Charlie IX: Holding Yao Tingting's Hand from the Start

The writing style is very good. It is not a ghost story explained by science like the original work. It adds weird elements and is quite interesting. The content is very compact. It lacks a more relaxed daily life and the look and feel is quite depressing. Overall, it is good.

It looks good, but it feels a bit messy. I also feel that the protagonist group was beaten a bit badly, and it feels a bit abusive to the main character, but it still looks good.

When are you going to kiss? Tomatoes don't look good unless they turn yellow [laughs evilly]

The writing is really good, but the daily routine is too little, the pace is too tight, and it makes me tired to read. There should be more emotional lines and I would love to read. I hope it won't be unfinished and the updates will not be interrupted. The author promised me to keep writing.

I hope to add more daily interactions. The main plot is too compact and I feel a little tired after watching it for a long time. I can add some daily interactions during the break. The rest is well written and I hope it can be completed. Come on 👍 [Please update]

I think it's okay, but I can't put it into words. I always feel like there's something weird about this book.

The first time I saw the book about Charles IX in 🍅

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and I personally think something is not quite right. First, the protagonist does not seem to trust the members of the DoDo Adventure Team very much. As an old book fan, I should know the character of the DoDo Adventure Team. Second, why does the protagonist blindly hide his bloodline? , After the DoDo adventure team has clearly experienced a similar experience of mental pollution, the bloodline is not very incomprehensible, and perhaps they can also use Charlie and Grandpa Mo, as well as Akers and Arthur later to solve the mystery of their own bloodline (only represent personal opinions and doubts) @

It's nice to watch, but the pace is too fast. The protagonists continued without taking a few days' rest. I suggest adding more characters about the protagonist and Tingting...😍

There is actually a fanfic about Charles IX. I would like to give it a five-star support 🥰 Departing from the original work, the strange events in Charles IX are based on scientific truth. The author directly writes them as supernatural... And the writing is too verbose 🤦