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I Just Deleted All the Bookshelf😱😭😭
Does anyone have any high-scoring books to save the poor children😭😭
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Demon Slayer, a Female Fanfic That You Think Is Very Nice
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Obsessed with the Ghost, the Heroine Is the Heroine, the Pillar Is Alive, You Know?
I want to read a book similar to "Demon Slayer Twist Ending".
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What I want to see is freedom and expression, not unreasonable and stupid.
Damn, personally I don't like the plot development in the article. I don't mean to say anything bad about the author. The author writes very well. This is my personal problem. It's just that when I first read it, I thought the players were going to be in the villain camp. Both Aki and Yota felt that they got along well with Onikata, and even felt that Yota became stronger thanks to the prostitute Taro. It's just a bit strange. Demon Slayer Uku Tengen offended Youta as soon as he appeared on the scene, and Yota suddenly abandoned the dark side and joined the Demon Slayer camp to kill Demon Slayer Master? Also, Yota said that he played this holographic game just to play games with the heroine, but he couldn't feel that he cared about the heroine. Although he was playing a game, he didn't have to worry too much, but it was a very real game after all. Earlier, the heroine was angry and said that Yota was not her brother, but because he was almost violated in the game. Such an obvious emotion was not right, but Yota didn't care at all about what happened to his good friend, and he just played his own way, which was very weird. Sorry, this is my personal opinion. I'm sorry if it offends me. Please don't scold me.
It's very beautiful and the emotions are very delicate. I hope it doesn't have any CP tendencies! ! ! ¯꒳¯ The back part is a little bit toxic. If I feel right, it should be two protagonists, but Yota's character is not well portrayed. I feel that the overall performance is only to set off the heroine, and I feel that the author wants to portray a cute and stupid beauty. However, the subsequent plot creation is not a cute image. It has become a bit stupid and feels useless, and the friendship between the two protagonists is very little... (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ) The above comments are not malicious ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`
The teacher's writing is very nice, especially the early Kyoko who is a bit dull, but the heartthrob is very delicious, but I always feel that the character of the brother is very strange, I can't put it into words, but I don't like him very much, but I still like Kyoko very much. The teacher's writing is great
It's very well written... The writing style is excellent and the description is also very delicate. So far, there is zero OOC, which is very suitable for my personal taste!
The writing is great, and the characters are also very novel. However, there is too little interaction between the twins, and the plot progresses slowly. The twins don't look like players at all, but the characters are successfully created. Kyoko is really as gentle and plain as water, tolerant and has a touch of divinity. Yota, a little sun on the outside who is dark, fragile, inferior and a bit arrogant on the inside, is also very interesting. In the early stage, she looked like two very popular player babies, the tolerant Mingyue and the warm sun. Later, she became more like a control group, one popular and the other disgusted. Many people who watched it hated Yota, but personally I prefer Yota. He always pretended that he was trying hard to survive and crawl towards the setting sun of the moon. Yangta, you are really cute. You are actually soft at heart. You are so smart and calculated but everything goes wrong. You look pitiful and hateful. You are selfish and arrogant but you will also regret and suffer. You will be moved by the warmth of NPCs. As a player, you don't have to care so much, poor Taiyang. The author has already started laying the groundwork. I didn't realize at first that Kousuke was Saiki Kousuke, haha Kyoko has a sense of inhumanity which is also a good part of her character. Compared to the two of them, Kyoko is more like a player, but the two of them are really too weak and they don't feel like the Fourth Natural Disaster at all.
The setting is good, the introduction is very attractive, the writing is okay, the heroine's baby is cute and silly, and some of the emotions are also very touching. It feels a bit dark But the key point: I feel that the players written about it are "so miserable" and stupid. They are basically abused by NPCs all the time, including mentally (although the players are abused a lot and don't care), but it is very frustrating to watch, especially Yota, who has been lectured by that ghost, and then Later, he was bullied and looked down upon in various ways, and he also had some inexplicable dark psychology. Then Yota's writing was not very likable, and the plot felt very awkward. At present, the decent villains don't like him like this. Although it is a foil to the heroine, or what the plot needs. . Still hard to accept. Then the heroine's performance was also very unreasonable, and the pace of the plot was relatively slow. To sum up, I don't mean any disparagement. I just want to express my bad feelings and point out some highlights for some book friends. I have caught up with the latest chapter now, and the author will give you a lot of support.
It's really super pretty! It would be better if the author could update it stably [adoration][adoration][adoration]
At present, it seems that the heroine is clumsy because of the setting, but this cute character sitting there and being kissed by everyone is also very interesting! After a while, continue reading. The author must insist on rubbing your hands [crazy] [crazy]
It's delicious. What I like most about this novel is that each character's personality is not OOC. The two original protagonists are not said to have established their personalities at the beginning, but then suddenly and strangely change. It has always been a very logical and normal direction, which is very reasonable, so this kind of plot will not be unwatchable. It's comfortable. It doesn't say the big hand of God. Suddenly, the protagonist has been manipulated and then leads to a weird ending. Without this situation, it just gives people a really alive feeling. And here we are also looking forward to the follow-up plot of Yota. I am also looking forward to the clues buried for Yota. How is it specific? I feel that the heroine's baby is currently due to talent issues. I heard that there will be a growth line for the heroine's baby in the future. I am looking forward to it. Then the Tianyuan section was really meant for me to read. I felt so guilty for a moment that I was attacked across the screen. It was really well written and I felt so happy to read it directly. Another point is that I saw that many people were talking about the fourth natural disaster, but the conversation between the eldest brother and the second brother can also be seen. This is to cure Yang Tai's psychological problems. It must make her feel a sense of substitution. If it is really just a single If you just play a game, it is of no use at all. The elder brother will definitely consider this situation, so now Yang Tai, his subjective perspective should be a real world. I believe that the elder brother definitely has this strength, so don't put pressure on Yang Tai. Everyone, he was so miserable that the second brother came to the elder brother specially and felt that it was too much. He already had psychological trauma, and then the plot overlapped, which once again increased his impression of the past. Ouch, please stop putting pressure on this child. It makes me feel bad just looking at it. A story should have its plot line. If it's the kind of exciting story that keeps singing all the way to the Internet, except for the funny plot, it's actually hard to watch if you read it too much. On the contrary, I think this kind of plot is very interesting. I've been looking forward to the following plot. The author will add more and more.
I feel that for the current plot, as long as you ignore that the balcony is also the protagonist, you can watch it perfectly [Thinking] (I really forgot that Yota is also the protagonist while watching it) My review of this book is: as long as you don't take the player's setting to heart, it's okay (part of the reason why I can accept it is because I really don't think of Balcony as the protagonist, I just think of him as the second male lead, so I think he is a character who can be persecuted, and Ming Xi's plot is okay, so I can continue reading) Although the selling point of this book is that players add meal replacements, the players are only used as background settings. The author's main selling point should be meal replacements. If you can accept this, then read it. By the way, in terms of the current plot, the perspective ratio of the two protagonists should be 37 to 7 (personal feeling, no data support) or closer to 46 to 46 (of course, there are always more baby girls). Mingxi is the main protagonist, and I personally feel that I have suffered less grievances (it may also be that I have a stronger ability to accept, because I have seen a lot of more sadistic ones). Part of it is the heroine's character, and part of it is her talent (I won't spoil it too much here). Yang Tai suffers more grievances, mostly due to his personality. And according to what the author said, the author wants to change the personalities of the two protagonists in the simulation, so the two protagonists should have a slightly aggrieved plot in the end, so readers who need it can save some and read it again.
Love you author, see you tomorrow I really like this book. I hope the author can update it more regularly (.)ノ🩷 It's super nice and the updates are pretty stable now. I'm happy (∩_∩)
Nice! Wow, this is the first time I've seen this. It's like a master. Modo Modo.
Why is the score so low? It's very thoughtfully written. Sanzi desperately longs for emotional sustenance, but he himself has no love. To him, the heroine is more like a star or a physical paper person within reach. The characters are well understood, especially Xiaomei, who is so cute and reckless. Thanks to the teacher for writing this. I hope that the following pages will show more about the setting and story of the heroine.
I like this book very much. I don't think there is anything wrong with the protagonist. Youta is just a little awkward kid, and Kyoko is also very indifferent (maybe because she has a game mentality). Isn't it necessary to like the protagonist in the protagonist article? Why do so many people ignore a certain protagonist? What do you think if you don't like the protagonist in the protagonist article? It's been a long time since I had this kind of brother-sister relationship. Please don't give up. I really want to see the finale😭. I want to take a bite of family love. Why is it so difficult?
It's good to watch but it's been discontinued. I was originally looking forward to the chapter of Step Kingdom Brothers [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Come back soon, don't abandon us (╥╯^╰╥)
It's very beautiful, I hope there is no cp, but it's too little, not enough to watch [please update]
Ah Yigu is so beautiful
It's quite interesting. I'd rather see the plot where she turns into a ghost and kills everyone. The heroine is a bit frustrated at the moment.
It's very beautiful. It would be great if it could be updated ten times a day.
It looks great, but why are there only 45 photos? Update quickly, hurry up, hurry up
So delicious, it's a new rice, delicious😋
This idea is quite interesting. I have never seen such kind of meal replacement literature before... The writing is not bad, but the progress is a bit slow, and the number of words is not large enough. I can add more.
Well written, very interesting daily routine
Never break your teeth
Very warm feeling
Good looking, novel subject matter ^ω^
I think it looks pretty
The author writes very well! [Sending Hearts]
I hope it's not for CP