The Villain's Junior Sister and the Male Protagonist Long Aotian Are HE

1. The early stage was pretty good, with the arrogant "eldest lady" heroine, but the author has been emphasizing "male protagonist's harem 1v5" (even if it is labeled 1v1, eh. (´･_･`)). Although it is emphasized through the perspective of the heroine and the barrage perspective, there are too many times, which is unpleasant. 2. Secondly, the heroine's design has changed in the second half of the story. Her "edges", "personality", "arrogance", "willfulness", "viciousness" and other character labels that highlight the female goose's personality seem to have been erased by the author. On the contrary, it is in line with "the gentleness of the women in the male protagonist's harem discussed in the barrage, not losing temper, and the close proximity of beautiful female characters...┐(ﾟдﾟ┐)" 3. The plot (adventure) written by the author is worth reading, but what I think is that the heroine is precisely because of her sharp edges, personality, viciousness and distinct character, which makes this novel fuller for me. 4. Finally, writing is not easy, so I still give it a five-star review. [Sending Hearts]

Very good, finally there is a normal heroine, it is a rare tomato novel without tomato flavor. I like the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, you can feel the bud of emotion, instead of telling you directly that he is in love with her in words. The heroine's character is particularly juvenile, with a slight arrogance, a girlish cuteness, and a desire to be an adult. It's very real and cute. Faced with the future predicted by the barrage, he did not directly accept it, nor was he arrogant and indifferent. Instead, he verified for himself that even if he knew that the male protagonist was the son of luck, he would not suddenly change from the little junior sister loved by everyone in the sect to a licking dog. The heroine is portrayed really well. (Who knows the sense of redemption that comes from randomly opening a book and discovering that the heroine's name is ABB?)

The ambiguous love between the male and female protagonists is very cute, the kind I like. The male protagonist looks cold but is actually just Tom Cat being played with by the white cat [laughing] This novel is not bad, why is no one reading it?

This is the real cultivation of immortality. The male protagonist is upright and kind, not an arrogant and wretched man. The female protagonist is arrogant but indeed capable and capable of stretching and bending. At this stage, it mainly relies on the female protagonist to solve problems. It's not enough to watch! The emotional drama is so exciting! That's how cool it is. Now that I see the goshawk, it feels so good to have the goshawk and Yaoyao dozing off!

It feels like reading a novel written by a female fan, hahaha, there are so many things that I saw in the text the next second I just complained about them in my mind! It is a very interesting book. It feels like it incorporates all the fairy romance (crossed out) and vulgar (crossed out) plots that I have read. It gives me a feeling that I am in control, but every time the plot develops a little counter-routine, the male and female protagonists are particularly exciting. Sometimes my liver twitched while reading it.

Woohoo, it's really beautiful. I opened it before going to bed and saw it at 4 a. M. Oh my god! The male and female protagonists, who are over 70 years old, are confused and have a sour feeling in love. In short, it is so enjoyable to watch that you don't want to sleep. Ahhhh, it's so exciting to watch! The future is promising! The future is promising! I push! I can't find it anymore after reading 139. The first hundred chapters were really good, but I couldn't stand the rest, so I gave up. It's been sitting on the bookshelf for a long time. I saw it today and reviewed it again. I feel like the heroine is a bit frustrated.

I like the emotional drama written by the author 🤓👆 I really like the character of the heroine who doesn't suffer from internal friction and tries to improve herself. However, it feels a bit bland later on. I don't know if it is intentional by the author because she drank water. I still hope that the heroine can maintain her own character. Overall, it is worth watching. 😵‍💫I have been following it for so long, and I am very disappointed. I feel that the author's writing style is getting weirder and weirder, and he also likes to use Internet slang. If there is barrage available, use it, but many locals also use it. Watch the special drama, and then. Now I am still writing about the male protagonist's contact with the girls from the original works. I am watching more and more, and I am getting more and more annoyed. I am particularly disappointed. The heroine's character is also being polished silently. I feel like I am writing a running account now. I don't know the outline, and there are no ups and downs. I stopped following it. It was uncomfortable to watch, and I saw the plot with Qiao. Really, this design is quite disgusting, come on. There will be more and more complaints later.

It's very interesting. Let me just say that it's essentially a sweet novel that revolves around a love story. Both the male and female protagonists have good characters. If you want to see the heroine who upgrades, grows, and cultivates immortality, you can stop reading. I won't be happy if I can't find the logic of the heroine. The little interaction and ambiguity between the two is really great

In the early stage, he was most interested, lively and willful, and quite humane. Some of the jokes were very interesting, but in the later stage, he gradually had some doubts. What does the heroine pursue? After the sect is fine, is she mainly pursuing cultivation? This aspect is quite restrictive. There was a section where she left on her own, and I was quite moved when I saw the sky would be high and the sea would be vast in the future. Later, Lin Guo really turned back to her side, as if the kite that was free was actually still tied up. Emotionally, I seem to like him a little, but not that much. I am always awkward. I feel that I am generally taking advantage of him. He wants to seize the opportunity but is stuck by Long Aotian's aura. Do you love him? I feel jealous, doubtful, dissatisfied, and will not give up until I hit the south wall. Do I hate him? Danger has benefits and cultivation is not gained. Isn't it true that some plots are half pushed, and then when I think about it, I feel like I have lost something, and I start to hate again. Maybe it is that love and hate are not complete, so it is painful. Will all the benefits and luck come to him after harming Lin by chance? If so, it would not be Duolong Aotian. He can learn skills and encounter opportunities around him. It would be good to use him as a detector or a treasure hunter. But after all, in the author's writing, flattening and rounding are not just a matter of thought. I originally saw that there was also the aspect of exterminating demons, but later on, I guess it has something to do with the young master of the demon sect, and I guess he can't get rid of it. Is it actually a heart-throb series? I'm probably a little confused, but overall it's quite interesting.

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, this is the best fairy tale I've read in the past two months. It has no flaws and is fluent in emotion. Well, the main plot is also very good, and the characters of the heroine and the hero are also very good. Well, after all, they are tsundere-faced and cold-faced cute [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] I hope the author can continue and everyone show me it [blowing kiss]

It is very obvious that the heroine will not be accepted by most readers of Tomato. The emotional transition is quite natural and does not distort any character's personality. Although there are still some prominent shortcomings (the amnesia part is not very well written), it can be seen that the author is very spiritual and has his own persistence, and it is a work that can retain people's attention. At least it's much better than most of the movies that score 9 or above but are forgotten once you've seen them. Despite its flaws, the style may be more suitable for the current Lujiang.

Authors who can write emotional dramas are different. This is the first time I have seen this type of male protagonist. Silence, loyalty and perseverance are well portrayed. The emotional dramas are also smooth and steady. They are not painted faces or industrial saccharine. I like them.

This novel is okay. I can understand that the heroine is a villain in the beginning, but later on the heroine will automatically suppress the male protagonist when she is angry. It is not good. If the male protagonist is at fault, why not be angry? I hope I can come back later so that the ratings and viewers can be better.

It looks so cute when I wipe it, why is it so cute and pure? Oops, I keep laughing. Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe. It looks so sweet and pretty when I wipe it. [Crying][Crying][Crying]

The plot is very fast-paced and the relationship is very fast-paced. It's delicious. Delicious. I use delicious to describe it. This is what I should eat. The flirting and flirting with the ambiguous couple. The beginning is actually not the typical vicious female partner and the humiliated Long Aotian. There is no deep hatred between the two, nor is there any hatred for Hai Qingtian. You humiliate me and I hate you. The male and female protagonists are normal, but the female protagonist just has a bad temper. The "original plot" is the kind of male-channeled plot, and it is a very typical plot where the author cannot control the characters and make them OOC, so the barrage in the article is indispensable for the typical male-channeled comments. The barrage in the article made me crazy. It is a typical Chinese comic community atmosphere, and it is worthy of being a classic among gods and men. The collision between the "original plot" and reality made me feel comfortable. I couldn't help but make emotional choices. I feel that face is more important than anything else. I can't lose a little face, which is very consistent with my thinking. In the original plot, the harem has good and "bad", and the bad ones are not brainless or forced to "whitewash". They are quite flesh and blood. When reading love stories, don't come here to pursue the mainstream pursuit of cultivating immortals and upgrading to eldest women. Please ask in the comment area later why the male protagonists don't all grab the opportunities. It affects others very much. What kind of writing goes with what kind of brain. At least this one doesn't follow the Feng Aotian style.

It's so beautiful, why are so few people watching it? Hahaha. Damn it, I read more than 100 chapters in one go. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] The heroine is super cute and the male protagonist is also good and quite sensible. Not bad, not bad. The feeling of pulling between the two of them is super cool. Hahaha.

I can't do it anymore I really laughed to death during the part about the ruthless sword cultivator cuckolding. The author always makes me laugh in some wonderful places. The author will update soon. Today I found that it is extremely fast and looks good. In the future, I will consider whether to consider the extra plot of the original work. How did the heroine die in the original work? I am also very curious about how the heroine and the devil developed in the original work [make faces] [make faces] [make faces] I really want to see [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] Our senior sister has to say something about dog training/.

This setting and pull are really delicious, but I always feel that the writing is a bit stream-of-consciousness. When I saw someone saying that it was like a fanfiction, I was suddenly enlightened. It is like making ten comments about the plot in one sentence. It is quite interesting, but the plot is a bit weak. But there is nothing to say about the emotional line, it is very fragrant and delicious, and both of them are very awkward. For the female protagonist, it is mainly because of the original plot and the strong presence of the harem. For the male protagonist, it is the heroine's aloof attitude, but the male protagonist's unswerving choice of the female protagonist is slowly influencing her. It would be nice if there were fewer plots where the mess was forced to get along with the original harem group! ! You can feel the author's bad taste in many plots! ! (But the little couple's bad fun plot can be modified) The most surprising thing is the role of Qiao Ling'er. At first I thought it was a classic part of the competition between the group and the female, but it is actually not the case. He is not a purely good person with only positive thoughts. Her sect is based on family ties, plus her feelings for her senior brother. She has her own girlish thoughts on these two lines. She will be entangled under the influence of the heroine, but she is also very straightforward in facing her own feelings. There is an idea that it is easy to take the path of "villain", but because of the heroine's personal charm and background, it is not bad, and it is a bright road! The growth line is also promising in the future, and the writing is very pleasing [send heartfelt]

After watching half of it, I figured out why the rating couldn't go up. The characters, plot, and ideas are all good, but the overall rhythm is a bit slow, maybe because of the portrayal of the group portraits. If you watch it at once, you will find that it is constantly "delayed" to complete the foreshadowing or flaws in the past. It seems that I personally like the interaction of the protagonist. I see that although the heaven is set to block it, in order to complete the personality and story of other characters, the scenes are stretched a bit longer. It can be regarded as unavoidable in cultivating immortal literature. The overall flaws are not hidden, and you can take a look at it.

Please add more, more, more, more, it seems to be quite to your liking at the moment, the heroine is not the kind of bad street, I like it, like it, like it [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

A particularly good book o3o Tsundere Kitten x Inferior Puppy! Very delicate emotional lines, not abrupt and very natural. The heroine is really cute and has her own charming personality, and she gets along well with everyone! ! ! I really like the heroine's attitude "I only like people who like me"! The female protagonist has always been in a high emotional position and has not suddenly made any decisions that go against her own character because of the prophet. Therefore, the male protagonist's sour teenage thoughts are so delicious. The early barrage may have been too typical of male videos, so it seemed a little irritating, but the retaliatory barrage and sister Duan commented on it made up for this very well. The writing is humorous and interesting, but the pacing can be a bit draggy later on.

It's so beautiful. It's a sweet story about a super tsundere and cute girl and a man with low self-esteem. I really like this heroine. She has a high sense of compatibility and is very tsundere. Some people may not be able to accept her small flaws, but for me, this character is very plump. The male protagonist is very ordinary. Long Aotian turns into a clingy puppy step by step, and then pursues his wife beautifully. I don't know why the rating is so low. Anyway, the more you look at the later stages, the better it looks! For those of you who gave me a low score and a negative review for no apparent reason, I'll give you three seconds to run away. When I say that the heroine turns into a spoiled wife in the later stage, she is a tsundere, not that she doesn't know how to love. Then I also say that the cool and domineering male protagonist turns into a bitch. What's the reason for the low score? This is not a story with a female protagonist, but a love story. If the female protagonist has flaws, then the male protagonist will not? How come the male protagonist is a jerk and can tolerate his lack of love without explaining it? There is also a female protagonist who cannot make progress by relying on the male protagonist's training. As mentioned in the article, her upper limit is the golden elixir. If she relies on Long Aotian to pick up the spirit transformation, how can you expect her to be good at fighting? Just like if you take the pen and paper of the top student in your class, you will make rapid progress in the exam? Originally, fighting was what Long Aotian was supposed to do. . Don't argue if you have different opinions. I wrote a three-second comment on the low score before and run away. If you don't have eyes and insist on looking at it, you are asking for trouble!

It's so beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The heroine and the hero are good babies with super upright views, and the writing is good. The heroine's baby is a good cat, very smart and cute. In fact, I also want to see the heroine have a harem, haha

It's so beautiful, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, treasure, treasure, exquisite product. Early Junior Brother: It's impossible to like you Junior brother in the later period: If you don't love me, I'll go wash it off [almost crying] Hahahaha, the more I watch it, the better it feels [love]

Very good, it is obvious that the author likes the heroine/female character very much, and the portrayal of the female character is very good, [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] I feel a bit sorry for Pei (in this life). He was inexplicably taken over by his previous self, and his work was not human affairs. I quite liked his personality at first.

Full marks directly! The author has a very interesting writing style. After reading more than 300 chapters, it feels like accompanying the male and female protagonists through their love story. Long Aotian's barrage is also very interesting, and the sense of immersion is particularly strong. Watching Yaomei and Xiaohuan chatting, I just feel satisfied. There is nothing more suitable for a tsundere than a sunshine puppy, and that is the cold-faced cuteness!

Come on, cute novels_(:_‖∠)_~ It's a very good love story. Except for the amnesia scene in the middle, I don't really like reading it. It's okay. Happiness will soon fall in Xiaohuan's hands. Hahahahahaha. The plot doesn't abuse the heroine. It's okay.

I liked it after reading it for a while, but I was worried when I read the comments. I really don't want the heroine to become "a gentle woman like the male protagonist's harem." Love and personality do not conflict. The heroine who shows off her sharpness in the early stage is very attractive. In addition, the author likes to emphasize the big man. I'm worried.

So pretty! The aggrieved and silent Long Aotian puppy is really well portrayed, as well as the heroine, the tsundere dog-training cake. The characters are well created and the emotional transition is also very good. At the same time, some of the narrations are also very interesting, but the ending feels a bit rushed, and there is a lot of consciousness in the middle. Hahahaha, this article is very cute, it is rare to see such an article written by Tomato. Good reviews! ! !

The rhythm of this plot really made me happy. It didn't drag on. It's about 50 chapters into the later stage, but it didn't feel particularly fast. The early stage was really easy. My favorite part was when the barrage scolded the heroine, and the heroine ordered the hero to do his work. Yes, she was an honest person to the hero. It was so funny.