Demon Slayer Simulator: Everyone Keeps Mistaking Me for a Substitute!

What I want to see is freedom and expression, not unreasonable and stupid.

Damn, personally I don't like the plot development in the article. I don't mean to say anything bad about the author. The author writes very well. This is my personal problem. It's just that when I first read it, I thought the players were going to be in the villain camp. Both Aki and Yota felt that they got along well with Onikata, and even felt that Yota became stronger thanks to the prostitute Taro. It's just a bit strange. Demon Slayer Uku Tengen offended Youta as soon as he appeared on the scene, and Yota suddenly abandoned the dark side and joined the Demon Slayer camp to kill Demon Slayer Master? Also, Yota said that he played this holographic game just to play games with the heroine, but he couldn't feel that he cared about the heroine. Although he was playing a game, he didn't have to worry too much, but it was a very real game after all. Earlier, the heroine was angry and said that Yota was not her brother, but because he was almost violated in the game. Such an obvious emotion was not right, but Yota didn't care at all about what happened to his good friend, and he just played his own way, which was very weird. Sorry, this is my personal opinion. I'm sorry if it offends me. Please don't scold me.

It's very beautiful and the emotions are very delicate. I hope it doesn't have any CP tendencies!!! ¯꒳¯ The back part is a little bit toxic. If I feel right, it should be two protagonists, but Yota's character is not well portrayed. I feel that the overall performance is only to set off the heroine, and I feel that the author wants to portray a cute and stupid beauty. However, the subsequent plot creation is not a cute image. It has become a bit stupid and feels useless, and the friendship between the two protagonists is very little... (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ) The above comments are not malicious ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`

The setting is good, the introduction is very attractive, the writing is okay, the heroine's baby is cute and silly, and some of the emotions are also very touching. It feels a bit dark But the key point: I feel that the players written about it are "so miserable" and stupid. They are basically abused by NPCs all the time, including mentally (although the players are abused a lot and don't care), but it is very frustrating to watch, especially Yota, who has been lectured by that ghost, and then Later, he was bullied and looked down upon in various ways, and he also had some inexplicable dark psychology. Then Yota's writing was not very likable, and the plot felt very awkward. At present, the decent villains don't like him like this. Although it is a foil to the heroine, or what the plot needs. . Still hard to accept. Then the heroine's performance was also very unreasonable, and the pace of the plot was relatively slow. To sum up, I don't mean any disparagement. I just want to express my bad feelings and point out some highlights for some book friends. I have caught up with the latest chapter now, and the author will give you a lot of support.

The teacher's writing is very nice, especially the early Kyoko who is a bit dull, but the heartthrob is very delicious, but I always feel that the character of the brother is very strange, I can't put it into words, but I don't like him very much, but I still like Kyoko very much. The teacher's writing is great

The writing is great, and the characters are also very novel. However, there is too little interaction between the twins, and the plot progresses slowly. The twins don't look like players at all, but the characters are successfully created. Kyoko is really as gentle and plain as water, tolerant and has a touch of divinity. Yota, a little sun on the outside who is dark, fragile, inferior and a bit arrogant on the inside, is also very interesting. In the early stage, she looked like two very popular player babies, the tolerant Mingyue and the warm sun. Later, she became more like a control group, one popular and the other disgusted. Many people who watched it hated Yota, but personally I prefer Yota. He always pretended that he was trying hard to survive and crawl towards the setting sun of the moon. Yangta, you are really cute. You are actually soft at heart. You are so smart and calculated but everything goes wrong. You look pitiful and hateful. You are selfish and arrogant but you will also regret and suffer. You will be moved by the warmth of NPCs. As a player, you don't have to care so much, poor Taiyang. The author has already started laying the groundwork. I didn't realize at first that Kousuke was Saiki Kousuke, haha Kyoko has a sense of inhumanity which is also a good part of her character. Compared to the two of them, Kyoko is more like a player, but the two of them are really too weak and they don't feel like the Fourth Natural Disaster at all.

The writing is very good, and it is one of the best Demon Slayer fanfictions I have ever seen. I am really good at writing cute characters, and the settings are so cute. It is very interesting, and it is not at all like some people say, torture for the sake of torture. The plot is very reasonable. Everything is very smooth, the author is simply a genius boss, boss, can't you see your face when you look in the mirror? Because God has no form. !!! Even if I have to go to work tomorrow, it's so good to watch that I couldn't help but stay up late to read it. I wanted to go to bed when I saw it at night, but it was so beautiful that I couldn't help it, so I couldn't help but keep reading it. I'm so worried about being able to go to work tomorrow. I hope I can hold on, boss, boss, you are really good at writing. I clicked in and saw your update, and you came back just today when I saw you. I was really frightened. Don't stop updating, don't leave. The writing is so beautiful. If you don't continue writing, can you bear it? Such a wonderful world, such wonderful writing, boss, boss. I love your confession, boss, please don't stop updating, work hard to write down, and if you plan to go to other places, don't forget us. I saw some comments saying that Chapter 66 was a big surprise. Although I thought the players were a big failure, I didn't expect that this kind of development would be really powerful for readers who want to watch the fun. However, the author obviously writes about growth and wants to describe the growth of Yang Tai, so I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. Boss, your writing is really good. I stayed up late and finished reading it right after I saw you. Isn't this writing good enough? There are some novels that I find interesting after reading them, and I would rather stay up late to read them in one sitting.

After reading more than eighty chapters, this Yang Tai has parents who love him, brothers who love him, and friends who love him. As a result, he felt that this was not what I wanted, and began to feel sorry for himself. He didn't know how bad his original family was, but it turned out that he was better than 9.90% Of ordinary humans. The second brother also wanted to change his relationship with Mingxi, because he restarted time several times, and the eldest brother made games for them. The problem with Yangta in the early stage was that he used Mingxi as a shield. He obviously didn't want to do things, but said that Mingxi wouldn't let him do them. It was obvious that his friends had a high opinion of Yangta, but he couldn't even remember his friends' names. Friends thought that Mingxi controlled the balcony to prevent him from developing and finding Mingxi. Although Yangta beat them all later, Mingxi's troubles were caused by Yangta. I think he's a bit of a bad guy. And there is a feeling that Mingxi can't let go after being attached to Youta, which makes me feel that Mingxi has no choice from the beginning to the end. Youta wants to keep in touch with the heroine, and his brothers will help him maintain it. What does Mingxi have? The Mingxi in the introduction has no parents (he doesn't care at all, he was raised by Yota's family), no brother (the neighbor's brother is Yota's brother first), and only has the friend Yota, who is human and loves to study and read. The one who should feel the most self-pity and self-pity is not there. The one who should not feel the most self-pity and self-pity is shouting that I am pitiful. Moreover, Mingxi has very few scenes, very few. The introduction should be written from Yang Tai's perspective, because the whole process is about his psychological problems and his growth.

It's very well written... The writing style is excellent and the description is also very delicate. So far, there is zero OOC, which is very suitable for my personal taste!

I think it's very interesting. Many people in the comments said that Yota's writing is not good and the plot plan is inexplicable. However, the author originally said that both Yota and Aki have their own character flaws. Yota is obviously just an ordinary person. When his brothers are so good, he must have his own ideas. This is not a cheating game about the fourth natural disaster. The text also There are hints that the game is to solve Yota's psychological problems. Most people read this book probably because of the contrasts and contrasts it shows. Why do so many people think that this is a cool article when they see the game settings? Like what Yota said in the article: "I had high expectations for him, and then I was disappointed when I found out that it was not the case." It is said that the author's writing is not good, but he did not write Yota well. I think the author wrote it very well, letting Yota's unhappiness show all: he will be clever, will make revenge decisions when he has no strength, will not think carefully enough, and will have many and many dissatisfaction, so many readers hate him. But the growth line is also a part of the plot in the book. We are not all great at playing games. If we abandon the article because of this, it is not incomprehensible. After all, we all like mindless and cool articles, but if we express our prejudices about the book without understanding it well, many new readers will abandon the article directly. Fortunately, I read the book first without reading the reviews. After thinking about it, I still feel that I should post my review of this book. I have never posted a review of a book. You can also say that I am biased, but I want people who read reviews and then read the book to know that other people's feelings are not yours, so just read it yourself. The author should work hard, I wonder if I can recruit an author after writing so much~