Becoming a Merchant of All Worlds, Starting with Demon Slayer

I only commented after watching a third of it: First of all, the writing style is really good, and the descriptions of each character are very detailed. Because I have only watched the anime and you have read the manga, I personally feel that it is very close to the character's personality in the anime. The description of the second character is very prominent, and the emotions are very rich. It can also save a lot of emotions. As long as you keep writing, and even write more stories about the world, this book will definitely become popular. Come on, the third author. I don't ask for fast writing, but I want the quality to be above the standard, and the story plot to be compact and logical. I wish this book great success. The rating is definitely more than that. Among the Tomato fanfics, this is one of the best. I really don't know why there are still people who are nitpicking. Hey, there are too many impetuous people on the Internet. It's not correct. It's a good book.

The author has read every comment, and I have more or less corrected the logical problems and loopholes in the original work that were objectively pointed out. However, I still bother some readers who are too arrogant and will personally attack and leave negative comments if they don't like it... Tomato is a free platform. If you are really not satisfied, don't read it. That's it, the author earns tens of dollars in advertising fees every day by updating thousands of words every day. Poor performance after the book is scored will directly affect the author's own income and creative passion. Once again, I implore you to hold your hands high. If you are satisfied with it, please give me a review despite your busy schedule. Thank you!!! Regarding the matter of delisting, I was confused for two days and appealed twice but failed. Currently, the book has gone through Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba and One Piece, and is currently in the third chapter of the Holy Grail War. The reason for delisting is because two chapters of the Holy Grail War are very similar to other novels. Regular readers know that Tomato fandoms are the hardest hit by delisting, so the author added a lot of original characters and plots when writing (and was criticized by many people for this). However, there are too few plots for the Holy Grail War that can be expanded. In the early stage, I followed the original plot of the game and fell into the trap (it can only be said that there are many authors who have this idea...). First, I would like to apologize to the readers who have always supported the update. It is impossible for this book to be re-released (reusing the old version of the plot after it has been taken off the shelves will also be judged as plagiarism). The author did not even go home for the Spring Festival and did not expect to encounter this situation. . . I will continue to use certain settings to open a new book in the future. All in all, I will rest for two days. Thank you for your understanding.°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡

It's good-looking, not brainless, and the plot is very attractive. Zhuo Yue's description really embodies evil (I had no feelings for him at first, and even felt pity for him because of a book, but now I finally have a concrete image), and the description of the protagonist also left a deep impression on me (there are pictures) Come on, author

This is a living character! The protagonist is flesh and blood, his IQ is online, and his growth trajectory is clearly visible. The supporting characters are all well-rounded and not just simple tools. High-quality novel, 5 stars for you, come on

Except for the flaws in the first ten or so chapters, the writing gets better and smoother and smoother. The logic is smooth, the details are exquisite, and it has its own reasonable originality. At least the first chapter is completed now, which is worthy of high marks.

Oh my god, this is the first time I have seen such a rigorous time travel. Other time travel stories are basically a sudden time travel in a daze, without any preparation, and then there are all kinds of inexplicable system plug-ins. The protagonist of this book has considered everything before time travel. It also clearly explains some small plug-ins for the protagonist that are similar to the compass system. It also writes about the process of the protagonist adapting to the small plug-ins. Before traveling, understand the general content of the world to be traveled in advance, and collect the information and materials needed for preparation. It is so rigorous 🥺 🥺 🥺 (I was not transported immediately after getting the plug-in, but took time to talk about the protagonist's reaction) It's a good book The character design of the protagonist is also very realistic and three-dimensional. It is not as abrupt as other time-travel fanfics. The preparations made before time-traveling are really nothing to complain about. (Notify family members and leave a suicide note before traveling) From all aspects, I feel that the author was rigorous in writing this book.

It's rare for Tomato to write a thoughtful, wise, and capable protagonist, but this one does it. The part where the bad disciples are forced away is more frustrating than any other conflict part. Today, when AI and brainless literature are so popular, it is quite touching to see such novels.

There is a reason for the recommendation. It is non-toxic and can be viewed with your brain. The plot design is very good and the writing is very stable. The disadvantage is that the protagonist is too rational. It would be fun to indulge occasionally but it goes against the character design of the protagonist. I look forward to updates.

The characters are vividly portrayed, and the supplementary reverie based on the original setting is also very interesting. It is enjoyable enough, with rich elements and no logical flaws. Although it is a new book, the score of 6.9 Is still too low. If the 9.3 On Tomato is considered worthy, then this book will be at least 9.4.

I saw Chapter 139 and evaluated it. This book is logical, refreshing and not brainless. The character and personality of the protagonist are set very well. The family relationships and situation of the protagonist may make people think that this is a standard protagonist template, but it is not annoying at all. The relationship between the characters is handled very, very well, and the original characters and their designs are also maintained very well. I like this very much. Many brainless novels are inexplicable and the logic is untenable. Although it is excellent, there are indeed a lot of private settings, so the explanation and logic for this also took time. Impatient people may not be able to watch it. Original setting + expansion of private assumptions. Very clever. At this point it depends on whether others can accept it. Maybe this is also the reason for the low rating. I don't think this book has a rating of 7.3. Although there is a small flaw, it is too low. Not worthy of this book. I suggest you read it when you have enough time. Anyway, I plan to read it after resting on Saturdays and Sundays. Otherwise, if I read it every night, I feel like I can't understand some things. I also suggest that the author can simplify the principles and contents, so that scumbags will not be able to understand it. It was hard to watch. I can't keep up with my understanding, and I'm still a little drowsy 🤦