Dinosaur Chronicles: A Velociraptor from the Start

The plot is still good, Goldfinger is also very reasonable, and the writing is also good. One star is missing because of the female protagonists. As a modern person who travels to a primitive tribe, you can see those muscular and tanned women. Not to mention hygiene, can you really clean your mouth without brushing your teeth or something? I can only say that the receptive ability is quite strong. I personally can't imagine that scene. I skipped the intimate scene directly. There is also the Canglang tribe that requires the male protagonist to greet him before joining. It is threatening. There are not many people in his tribe. Let him join for protection, and he also takes Qiao. The other plots are pretty good.

The writing is indeed quite logical and organized. It feels a bit like the movie "The Return of the Wolf". The fight between primitive tribes and giant beasts, the taming and care of them, the simple exchanges and trade between tribes, and the battle with cannibal primitives. The writing is not bad. I personally think that the score is a bit low. I hope the author can update it faster. It is really good-looking.

It's a very good book about monsters, but it's a pity that it's not finished, which makes it not enjoyable to read. Come on, brother who wrote the book.

The narrative is objective, and the functions and strength system of Goldfinger are also logical. The first few dozen chapters are okay, but the rest is a children's book, suitable for those with lower incomes.

It's non-toxic, the plot is smooth, there are no retarded extras, and the data is reasonable. It is a very good ancient tribal text, and it has a certain amount of fantasy elements that are just right. Everything that has appeared so far, in terms of size, orientation, and structure, is very reasonable (it is really a rare treat for foreign persimmons!) Wall crack recommended! Wall crack recommended! Highly recommended!

It's also quite logical, not a brainless novel, it's more objective and real, and it doesn't have too many poisonous points. It's pretty good among dinosaur novels. I highly recommend it.

A very good ancient beast-controlling novel. Although there are some minor flaws, the flaws are not concealed. It describes the life and development of a primitive tribe in the ancient dinosaur era. After the protagonist travels to ancient times, he has a golden finger in his mind. He can use the soul fire in his brain to invade the brains of beasts that have no sense of resistance and control them into partners. In turn, he can slowly strengthen himself. The golden finger is just right. The novel is written online. The writing is smooth and there are no shortcomings such as too many words to drag out the plot. It looks very comfortable. The biggest poisonous point I see is that the author uses smoke to preserve the meat without salt. This may also be considered a blind spot of the author's knowledge. He thinks that the main mechanism of long-term preservation of bacon is smoking. In fact, the mechanism of long-term preservation of bacon is salt. Smoking only increases its taste and flavor and prevents external insect oxidation.

I've finished half of it now. Let me make an objective evaluation first. The plot descriptions in some chapters are particularly AI-like. It's extremely boring to watch. The author references various dinosaur elements. Overall, it is an imaginary world. When looking at this aspect, you don't need to be so serious. Generally speaking, there are very few novels on this subject. Still worth a look.

After watching it for so long, the poisonous point is very small. It feels a lot better. Mainly because there are so many primitive survival stories, this one is pretty good. I think I would quit the other ones after reading 100 chapters. It's really satisfying to tame an animal and then show yourself as a saint in front of people.

It looks good and is of high quality. At least I don't think the sentences are illogical and there are almost no contradictions.