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The writing style is very good. It is not a ghost story explained by science like the original work. It adds weird elements and is quite interesting. The content is very compact. It lacks a more relaxed daily life and the look and feel is quite depressing. Overall, it is good.

It looks good, but it feels a bit messy. I also feel that the protagonist group was beaten a bit badly, and it feels a bit abusive to the main character, but it still looks good.

When are you going to kiss? Tomatoes don't look good unless they turn yellow [laughs evilly]

The writing is really good, but the daily routine is too little, the pace is too tight, and it makes me tired to read. There should be more emotional lines and I would love to read. I hope it won't be unfinished and the updates will not be interrupted. The author promised me to keep writing.

I hope to add more daily interactions. The main plot is too compact and I feel a little tired after watching it for a long time. I can add some daily interactions during the break. The rest is well written and I hope it can be completed. Come on [Like] [Please update]

I think it's okay, but I can't put it into words. I always feel like there's something weird about this book.

The first time I saw the book about Charles IX in 🍅

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and I personally think something is not quite right. First, the protagonist does not seem to trust the members of the DoDo Adventure Team very much. As an old book fan, I should know the character of the DoDo Adventure Team. Second, why does the protagonist blindly hide his bloodline? , After the DoDo adventure team has clearly experienced a similar experience of mental pollution, the bloodline is not very incomprehensible, and perhaps they can also use Charlie and Grandpa Mo, as well as Akers and Arthur later to solve the mystery of their own bloodline (only represent personal opinions and doubts) @

Can the author describe more emotions? There is really too little hand-holding in the whole book, or a little closer

There is actually a fanfic about Charles IX. I would like to give it a five-star support [Adoration] Departing from the original work, the strange events in Charles IX are based on scientific truth. The author directly writes them as supernatural... And the writing is too verbose [face covering]

It's nice to watch, but the pace is too fast. The protagonists continued without taking a few days' rest. I suggest adding more characters about the protagonist and Tingting...😍

It's exciting, and the writing is pretty good, but I feel like the protagonist should be more honest with each other, otherwise when I watch it, it feels like the protagonist is plotting against other people.

It feels good, I don't know why the heat is low. Very good reading experience

This is the first time I saw Charles IX. The plot is too tight. I want to see a little bit of daily life. I would like to give you a five-star encouragement first.

This is the first time I met the fan who wrote this on Tomato [Chigua] Some are too compact. It is appropriate to neutralize and neutralize daily after finishing an adventure.

It's rare to see a book about Charles IX on Tomato, and it's so colorful.

It's okay. It's the first time I've seen something about Charles IX.

Just like the original, my head hurts when I watch it

@ Hello author, I am one of your thousands of readers. Can I ask if this book has a female protagonist?

I hope the author won't stop updating. This is the first time I've seen a movie about Charles IX [Eating Melon]

The protagonist group was fooled throughout the whole process, and the difficulty level was increased so much that the protagonist group had no highlights at all.

It's good to watch, but the pace is too fast. Add some emotional scenes between the protagonist and Tingting.

It looks good [admiration], but the protagonist has awakened 30% of his bloodline in Heibei Street [laughs awkwardly], won't the subsequent settings explode? [Thinking] It is suggested that the author can make a short-term improvement

It's good to watch. I want to see the interaction between Master Yao and the protagonist.

This is the first time I saw this fanfic written on Tomato. I hope it will be updated more frequently. ﻌა

A tribute to my childhood that is gone forever

I hope the author will describe more about the emotional development of the protagonist and Yao Tingting

To be honest, I almost forgot that this thing has a system.

Very well written, please keep up the good work.

The best fanfic I've ever seen