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Kill the God, Want the Text of Wang Mian (Face)
Want to watch something similar to "Zhu Shen: Finally Become a God? You want me to rebuild it?" Book.
Everything Can Be Killed, Right? How Many Other Fans Are There?
Perfect God Beheading, Ultimate God Beheading, Collapsing 3 God Beheading, Iron Breaking God Beheading, Powerful God Beheading, Dragon Clan God Beheading, Drama God Beheading, Weird God Beheading, Tao Weird God Beheading... Squatting down a book of Gu to behead the God, or beheading the God with a strange beast.
"Zhan Shen" Fan, Just Want the King's Face, "Captain, Run, Beat the Time
Fans of "Zhan Shen" only want Wang Mian, "Captain, run, as long as you beat the river of time, we will meet again!!!"
(The Skinny Zhanshen Is Bigger Than the Drama God) a Collection of Zhanshen Fanfics!
I want to read a book like "I Learned to Kill Gods in a Mental Hospital".
If You Want to Kill the Goddess Channel, Oh Oh Oh, Wait and See If You Can, Don't Force Me to Beg You.
I want to read a book similar to "Kill the God, Change the Plot of BE".
The Captain Is so Handsome! a Book Seeking the Face of the God-Slaying CP King
If you want a female channel, CP is the king.
Families! Seeking to Kill the God, CP King Face, About Two Men, There Is a Shortage of Books!
I want to read a book like "Zhu Shen: After Becoming a Support, I Just Want to Die Every Day". (Leave the amazing sentence, + the title of the book) Please read it clearly before posting. I want two men, not a male and female protagonist. No CP is ok, please! Families! The child is out of books!
Cp Mask Team Member
Please Ask for the Fanfic CP King Face of the Masked God Squad
I want to read a book similar to "God Killing, Coming for You".
Cp Is the King's Face
I want to read a book similar to "After Traveling Through the God-Slayer, I Dare to Tease the God of Time". Is there any goddess-killing heroine whose cp is king-faced?
Zhanshen (Double Male Protagonist) Please.
It doesn't matter as long as it's a male, and the protagonist is also a male.
Kill the God, Both Men and Women Are Fine
If You Want to Kill a God, It's a Joke for a Couple of Men.
I want to read a book similar to "I'm Killing Gods as a Pendant".
Zhanshen Has a Relationship with Masked Team or Joins Masked Team with Dual Male Protagonist CP Wang Mian
Want to watch something like "Zhan Shen: Is My Brother Li Xuan Reborn?" ! Book. Two male protagonists or all! ! !
God-Killing Fanfic, Two Male Protagonists
Ahhhh, is there any fanfic about Tsukigami and Uzumaki? ୧⍤⃝🍎































































The writing is okay, and the plot is okay, but there are a few problems that I feel are common to newbies. There are three or four events that are written too simply. I just tell what they did and what they did after that. After writing this event in one or two hundred words, it is like going to the amusement park to play. In my impression, it only describes what they played and what they played after. Of course, it may also describe their reactions, but it is summarized in one sentence. Also, there are too many embellishments, which affects the sense of immersion and makes it uncomfortable to listen or read. It is a bit like writing an essay. I don't want to feel like I am writing a web article. I feel that the most important thing about a web article is the sense of immersion, allowing readers to be immersed in the situation. If there are too many, it can easily feel like the word count is being squeezed. I only think of these two problems at the moment, and they should be considered the two biggest problems. The other problems are not big. When writing, the author can try to be as detailed as possible, describing more of the character's demeanor, actions, and language. The most important thing is more language and action, and less embellishment. The appearance of those embellishment sentences in key places can enhance our sense of substitution and imagination of the scene at that time, but too much is definitely not enough. I hope the author can write it well, I really like this idea, please give it a try! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
The writing style is calm and elegant, with a bookish feel, which makes people feel at ease when reading it. There is warmth, character, and thoughtfulness between the lines. It is written in an eloquent way without any hurry or slowness. Each article is worth reading carefully and repeatedly. The author's book is very beautiful (^.^)
Well written! ! Love watching it! !
Good-looking ദ്ദി worth recommending^_^
I think it looks good
It's pretty good, but the update speed is a bit slow.
It looks good, I like it, and I think the author is so cute
Not bad, you can watch it, it's pretty good
Well, I can only say that it looks good and the writing is very good.
It's pretty good, a bit of a Mary Sue, a bit familiar with the routine [face covering]
The author writes it very well. I like this protagonist so much.
The writing is really good! [Send heartfelt message]