Waiting Online, the Male Protagonist Never Follows the Script!

I have read the last chapter, and overall it is good. However, the relationship between the male and female protagonists develops a bit quickly. I personally think that the emotional development between the female protagonist and the original male protagonist (the male protagonist in this book) is not delicate enough, or even a bit fast. The transformation of the female protagonist from being passive to truly accepting the feelings of the original male protagonist (the male protagonist in this book) cannot be reflected. The female protagonist responded to the stereotypes of the original male protagonist (the male protagonist of this book) and the original female protagonist in the original work, and coupled with the male protagonist's male temptation, she had a very close relationship with the male protagonist, and even reached the last step. (The pace is so fast that it feels like a fast-travel novel. This shouldn't be the case, in terms of content.) In view of their emotional development, some plot conflicts can actually be added appropriately. The heroine goes from chopping and group cp, to later the heroine discovers that the plot of the original book does not necessarily have to develop according to the original plot. The heroine of the original book does not necessarily need to You can develop a relationship with the original male protagonist, you can also live for yourself, you can take the route of female independence, or you can arrange for her to have another person who loves her, but it should not be a balance, arrange it for the sake of balance. If you want to arrange it, I hope it is someone who can discover her unique characteristics and fall in love with her soul and her person. During this period, the interaction between the heroine and the hero of the original book will occasionally become intimate. Their ambiguous period can be accompanied by the psychological change of the heroine towards the hero. The hero of the original book does not necessarily fall in love with the heroine of the original book, it can also be her. No one stipulates who must be the protagonist. Also, the friendship between the heroine and the heroine of the original book is very good. There is no need for girls to conflict over a man. Why can't the two become good friends? I hope it will continue and not be written for the male protagonist of the original book, but the female protagonist of the original book will be written as a bad person and engage in female competition, so that it will become one of the promotions for the emotional development of the male and female protagonists. The last point is that the system that appeared in the middle feels a bit involved. It appears inexplicably and then leaves inexplicably later (whether the system strictly abides by the world plot rules and becomes an obstacle to the relationship between the heroine and the hero of the original book, or it later turns out that as their relationship develops, the world still rotates and will not collapse, and it becomes a supporter.) The source of the system can be explained here, such as repairing the collapse of the plot. This is also very important for the changes in the heroine's relationship with the hero. Finally, I hope that the author's book will get better and better as time goes by, and that more people will discover this book.

It's not bad and looks good. I just don't know if Liang Mo's CP is Liang Shuyao. I hope I won't be a couple with her. It feels too weird. I hope the friendship between the heroine and the original heroine can always be very good.

Can the original heroine not be balanced, or can the independent heroine be good friends with the heroine?

It's okay, it's okay, the ending is good, the male and female protagonists have finally come to the end of their hardships.

Looks good, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it

Beautiful and beautiful, well written

The starry sky spans the world, love defeats time and space, happiness has just begun, and they will live happily ever after~