation is not three-dimensional. The emotional portrayal of the male and female protagonists in the rain chapter is delicate. The female protagonist is not only simply used as a game strategy target, but the male protagonist is also realizing his own redemption and growing up in the process. I can only say that the author's writing is so good

A book without anchors and conflicts is like a dish without oil, salt and uncooked vegetables. (Of course, steak can be eaten raw without any fillings, but this is an exception) The author of this book has a good grasp of anchors and conflicts, and the delicacy and astringency of the writing are also rare bonus points. If you think this is a cliche novel that simulates and has multiple female protagonists who lose their IQs but don't change the medicine, then I hope you will read the first few chapters before considering whether to pursue it or not. Anyway, the first three chapters left me like an eagle. There are no poisonous spots or disgusting taste fragments. (If the author sees this, he will update the book quickly. It's really not enough) [laughs] There are few books on Tomato that describe anchors and conflicts very well. The writing is exquisite and the author is very good at it (everything can be understood).

To be honest, I really like the Rain Chapter very much, and I feel like I should have seen it next door, but the sudden change in the ending made me very alienated to be honest. I would definitely say goodbye to another novel immediately, but because of the author's steady control of the whole scene and the excellence of the Rain Chapter, I continued to watch it. However, the Flower Chapter so far has not attracted me, and there are two parts of my male protagonist's reaction. I felt alienated by the description. The hero's crazy reaction and kissing action when he died for the first time made me very confused. When he was chased for the second time, although the hero denied it out loud, he clearly taught you a lesson. Did you do it in order to portray the character? Moreover, the flower chapter really gave me the feeling that it was not from China. Maybe it is because I hate big family stories very much. Although what I said is my dissatisfaction, in fact, I saw that the author's writing style was good enough in the end, and the rain chapter was excellent enough. I hope that the flower chapter can really attract me.

I understand. It made me feel a little uncomfortable at the beginning, and I didn't feel like a normal person. Later I realized that the protagonist's own experience seemed not normal, so this story is actually about two-way redemption and sudden enlightenment.

Although I feel the author's pseudonym is a bit too much. . . [Shy] But the author's writing style is indeed smooth and delicate. Each character has its own advantages and disadvantages. The protagonist's growth is also based on continuous accumulation of learning, and he is not given up immediately. Also, the sentence "the sense of demarcation between virtual and real" is really very useful [Sending Hearts]

It's pretty good. After watching Tao and Yu, Tao did seem rushed because of the last minute additions, and because the first daughter Xiaoxiao didn't describe the feeling of being a father in detail. The second plot was added when Yu Xing was born, making it look like the first one was a Cyberwoman. The rest was pretty good.

Too short, too short, too short, too short, too short, too short, too short, too short, too short, too short, too short, too short. The peach chapter is just average. I like the delicate redemption of the rain chapter. I look forward to the subsequent characterization and happy ending.

The description and length of Tao are too little. The better the description of Xia, the more space there is, the more unfair it feels to Tao. I hope that Tao can be portrayed more in the future. I don't want to find out that this person will not be found after leaving the simulation. Everyone is equal and cannot be distinguished based on the level of the strategy. It's good to see the latest chapter so far.

There is no one who can do good work. I felt that the story was very touching, and the protagonist worked very hard to guide the heroine correctly. The mood of the play is smooth and reasonable, and the knife in it touched me very much. After watching it, it made my heart ache. The author's writing style is very good, and the characterization is delicate and vivid. That's the name... Ahem, it's so outrageous. I wonder if the author has been restricted for this reason.

The writing style is very good, and the characterizations are also relatively delicate. Except for a few scenes that are a bit weird, they are all understandable (Xiaodu, Mr. K is also fake, and I didn't expect it). Everything else is very good, highly recommended, okay

I like this, it has a sad and happy feeling, the writing is also very comfortable, not toxic yet, feel free to read it

It's not like those long articles in the book review section. Just four words "Exquisite, beautiful"

Will the heroines have simulated memories later [exploration]

Good-looking works will definitely become a hit

It's pretty good, the author's structure is very good.

The delicate words create emotional lines. It's a beautiful book. I wanted to buy it for the first time and read it, so I gave it a thumbs up. I hope you can continue writing [almost crying]

You may think that the writing in the front is bad, but the concept and plot in the back are really great. The rating of this book is entirely because the writing in the front is so bad. The author is great. This is my first time to write a book review. The author's writing in the back is really good [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

It's quite beautiful. It's the first time I've seen something so novel.

I glanced at the bookshelf and saw that I had indeed read that book. When I saw the plot of Xia Yu, I felt something was wrong. He was an accomplice and a member of the viaduct on a rainy day. In the end, it was the male protagonist who wanted to die. It was so similar, but he did write it in his own way. It was very nice.

It's not easy to find such wonderful works, I'm so happy

Such beautiful works are rare

It's so beautiful, a masterpiece. I never thought I would read this kind of article. It's so addictive. Come on, the author, please don't stop updating [Sending my heart]

Such beautiful works are rare.

A highly recommended novel that suits your appetite.

Such a beautiful work, I will definitely support it