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He has been making up for his regrets. The author writes like a young man, full of hope and enthusiasm. If you want to say that his writing is not as good as the original, there is nothing you can do about it. The 40-year-old Jiangnan cannot write about the Dragon Clan, and the author in his 20s cannot write about the feeling of being 40. Getting better and better means growing up.

Among the Dragon Clan I've read, his writing style is excellent. Sometimes he writes sentimentality very much like Jiangnan, but with less mystery. The Dragon Clan must have hidden a lot of things over the years, so he can write more mysteriously.

I like this rhythm very much, and I'm also looking forward to when he and Eriki meet! The writing is quite good, without the awkwardness that is typical of tomato novels. In the original work, Xia Mi and Chu Zihang were really sorry, but the author gave them a good ending. All in all, the author writes well and I look forward to your updates!

I will give high marks to all books that describe beautiful reading, even if the writing is poor, but I know it is a true expression of true feelings. As long as this is enough, respect our lost youth. Respect "Dragon"

The breeze swept across Kyushu during the day The sky is high, let me roam Head turned white under the snow the breath of bronze, The cry of the pottery figurines, Wu Nuo stepped over the fire plow, Soldiers in armor broke through the ice field, Countless voices have echoed throughout the millennia of humanity. Survive then, live or die now.

Where I have already seen the serialization, there are also current updates. I have read no less than ten Dragon Clan fanfics. The biggest feature of this one is that although it is only the second series, it uses delicate writing and strong strength to sweep through both the emotions and the plot! Unlike many articles that slowly push the details of the plot, the author understands what we want to see, and turns so many regrets in the dragon family into their own small blessings. It is about working hard to live for a better and promising future. Uesugi Yue will recognize his three children, Chu Zihang will not disappear, the little monster will live happily with her Ultraman, and even Fingel may find his lost Eva... Always, the book is full of happiness! I wish the author and all readers happiness too! [Blowing kiss] It's super good-looking. I give it a four-point thumbs up. The author will update it soon! I miss you so much in Hangzhou

It's super pretty. I don't dare to give it a high score, but believe me, it's definitely pretty.

This is the second time I read the Dragon Clan fanfic, and the plot is not draggy so far, which makes up for all the regrets of the main text. The plot with Eri is really sweet. After reading the fanfic, I found that Jiangnan's writing style is really strong. The author's writing style is not like Jiangnan, but it is very enjoyable to watch. People who have not read Dragon Clan can read it, but there is not much gratification. I usually don't like to review books, but the author asked me to review it because I was worried that the author would not write. This book is really well written, good luck to the author

It's a very good fan work. Although it doesn't have the same feeling as Jiang Nan's works, it still fills a regret in my youth. It looks good, but I have to lower my rating to avoid being removed from the shelves.

Those who like to watch the original version of Dragons can try this as a contemporary meal. The plot inside is very sweet, especially the ones about traveling with Eri. Very well written. The characters' designs are basically based on the original work. Score a score. This book is really good, don't miss it if you like dragons.

Yes, this is the genuine Dragon Tribe (just kidding) I'm talking about my personal opinion (I've read too much of Brainless God and Hao Wen, and I feel that this book is not brainless enough and not pretentious enough🖊️, but this is better and can make my enthusiasm for this book last longer. It's easy to lose interest in books that are too pretentious). Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

The writing may be a little inferior to Jiangnan, but it is better than 99% of the Dragon Clan fics on the market, and the plot is very reasonable. No one died this time, everyone had a happy ending, and Eri is also very sweet.

I feel like the author really wrote it well! It's not OOC at all. It's one of the few good articles I've read. Some of the articles I've read before have so many personal settings that I find really confusing. Although the author has some personal settings, I can at least understand them. I really hope that the author can keep writing more. For me (I've read quite a lot of fan fiction), it's really hard for an author like me not to add something to the main character: I'm reborn. I'm the best in the world. I despise everyone. I actually really like the fine writing that describes ordinary life. It really pokes me.

The writing is good, which makes up for the regret of focusing on one part. At least it is not as frustrating as the original work.

This book is really good, um, it's quite sweet, very sweet. It has a single female protagonist. Of course, you can't be stubborn. You can follow the author's settings in some places, but overall it's harmless [shy]

The words are very beautiful, and the most important thing is that it's fun to read.

I have read nearly 60 Dragon Clan fanfics, some of which I stopped reading before I finished them, and some of which the author stopped updating. The author wrote this article very well, although I have not read the real dragon family. Maybe this is my regret. People who are too timid to read a book will have a life worse than the bad boy in the novel. They only dare to seek the warmth that is not mine in the false world. If any book friends read this paragraph I wrote, there will not be many surprises in this book. I can guarantee that

Old Dragon fans are ecstatic! Found a fairy fanfic! The author is definitely a true fan, and his writing and conception are all online, perfectly replicating the dragon world in my heart. Watching Lu Mingfei cheat all the way to reverse the tragedy, especially the sweet interaction with Eri Yi, is so sweet! Believe me, this is the ending we most want to see, and we will feel good all day long after watching it!

Fans of the original novel can come and take a look, it is highly recommended, but the writing style of the fanfic is relatively better. Everyone here has a happy ending and everyone is not brainless.

My vocabulary is very small, but it is really beautiful. Everyone in the Dragon Clan has their own regrets, but the author has done a great job of making up for the regrets, but the author should update it quickly. I can't get enough [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [sending heart] [sending heart]

After reading Dragons 1-5 and Restart 4 in school, I felt so empty that I couldn't finish reading any novels. I kept thinking about making up for the regrets of the Dragons until I read this article, which filled the regrets in my heart. Regardless of the characters, it was well written [Like]

There are so many people who have scored points, and I am not the only one, so I will give you a good review😋 I started watching Dragon Clan in the past two months. I just finished reading Dragon Five. I felt chest tight for a long time when I saw Long San Hui Li Yi's death, including the fact that Lu Mingfei had always liked Chen Mo Tong, which made me very uncomfortable. Anyway, the Jiangnan old thief deserves to die [smile], but I really felt comfortable reading this fanfic😋😋😋

It's a good watch and I enjoyed staying up late watching it.

It's really beautiful. There may be some minor flaws in the early stage, but overall it's very good, especially when I see the little monster. The scene is so romantic that I feel like my eyes are going to pee [crying]

It's so beautiful, but it's discontinued. It's so uncomfortable. The author, please, please write quickly.

Love to watch, Eriyi is cute [blowing kiss]

It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good and written with great ingenuity. It can be seen that he likes the dragon family very much and loves writing. I believe that the author will also have very good works in the future. In fact, I suggest that the author can write some more literary works.

Indeed, as the title of the book says, it satisfies my fantasy about Dragon Ball since junior high school. Most of the plots are what we want to see. However, I feel that the author can still improve a lot. If he strengthens the narrative logic, it will be more perfect. Good luck to the author⛽

This is the best dragon novel I have ever read. The writing style is detailed. Unlike other fanfics, there are many details. Even those who have not read it will know what is going on. Moreover, the acquaintance between Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi is just right. The author will update it quickly [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

I like the fan stories written by the author very much. After reading Ryuu San, the part about Eriri sleeping in the deep well became something I couldn't get over. The story written by the author fulfilled my wish. Thank you very much [I almost cried] [Aggrieved] Forgot to rate