Dear Gods, Please Stop Pursuing the Heroines and Villainesses Without Permission

Once connected, the storm will rise, just a system is at your fingertips Lord God, wear it quickly and with moderation, your heart is sweet, and you have no sorrow or joy. When I first met the male protagonist, he was full of anger. He threw stones first and then sent him back to the west. The will of the world, very angry, rescued it for fun The gods have fun, apply their real names, learn from each other, and the desserts come first The two heroines were attracted by him, and they reunited and had a lot of joy. First travel through reality, then come to cultivation, and now rush to Western fantasy God is above, data is king, there are pursuers behind, just because of you Let's see how it develops in the future. I'll give you a five-star rating here.

Very good-looking, super good-looking ~ the heroine is invincible, has a slightly cold temperament, and feels that nothing can impress her except desserts ~, and there is nothing that makes her feel aggrieved. For example, the original male protagonist in the first world, the heroine slapped him directly. It was originally meant to be photographed and sent, but because of the world consciousness, she couldn't take pictures, so she would not be aggrieved anyway. The other heroine is also very easy to fight ~ The quarrel between the heroine and the system is very funny, although it may be one-sided by the system. The heroine has a super contrasting cuteness. She looks cold and indifferent on the surface, but her eyes light up when she encounters desserts. She is not silly and sweet, but she feels like an ignorant machine in the early stage. When it comes to the second world, there are some slight emotional fluctuations later. Well, we will talk about the third world after it is finished~ In the second world, he is not like other authors. He just suppresses Long Aotian and makes him unhappy. How do you say this? Developing a series, right? To raise the aloof Long Aotian to be such a stupid person? There are no other words that describe it that are um, disgusting and have too many words, which is diaphragm. Anyway, it is very beautiful 😳😳 In the first world, there are two slices, but it does not affect the protagonist's way of eating desserts at all, and there are no scenes that are too sad. Except for the last scene, there is a subtle Shura field in the early stage, but there are no darker thoughts. Just two slices, the idea of killing each other, and a wonderful sense of peace? In the first world, the heroine didn't have much of an emotional line. It wasn't until the last scene that she felt a little bit reluctant to let go of the two slices. Come on, author, this work is really good~ I hope it won't stop updating. It's a little selfish. I hope the author won't finish it so quickly. It's better to update hundreds of chapters~ Ahem 😳😳

Overall, it's pretty good. The heroine's strong, calm, yet somewhat cute deity setting is delicious. I just feel that the description of the second world jumps a little too fast. Daily interactions are mostly simple descriptions of a few paragraphs. The emotional line between the heroine and Slice (?) Is a bit too fast (in my opinion). It may be that there are many missing scenes of specific interactions. Slice's inner emotional changes seem a bit sudden. The feeling of admiration, dependence and admiration turns into a crazy, paranoid and possessive love within a few chapters. Although I know that the author may not want to prolong the story too much and want to write a plot quickly to get through the world, but the process of describing emotions is really strange. It feels like the character is OOC and I suddenly fell in love with it inexplicably. It can be written more slowly. A longer time-travel article won't be a hindrance, and for gods, the state of mind that has been polished by long years cannot be changed so quickly. Then I would like to praise that the author's description of those vicious passers-by is very good. They are malicious but not too excessive, and they are slapped in the face immediately afterwards. It is a bit refreshing and can promote the perfection of the story and character image. There is no over-description that will produce a strong resonance for the victimized group. The feeling of discomfort and disgust due to strong and pure malice is completely unfeelable in this article. This kind of description is moderate and a bit relaxed and fun 👍 ❤️ The author's responses to comments are also quite positive. Many of the ridiculing comments in the comment area will be replied from the heroine's perspective. There are also some small theaters that further improve the heroine's personality charm and character traits. Overall, it's good. The author is good, the heroine is good, and the supporting characters are good. But the emotional line could be adjusted a bit. Everything else is basically fine.

It's quite good-looking. The heroine solves problems and is very strong. She doesn't suffer any grievances. Moreover, I particularly like the contrasting cuteness of the heroine. I particularly like the first world, probably because there are two slices, so sweet that I rolled on the bed! At that time, the heroine was still a little cold, and only had eyes for desserts. In the end, she was a little reluctant to part with the two slices. I personally think that the early stages of the second world are a bit dull (mainly because I have no patience), so I didn't read much in the middle and skipped directly to the last few chapters, which is very sweet😋!! Then the heroine may have a little more emotion when she leaves at the end than in the previous world. The third world is really exciting. This kind of magical world-like theme really irritates me! So when I saw the latest chapter, I looked at the world again! In this world, the heroine will miss her after sending the slice away, but she doesn't know why. It's so sweet that I can't even put it down in my mouth. I haven't finished reading the fourth world yet, so I won't talk about it yet. Finally, I hope the author's book can attract more readers and be updated steadily!!

This article mainly tells the story of a heroine who is paralyzed and rational in the early stage (the initial god is set and has almost no emotions) who sticks to different worlds. Later, emotions are gradually added. There are many supporting roles but different characters have similar personalities (for example: yandere). The writing and plot are rare and have no poisonous points, but there is nothing outstanding. It may be a bit boring after watching it for a long time, but the high activity of the commentator is a bonus. If you like to watch 1v1 two girls, you can try it

It's very interesting, but I hope you won't write the secondary CP of the two male protagonists (it's a bit shocking about the two male protagonists). Please 😘

The author also has his own period of new beauty (wu A very promising book Some kids, don't let me catch you maliciously lowering your scores😋 If you don't like the way you click the exit button in the upper left corner and your money will be confiscated, it's too much to just let it go. The writing style and plot are a bit green, and some parts are a bit abrupt, but there is plenty of room for development (it's obvious that Lu Jiang has eaten there before) I would like to make some suggestions based on my experience of watching Tomato from Lujiang for so long. Tomato is different from Lujiang. Most people may not understand what some "proper nouns" mean, such as slices. Some people do not know how to read the introduction. I suggest that the first chapter of the first chapter explain the lightning protection points or give some tips. Furthermore, it may be a hand habit that novice writers like to have. In order to show their children's abilities in certain aspects but it is beyond their own knowledge or cognitive scope, it would be a bit embarrassing to show them with only a little knowledge. You can avoid the important points and just touch them lightly. Most authors who write well have their own emphasis on parts. Come on. The previous sub-volumes can also be optimized. It is best to clearly see which ones and which ones are a small world. After all, the advantage of the quick travel novel is that it can be viewed selectively. (To be honest, Lujiang really has a few good quick-travel books. If necessary, you can recommend them. And if we focus on food, I think some of the food characteristics written are a bit broad and not distinctive and attractive enough. There could be more enjoyable articles, after all, this is Tomato's article, and the excitement will really attract many readers. For example, the world of cultivating immortals is too bland, and it can be more exciting and pretentious, but it is strong enough. Although pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is very childish, it is already very satisfying. However, it is best not to pretend to be a pig for more than one chapter. It is the real meaning of being happy in time. I'll add something later if I think of it. I rarely write this kind of comments. After all, many of them are very jerky and give up after reading two chapters. The author is quite cute. The end of the chapter is used when the author has something to say. It just lacks the automatic thank you gift setting.

It's a very good-looking story, and overall it suits my taste. The creation of the heroine is also quite successful. The progression of emotions is relatively smooth and not abrupt at all. The grasp of the character's psychology is also quite good. I have only watched two small worlds so far, but the overall plot is very complete and the foreshadowing is well done. , The protagonist's understanding of emotions is step-by-step. At the same time, the protagonist's identity as an ancient god and the protagonist's extreme obsession with desserts have a certain sense of collision. There will be a strong contrast and cuteness, and the author's own thoughts are also very cute. I am looking forward to the author's follow-up plot of this book.

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It's very interesting, the author's writing style is quite delicate, and the logical thinking structure is also okay, but the emotional description written in some places may be a little abrupt. The author can also polish his writing style. Overall it is quite good, especially the emotional scenes that are a little bit more gradual. I am looking forward to the day when our god is completely eaten. The collective consciousness of many slices has only one purpose "to make the god belong to us forever". It is quite touching. I look forward to the author's follow-up update of Xiaolong. I am looking forward to the day when the god is completely destroyed (´▽`)ノ♪