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I only commented after watching a third of it: First of all, the writing style is really good, and the descriptions of each character are very detailed. Because I have only watched the anime and you have read the manga, I personally feel that it is very close to the character's personality in the anime. The description of the second character is very prominent, and the emotions are very rich. It can also save a lot of emotions. As long as you keep writing, and even write more stories about the world, this book will definitely become popular. Come on, the third author. I don't ask for fast writing, but I want the quality to be above the standard, and the story plot to be compact and logical. I wish this book great success. The rating is definitely more than that. Among the Tomato fanfics, this is one of the best. I really don't know why there are still people who are nitpicking. Hey, there are too many impetuous people on the Internet. It's not correct. It's a good book.

The author has read every comment, and I have more or less corrected the logical problems and loopholes in the original work that were objectively pointed out. However, I still bother some readers who are too arrogant and will personally attack and leave negative comments if they don't like it... Tomato is a free platform. If you are really not satisfied, don't read it. That's it, the author earns tens of dollars in advertising fees every day by updating thousands of words every day. Poor performance after the book is scored will directly affect the author's own income and creative passion. Once again, I implore you to hold your hands high. If you are satisfied with it, please give me a review despite your busy schedule. Thank you! ! ! Regarding the matter of delisting, I was confused for two days and appealed twice but failed. Currently, the book has gone through Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba and One Piece, and is currently in the third chapter of the Holy Grail War. The reason for delisting is because two chapters of the Holy Grail War are very similar to other novels. Regular readers know that Tomato fandoms are the hardest hit by delisting, so the author added a lot of original characters and plots when writing (and was criticized by many people for this). However, there are too few plots for the Holy Grail War that can be expanded. In the early stage, I followed the original plot of the game and fell into the trap (it can only be said that there are many authors who have this idea...). First, I would like to apologize to the readers who have always supported the update. It is impossible for this book to be re-released (reusing the old version of the plot after it has been taken off the shelves will also be judged as plagiarism). The author did not even go home for the Spring Festival and did not expect to encounter this situation. . . I will continue to use certain settings to open a new book in the future. All in all, I will rest for two days. Thank you for your understanding.°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡

It's good-looking, not brainless, and the plot is very attractive. Zhuo Yue's description really embodies evil (I had no feelings for him at first, and even felt pity for him because of a book, but now I finally have a concrete image), and the description of the protagonist also left a deep impression on me (there are pictures) Come on, author

This is a living character! The protagonist is flesh and blood, his IQ is online, and his growth trajectory is clearly visible. The supporting characters are all well-rounded and not just simple tools. High-quality novel, 5 stars for you, come on

Except for the flaws in the first ten or so chapters, the writing gets better and smoother and smoother. The logic is smooth, the details are exquisite, and it has its own reasonable originality. At least the first chapter is completed now, which is worthy of high marks.

It's rare for Tomato to write a thoughtful, wise, and capable protagonist, but this one does it. The part where the bad disciples are forced away is more frustrating than any other conflict part. Today, when AI and brainless literature are so popular, it is quite touching to see such novels.

The characters are vividly portrayed, and the supplementary reverie based on the original setting is also very interesting. It is enjoyable enough, with rich elements and no logical flaws. Although it is a new book, the score of 6.9 Is still too low. If the 9.3 On Tomato is considered worthy, then this book will be at least 9.4.

There is a reason for the recommendation. It is non-toxic and can be viewed with your brain. The plot design is very good and the writing is very stable. The disadvantage is that the protagonist is too rational. It would be fun to indulge occasionally but it goes against the character design of the protagonist. I look forward to updates.

"Upcoming blockbusters Disaster Movie: "Breaking Bad" Inspirational film: "Update" Action Movie: "Send the Blade" Horror Movie: "Abandon Update" Liberation Film: "Continuous Update" Detective film: "Who is not updated" Youth Movie: "Update of Leaving in a Hurry" Bitter romance film: "Silently Waiting for Updates" Friendly film: "Brothers, let's update together" Romance movie: "The author's incomprehensible relationship with Xinxin" War Movies: "Updates and Reminders from Authors and Readers" "Great War" Suspense film: "The mysteriously missing author" Family film: "Where is the author?" Science Fiction Film: "The Alliance" Fantasy film: "I am reborn as an immortal in the fairy world" Update Martial arts film: "The Legend of the Hero" Hey, author, which one do you want us to watch?"

I saw Chapter 139 and evaluated it. This book is logical, refreshing and not brainless. The character and personality of the protagonist are set very well. The family relationships and situation of the protagonist may make people think that this is a standard protagonist template, but it is not annoying at all. The relationship between the characters is handled very, very well, and the original characters and their designs are also maintained very well. I like this very much. Many brainless novels are inexplicable and the logic is untenable. Although it is excellent, there are indeed a lot of private settings, so the explanation and logic for this also took time. Impatient people may not be able to watch it. Original setting + expansion of private assumptions. Very clever. At this point it depends on whether others can accept it. Maybe this is also the reason for the low rating. I don't think this book has a rating of 7.3. Although there is a small flaw, it is too low. Not worthy of this book. I suggest you read it when you have enough time. Anyway, I plan to read it after resting on Saturdays and Sundays. Otherwise, if I read it every night, I feel like I can't understand some things. I also suggest that the author can simplify the principles and contents, so that scumbags will not be able to understand it. It was hard to watch. I can't keep up with my understanding, and I'm still a little drowsy [face covering]

I have read Chapter 235 and left a review. The main reason for my rating is [laughing and crying] and [laughing and crying] not enough. The more than 200 chapters are basically demon slayers with a bit more reality, so some people may find it too long. . When I watched Demon Slayer World, I actually thought it was pretty good.

Not bad, not bad, it is written in a big way and won my heart. I like to read it

It's really good-looking, the logic is self-consistent, and the original work also fits the character design. There is a little poisonous point in the first chapter (although the perfect circle came back later, and the pig's foot character design was better improved, but after all, it still persuaded some people at the beginning), come on, author, [shy]

Cthulhu: A false existence, enigmatic and powerful. Studying too much will drive people crazy. Mathematics: real, unfathomable, and powerful. Studying too much will drive people crazy.

There is a reason why this book is so popular. The content is super interesting (I won't spoil it). I couldn't help but read it again and again. Once I read it, I couldn't stop. I praise the author's writing style. It is very delicate and clear. I don't think it is strenuous to read. Five-star recommendation.

It's a novice novel, but the author's writing style is very delicate, and the necessary details are well written. It's a very good fanfic. It's easy to write a novice novel, but it's not easy to write it well. It would be better if the plot of the subordinates in the plot is written more carefully. At present, it is relatively rough in this regard, but it is not considered a poisonous point. Five stars encourage you, come on! !

The protagonist and supporting characters all have online IQs and are not brainless. The overall story framework is similar to Infinite Horror, in that they travel to different worlds. It's just that the mission of the protagonist group of Infinite Horror is to complete the mission and then return to the space. This is a world strategy game, which incorporates some elements of the lord novel. There is also a setting where you can sign contractors from this world and other worlds, and then take the contractors with you to other worlds. It is very interesting. You can take a look.

It's very well written and logical. I don't know why the rating is so low [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

It's probably the second best I've read so many Mankai manga, but I don't know why the rating is so low. There are obviously no OOC characters, and the writing is very consistent with the original work (｡•́•̀｡)

It's not bad. It's one of the few comprehensive comics that I can read. It has a plot where the protagonist takes people through time travel. I feel that it will be a bit toxic for some people. But the overall feeling is good, not mindless, not so special and unreasonable.

I haven't seen such a good book for a long time. I hope the author can work hard and write more every day.

Except for some minor problems, this is a good book. I give it 5 stars as an encouragement. The author should keep writing [OK]

Super super super super beautiful. You are so good at writing. Didn't you just get the score? It is definitely a masterpiece with a score of 9 or above.

It's a rare good book. It's not a noob. The characters are very delicate. The pirates after Demon Slayer is also very interesting. It's not a cliché. It's really good. The rating is too low. It's so beautiful. It's getting more and more exciting.

It's such a good-looking Demon Slayer novel. Why is it only rated 7 points? I give it a big five stars😁

The writing style and logic are good, and the early stage looks very good. If it can maintain the previous quality, it will definitely be considered a high-scoring novel.

This is a novel with soul and depth, providing the ultimate reading pleasure

To be honest, I kind of admire the author for being able to write a completely different world based on the original. It's great. There are also a lot of foreshadowings and the writing is also very good. I recommend everyone to read it.

It's very beautiful. I started watching Demon Slayer and the characters didn't have any OOCs. Now I'm on One Piece. Although I haven't watched One Piece, the author's writing is also very detailed and I can understand it. [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

A great book. The author has his own ideas, settings and worldview, rather than a simple infinite flow. When the gold rush arrives in Tomato 10, I say yes [sending heart]