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The plot is still good, Goldfinger is also very reasonable, and the writing is also good. One star is missing because of the female protagonists. As a modern person who travels to a primitive tribe, you can see those muscular and tanned women. Not to mention hygiene, can you really clean your mouth without brushing your teeth or something? I can only say that the receptive ability is quite strong. I personally can't imagine that scene. I skipped the intimate scene directly. There is also the Canglang tribe that requires the male protagonist to greet him before joining. It is threatening. There are not many people in his tribe. Let him join for protection, and he also takes Qiao. The other plots are pretty good.

The writing is indeed quite logical and organized. It feels a bit like the movie "The Return of the Wolf". The fight between primitive tribes and giant beasts, the taming and care of them, the simple exchanges and trade between tribes, and the battle with cannibal primitives. The writing is not bad. I personally think that the score is a bit low. I hope the author can update it faster. It is really good-looking.

It's a very good book about monsters, but it's a pity that it's not finished, which makes it not enjoyable to read. Come on, brother who wrote the book.

The narrative is objective, and the functions and strength system of Goldfinger are also logical. The first few dozen chapters are okay, but the rest is a children's book, suitable for those with lower incomes.

It's also quite logical, not a brainless novel, it's more objective and real, and it doesn't have too many poisonous points. It's pretty good among dinosaur novels. I highly recommend it.

It's non-toxic, the plot is smooth, there are no retarded extras, and the data is reasonable. It is a very good ancient tribal text, and it has a certain amount of fantasy elements that are just right. Everything that has appeared so far, in terms of size, orientation, and structure, is very reasonable (it is really a rare treat for foreign persimmons!) Wall crack recommended! Wall crack recommended! Highly recommended!

A very good ancient beast-controlling novel. Although there are some minor flaws, the flaws are not concealed. It describes the life and development of a primitive tribe in the ancient dinosaur era. After the protagonist travels to ancient times, he has a golden finger in his mind. He can use the soul fire in his brain to invade the brains of beasts that have no sense of resistance and control them into partners. In turn, he can slowly strengthen himself. The golden finger is just right. The novel is written online. The writing is smooth and there are no shortcomings such as too many words to drag out the plot. It looks very comfortable. The biggest poisonous point I see is that the author uses smoke to preserve the meat without salt. This may also be considered a blind spot of the author's knowledge. He thinks that the main mechanism of long-term preservation of bacon is smoking. In fact, the mechanism of long-term preservation of bacon is salt. Smoking only increases its taste and flavor and prevents external insect oxidation.

I've finished half of it now. Let me make an objective evaluation first. The plot descriptions in some chapters are particularly AI-like. It's extremely boring to watch. The author references various dinosaur elements. Overall, it is an imaginary world. When looking at this aspect, you don't need to be so serious. Generally speaking, there are very few novels on this subject. Still worth a look.

It looks good and is of high quality. At least I don't think the sentences are illogical and there are almost no contradictions.

Be truthful and objective, step by step. Not brainless, good-looking

Tomato is one of the few articles that people can read. The author's writing style is exquisite. Apart from the actual biology, the description of the majestic and vast ancient environment, the sincere and real people, and the rich and real ancient life are very impressive. Yes, it is rated T0.5.

A very exciting world of prehistoric beasts

Yes, it's well written and beautiful, but it has an emotional line and a warm flavor. I think it's best not to write emotional lines in this kind of book. This book should be written with the help of artificial intelligence. The description of the environment is very good. Although it is a bit verbose, it is more graphic and can also enhance language skills and writing skills. It is still good.

There is a single heroine fighting for the party or two heroines. It is very unlikely that there will be a harem or no heroine. There is one saying that One Tomato is one of the few good books with some party and political elements. It is worth reading. So far, Xiaobai's stocks have soared. I don't know how Lan Ze competes with Xiaobai. Is it possible that so many people don't like plots of party strife? Are you really not curious who will take down the male lead first? [Eat melon]

Very well written, beyond my expectations. I didn't expect that primitive man➕controlling animals would be so interesting.

From an objective point of view, this book is a breath of fresh air in the animal taming genre, but the emotional drama is really not very good, and it is considered to be edible without the head. The characteristic of this book is that it is easy, but the shortcoming is that it is too slow, almost one chapter in a day.

The overall plot and characters are very good, not big but simple and useful, and it feels like a slightly refreshing novel [laughs] Personally, I feel that the combat power is long and the pace of the story is a bit fast. The details of primitive survival in the early stage are a bit rough, and the sense of dangerous hunting is almost lost due to the dragon pet [laughing] I feel that survival was the mainstream in the age of dinosaurs, and now it is a bit more like tribal wars and hegemony [Thinking] Also The description of the environment alone is very visual, but it's too much like writing. It's a bit long, deliberate and abrupt [laughing] There are only three situations when collecting a dragon pet. The carnivorous one is to take advantage of both sides, and the herbivorous one is making friends in a dull manner, and the egg hatching is a bit too fluid and forced to increase combat power [face covering] [laughing] Overall, it's okay. The minor flaws may be personal preferences [laughing] Highly recommended [Cool]

It's rare to see a novel with such delicate writing style. The slow-paced original novel is not an Ark novel, but overall the author may have made reference to dinosaurs. Apart from the relatively small number of words, there are no other shortcomings.

I'm happy to watch this kind of thing, which is more about survival and living. It also includes combat and strategy, and it's so cool to tame giant beasts. I just don't feel like it's enough. I watched it two days ago, and now only half of it is left. Can the fire energy be changed so that the protagonist can obtain part of the fire by killing the giant beast? Then the protagonist's dinosaur damages some powerful beings, and can also obtain some fire to strengthen the remaining part of itself, returning the protagonist's fire energy.

I have read more than 200 of them now, and they are still very good and well-written. They are much better than some other novels about going back to ancient times. They are particularly attractive and I read them without realizing it.

The plot is rich and very exciting.

It's a good book. I just happened to read part of it recently on My Ark [laughing and crying]. I felt like I was playing a primitive tribal version of Ark. Only I have gems on my wrists that can train dragons and unlock tools. The logic is quite clear. Goldfinger is not too brainless and invincible. I don't know why it is only 7.9. I haven't read it yet. Is the writing broken?

The content is comprehensive, the writing is skillful, and it makes people feel comfortable.

After watching it for so long, the poisonous point is very small. It feels a lot better. Mainly because there are so many primitive survival stories, this one is pretty good. I think I would quit the other ones after reading 100 chapters. It's really satisfying to tame an animal and then show yourself as a saint in front of people.

This book is really good, but it is written too slowly. I plan to wait for half a year before reading it [smile]

I've read dozens of them, it's a pretty good novel [Sending my heart to you]

The score of 8.5 Is fair. I personally feel that since it can contract with behemoths. Then there is no need to strengthen the physical value of the pig's feet. Use giant beasts when you should, and use your brain when you should. Don't always think about rushing by yourself.

It's a very nice novel, not a brainless novel, but it is also very refreshing. It has rich content, delicate narrative, and good writing style.

The logic and the plot are all good, but the emotional line is a bit stretched. Fortunately, there is not much written, but the update is too slow. I finished it in a few days. How fast is the update? This book can be said to be a masterpiece on Tomato

It's very good. Animals from the Cambrian to the Ice Age are present and enlarged, as well as some fusion creatures imagined by the author. Basically all creatures grow until old age and undergo some benign changes. However, if you encounter emotional scenes with the heroine, just skip it. Apart from the emotional scenes, everything else is very good.