Online Game: The All-Class Artisan

There are very few books that can be said to be thoughtful and precise in language control. The plot needs to be polished. For example, when Bach was able to break away from the constraints of the system, would there be some instant changes or the feeling of opening up the meridians? Just a little personal advice. It doesn't matter, the author's writing style is already very good among online articles nowadays.

This book might be able to blur the damage values ​​and not write them in such detail. You can refer to the levels in fantasy novels and re-edit the levels and weapon levels using settings like Western fantasy. I feel a little uncomfortable when I see the position of Chapter 100. The span is too big and it's uncomfortable.

Objectively speaking, the concept is novel, the story is interesting, it can be read, and it feels like it could be made into an anime.

Okay, I have seen Chapter 130. The structure is good so far, the plot is not cliché, and it is different from ordinary online games.

Okay, the thinking logic is good, a lot of suspense, no pitfalls

Smooth logical thinking

It looks good, has a sense of reality, and also has the sense of adventure of a fantasy game. Like it very much

Not bad, not bad, five-star praise.

You can watch it with your brain

As a bookworm, I say it looks good and is my cup of tea. Thank you author.