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Please Make the Protagonist Look Like a Human Machine in the Eyes of Others
Is there any novel in which the protagonist's perspective is normal, but in the eyes of others the protagonist's behavior is weird, like a personal computer? It is best to have no CP.
Seeking High-Quality Articles from Jue District Zero
The more the better, there is a shortage of books, anything is fine
Absolute Zero? Poke Area Zero! (The Dog's Head Saves Life)
Excellent Book Recommendation
I want to read a book similar to "Zero My Agent Life".
Absolute Zero! I Want! Absolute Zero!
I'm Looking for a Book from Jue District Zero. Now When I Open the Community, Everyone Has Read the Tag.
Want to watch something similar to "Zero: Virtual Hunt"? I tell you to seal your sword and remove your armor! Book. Not picky about food, just looking for new books
Absolute Zero, No Harem, No Stallion, Dude Is Very Pure
I want to read a book like "Zero Zero: My Survival on Six Point Street". I want to see something more pure.
Want the Latest 📚, Don't Get Involved If It's Not New
Extremely High Quality! Rush! Rush! Rush!
I want to read a book like "Zero Zero: Don't mess with the system, I am a gentleman". Is there any high-quality Zetsu Zero fanfic? I want to eat fine chaff.
There Is No Fine Chaff in Jue District Zero!
If you are not convinced, come and argue! 🙃
Is Juezuzero's Traffic on Tomato Suppressed?
I want to read a book similar to "Zero Zero: White Death". Recommend your own book, pure love harem, all-inclusive, invincible, relaxing, funny, daily, fighting, everything you want is available. Because you are new to Yeluzi, your writing style is quite counter-intuitive.






























In the ■.■ Version, we will welcome a new member of the sixth anti-air course - Yun Che Yun Che is an S-level offensive agent with the You Feng attribute. He is good at killing the enemy with one strike when the enemy is out of balance. Normal attack: sneak attack Short press the normal attack to release up to six attacks, of which the first, third, and fourth stages have long-distance pursuit capabilities. Long press the normal attack to consume ether energy to launch [Flying Knife], [Flying Knife] has an instant killing effect on normal enemies. Special Skill: Binding Generates a gravitational field that affects the actions of enemy units and reduces their defense by 10%. Enhanced special skills: annihilation Consumes energy to release enhanced special skills: annihilation, causing a large amount of damage to the enemy target with an additional damage of 5% of the upper limit of life, and making Yun Che rush forward. Dodge counterattack: hidden front Dodge enemy attacks and lunge forward Finishing Move: Time of the Hunt After releasing the finishing move, the Ether Curtain is opened: Mining Guang Yunche's critical hit damage is increased by 40%, and the critical hit rate is fixed at 100%. Energy recovery efficiency increased by 30% When you press and hold the attack button, the [Flying Knife] existing on the field will be automatically recovered. When the number of [Flying Knives] reaches five, the enhanced special skill: Obliteration is replaced by the enhanced special skill: Blade Attack. Enhanced special skills: Blade attack Gather enemy units within range Has an obliterating effect on ordinary units It has a beheading effect on elite units whose health value is less than 20%. If the enemy is a notorious unit, a "Part Destruction" will be triggered, causing damage equal to 10% of its maximum health.
Yes, the title is eye-catching. Just remember to fill in the title pit. It is a book with great potential. Write it well. There are not many people, probably because it has not been recommended and school has started. If you write about 200,000 words, the number of people will increase. Write more and save more articles. I will give more rewards in the future. I am optimistic about you, brother (you must have more tonics and female protagonists to wake up and shift). I am very happy to see that so many people have read the author's book. I have been busy with life lately and haven't read much. The author should work hard when I come back. I hope the author has reached one million words. Come on🤓🤜🏻
It's very interesting, not the kind of crazy story, nor the kind of big-headed one. The characters are not OOC, and the character of the protagonist is well written. Most importantly, the fighting is well written and can stimulate the readers' imagination. Moreover, the protagonist is powerful, but not invincible. It would be better to write more about the protagonist's training process. Being able to watch the protagonist become stronger step by step is also a kind of enjoyment for old bookworms, just like Samsara Paradise or Battle Through the Sky. In summary, if the plot, characters, story, combat, logic, becoming stronger, and daily life are all taken into consideration, then this will be a masterpiece.
The relationship between the characters is not delayed, and the creation of the original characters is also explained in the just-updated extra chapter (and the author said that the extra chapter is useful). I still like the doctor very much. Some things have not been expanded upon due to space reasons. At present, it is the relationship between the protagonist and Phaethon, the main content of the protagonist's time travel (although this is dispensable, blah blah blah and the like. I only know so much, and my ability to summarize is not strong. Is the heroine Ya? Probably, that's right. @ Preacher yes The human-machine section chief will not encounter an AI assassin, hahahaha
To be honest, the quality of this book is really at a higher level among JueZuZero fans. The vocabulary of the article is not exaggerated, but it does not seem stiff. The plot is not a usual re-skin, but has its own innovation. The most important thing is the character design. There are many Hoshimi Masaru as the heroine, but there are only a few who can grasp the character of Ya well. It is really uncomfortable to see Ya's inverted or love-minded plots in other books. The kind of books are purely to satisfy his own yy. The author has a good grasp of Ya's cold outside and warm inside, with a touch of human-machine character. It makes people feel comfortable and does not feel out of touch. The emotional progression of the characters is very comfortable. It is not dramatic at the beginning, but gradual. Although some people may think that this rhythm is slow, but I think this kind of rhythm is the love process that two people who are devoted to martial arts and have no emotional experience should have. I probably won't have time to read novels until the college entrance examination. Although it's a pity that I can't keep up with the novels, I'm very happy when I think that I can read dozens of them in June. Good luck to the author! ! ! [Blowing kiss]
Look at it so far. There are no shortcomings or poisonous points. At least that's what I think. The characters are not OOC either. Yeah, you're pretty detailed about the emotions between the characters. It can be considered a good above average book. The author will update soon.
Very nice to look at. The author's daily writing is very touching, and the human-machine flavor is almost overflowing. It is very consistent with the character. Even if he can write this kind of article, I am a little worried about the author's intelligence level in real life [smile][smile][smile]. And the sweet part is almost too sweet for me, and the fighting scenes are not bad. It's been a long time since I've finished reading a novel, and I felt depressed after finishing it [crying] [crying] [crying]. I haven't recovered from reading it for three hours now. Keep up the good work, author, and look forward to the next one. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
I can give it four stars. The pace of this book is very slow. If you like daily life, you can read it. Judging from the gorgeousness of the words, the author's writing style is quite good, but some descriptive fragments are repeated too much, which makes it look a bit awkward, as if the word count or AI is running out (if not sorry), and most of the 1 million words in this book seem to be made up by describing scenes and repeatedly describing the appearance of characters, so sometimes people feel anxious or incomprehensible, but as a zzz article in foreign persimmons, it is definitely passable and worth reading [Like]
The writing power is definitely top-notch in Tomato, and the detailed descriptions are very beautiful and comfortable. However, according to the current progress, it takes 11 memories to fully unlock the protagonist's full strength. Currently, only 2 paragraphs [face covering] have been unlocked and 750,000 words have been used. Maybe this is the price of too delicate writing. The main line recommendation is as slow as a snail (not the zero-point main line). It is only the main line for the recovery of the protagonist's own strength. According to this trend, it will take 4.125 Million words to fully unlock all abilities. Okay, now that I've talked about the things I didn't like, it's time to talk about the good points. The two on-camera interactions benefited from the author's powerful writing. This part is very exciting and worth reading again and again. It's much better than those assembly line emotional descriptions. Daily interactions went against the killer's code of conduct. When he was drunk, he was carried away by the heroine carrying a sandbag. The heroine fell asleep and was carefully picked up and sent back to the tent. , The female protagonist accompanies the male protagonist to train, the male protagonist is trained by the female protagonist childishly, and when the male protagonist is injured, he learns to take care of and accompany him in the way he thinks he should be cared for (ps. I think this emotional line is the biggest highlight of the whole text and the motivation for me to read [because I have never played Zero Zone Zero, but it still attracts me to continue reading because this emotional line is so exciting] The two fall in love on the machine) Finally, I praise the author's writing skills for showing the characters vividly before my eyes, as if I saw the two of them getting along with each other with my own eyes. The characters are full of examples (I have never come across any related content about Jutsu Zone Zero before this book), but the author used his writing skills to let me know the image and characteristics of the characters [Love] [Love] [Like]
This is a book about ordinary daily life with delicate writing. It is like a clear lake. The surface is always calm. Only by sinking your heart to explore can you get a glimpse of the surging undercurrent in the depths. This is a cup of mellow and rich coffee. It is full of bitter taste when you first taste it. When the aftertaste spreads over the tip of your tongue, it will reveal a long-lasting sweetness. Perhaps in the hustle and bustle of New Eridu, we need to calm down and slowly appreciate the truth, kindness, beauty and warmth deep in human nature in such seemingly peaceful daily life. This daily reading tells the story of a wanderer who traveled to other places and longed to meet his old friends. After experiencing the ups and downs of wandering, he finally settled down and lived a stable life. The lines are full of the author's self-introduction, integrating all the ups and downs of life into the characters' daily lives, which is thought-provoking. (Daily writing, with a strong sense of substitution)
So far, it seems like a good fanfic. The character descriptions are in line with the original work. The battle scenes are vivid and detailed. The plot is too short at the moment and I can't tell much about it. Good fanfic authors, keep up the good work. It's still too short.
The single heroine is Hoshimiya, but she is actually more of a close friend so far. The author's love line advances slowly, but it is not offensive (because the so-called love line in other books almost never begins, which is also a major feature of it). The main line is not heavy, and the main line time is not yet reached. The main task of the protagonist is to retrieve his memory and live a good life with Hoshimiya(?). The characters are excellent in terms of the original work's fit and the vividness of the creation, and it is worth watching. This article has a feature: the days outside the cave are relatively dull, natural and leisurely, but after entering the cave, the pressure rises straight up (the masked man always hides in the cave to shady the protagonist). There is no malice, but my posture every time I watch it: outside the cave: lying down leisurely with a smile on my face, inside the cave: sitting up! Stand up! It's also a novel experience :) All in all, this novel won my heart, so cheers to the author!
How should I put it? At the beginning, the writing style was very jerky, and some descriptions were too deliberate and patterned. For example, the word "silence" and the state were repeated several times, and the content was also very plain and boring [exploration]. But once in a chapter (I forget which chapter) you said that you learned other styles, my feeling changed. The writing style was not so stiff, and it was warm and delicate (right? Is it because the male protagonist Heya has more scenes and the relationship has become closer? ) Anyway, I like this kind of warm little daily (flirting? [Face covering]) style. The pace is good and comfortable to read. At least it is not like the previous reading method of skipping chapters. Now I will slow down and appreciate your progress. [Thinking] Overall progress is expected in the future. Come on, author [Blow a kiss] (Faster!)
It should be said that this book is the highest quality fanfic I have ever read on Red Persimmon. Each character is portrayed with flesh and blood, and the emotions are particularly delicate. The portrayal of the "NPCs" in life is also deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into the character's experience and the plot of the novel. The description of Yun Che's little changes and the emotional changes between the two characters is very detailed. It's very delicate, and the interactions don't seem cheap. Holding hands once made me happy for a long time. The description of the battle scenes is also very good. In short, this book is definitely very honorable. I think the score should be at least 8.7. Keep up the good work, the author (I only discovered this delicious book in 26 years and read 200 chapters in one go. I am undoubtedly excited😃😃)
It's a very good book, especially the descriptions. The descriptions of the environment (very good and graphic), characters, battles, psychology, and food are really good. I'm not used to slow-burning books (maybe I'm used to fast-food reading), but I can really read this one. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very slow, but the interaction between the two feels like they have already talked, which is very sweet. The writing is really good, I highly recommend it (I'm not trying to flatter you, I just commented after reading it) Of course there are problems, but the update is too slow. The author's OS can be properly included in what the author has to say. Come on author!ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~
Let me start with the conclusion: excellent article. The writing is very delicate, and the portrayal of the characters is the icing on the cake. The author is good at depicting fighting scenes, which is so hearty and hearty that it made me want to challenge my dad to a fight. There are no problems with the plot for the time being, and even if there are, it's okay, because the author listened to the advice, and it can be seen that he really read the comments carefully and adopted them with great care. Finally, if this book is not bad, it can be regarded as a masterpiece by me.
It's good to read. You can read it even if you haven't read it or played it. The battle description is very good. There are some minor flaws in the early stage, but it's okay. I highly recommend it. Many people have read this book but there are very few comments. Do you understand what it means? It's 79, but 19,000 people are reading it. Just start eating. That's right. Highly recommend. The dialogue between the two characters, the protagonist and Hoshimiya, the dialogue really has a human-machine flavor. I want to read more. It's suitable for reading more miscellaneous things. There are battles and daily life. There are stories about other characters. It's not a cool novel. The protagonist's main plot is to retrieve memories, but the Riddler requires brains, or you don't need to use brains. Watch it slowly, and read the comments section after the end to slowly regain it.
I saw Chapter 26 which is a very good virtue. Very detailed for some other novels. For someone like me who has some imagination ability, I can imagine fighting scenes very well.
The characters are good-looking and there are no OOCs. It respects the setting of the original work. The daily plot is not awkward but is very relaxing and can be absorbed. The author is reminded that there are some mistakes and will be corrected in time. [Like] Good food.
It's beautiful, well-written, and has a story. The characterization is not OOC either. I originally thought it would be a mindless sweet story, but it turned out that the life story of the protagonist was also portrayed, which was nice. I think there are two problems 1. The scene is too small, and the story is too limited. No matter it is the mockingbird, Lyra, or anything I watched casually, I didn't write about it. Maybe it's also because of this, the story is very pure and doesn't have any shortcomings. 2 The rhythm is too slow, too slow [crying] Although the two robots are real humans and robots, I still want to eat candy. The pace is really too slow Personal rating 9.4 Take your time and watch
It's good-looking. The protagonist is very engaging, especially when he's with Xiaoya. The dialogue between the two is really interesting. It's so good-looking. I hope to see more of it. The daily writing is also very good. [Blowing kiss]
It's pretty good-looking and not OOC. The author's writing is excellent, but the longer the story becomes, the harder it becomes to write. I hope the author can write an ending that satisfies me (of course, I also hope it's longer, haha. I feel like it's okay to write a thousand chapters with this quality). It's a pity that the current flow of this book is low. The author is doing it purely for love.
The writing style is particularly impressive, especially those about the doctor's autobiography. The writing style is very delicate, and the change in attitude towards life is very interesting. It is a very interesting novel that few people have read. The human-machine sense of the protagonist and Hoshimi Masaru is also very interesting in the description [Adoration]
Not bad, there are many non-main plot narratives, the emotional scenes are slow, and the memories before the confession may feel lengthy, but after watching it, there is a sense of redemption, and the fighting scenes are richly described. If you like watching fighting, you can watch it (I found it troublesome in the middle, but after watching it, I felt that it was not in vain)
It's very good. The original characters have distinct personalities and the original character designs are not too broken. The plot is coherent and the structure is clear However, it is recommended to break down the secrets of characters such as doctors and treat them as side stories, and post them from time to time in the main line. This can effectively avoid problems such as original characters grabbing the spotlight too much and the main line being interrupted.
Nice! The love line has finally developed! It's not easy to get into the machine!
All the fighting plots are very detailed and very graphic. The characters have no emotions, and the emotional portrayal is soothing and rhythmic. They didn't forcefully and mindlessly increase the distance between Yun Che and Ya, they just silently accompanied each other to enhance their relationship, that's it. It's even too slow to add. [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool]
I have read many books, and I have also read a lot of emotional descriptions. The characters in this book are alive. You can read the feeling of life, the kind of life, the kind that does not belong to other people's descriptions, the kind of life that you have seen with your own eyes. This book is really thoughtful and makes people feel comfortable... [Chigua]
The characterization is deep enough and there is no OOC The details are well described and the plot is well laid out. The author's writing style is understandable and the level is very good, especially the setting of the environment and the description of some details are very good. The author perfectly integrates the human-machine elements of the protagonist and Hoshimi Masa into the emotional description and profound content. All in all, a very good book [like] Finished scattering flowers [crying][crying][crying]
It looks pretty good so far, it will become popular, please work hard, author [currently working on the manuscript]