The Liangshan New Dynasty of Wang Lun of the Song Dynasty in White Clothes

It's tied. The flaws are not hidden at the moment, and I can give it a score of 7 or above. The minor flaws are that the horses and grain in Liangshan appear out of thin air, the character's force is a bit different from the original work, the strategic issues are all enemies when fighting to the north, and other plot conflicts are wonderful (the minor problem is that conflicts come too frequently, and a villain comes out to slap Pig's Foot in the face after two chapters). The character design is outstanding, and it can be regarded as a good survival story fan. Food and grass can be given +

It's not bad. It seems a bit too hasty at the beginning, and the writing is also a bit anxious. The more you write later, the better it gets. Come on, author. Not bad, I'm a bit addicted to it

Encouragement, I think it's good [you taste it carefully]

Yes, among the unsystematic texts of Water Margin, apart from Sun Dasheng, Optimus Prime, and Master Biao, this one is definitely the one

The writing is still very good. The content is very well written, and Water Margin is written vividly and vividly. I think it can be rated 9 points.

A masterpiece for after-dinner meals

It's okay, I'll give it five stars first.

Very beautiful, love watching it

Well written, keep it up!

With encouragement, it's okay.

Have history and ideas

Not bad, not bad, not bad

The content is well written

Very well written, good luck to the author

Should it be bold or not? Should it be thin? The overall logic is okay, but what are you afraid of when you reveal some prophets appropriately? Some places are very cumbersome.

Interesting! Interesting!

I hope the author will persevere and make up for the regrets of the survival story.

It's okay, but the paragraph is too big. Break it up into dozens of words per line.

I can't stop, I can't stop at all, it's so beautiful

I hope friends can give me more opinions. The first 1-20 chapters will have some flaws because they were just written. Please include them more. Brothers, don't keep books, just read when you need to.

Yes, this Water Margin novel is quite interesting.

The writing is quite good, please start updating it three times a day! If it's too little, it won't look interesting [Like] The first few chapters are slightly flawed, but the writing becomes smoother and smoother in the following chapters, which is great! Come on

The characters are well created and very interesting [smile][smile][smile]

The plot has ups and downs and the writing is rich and colorful

I've read Chapter 50 and it's really cool. The protagonist is brave and resourceful. He has many soldiers and generals, which is great.

The author is attentive, the plot is vivid, and the language expression ability is strong. It is a good book and can be directly recommended. The more you listen, the better it gets. Likes.

The writing is good. One thing is that Wu Song was from Qinghe. Qinghe is now Qinghe County, Xingtai, Hebei Province. In the Northern Song Dynasty, it belonged to Enzhou under the jurisdiction of Hebei Road, so it should not be Qinghe County, Shandong Province.

So far, it's okay. The force doesn't need to be as high as Chao Gai's.