The National Destiny of Collapse of Iron: Playing as Chang Yeyue, Teammates Make a Comeback

The change order is excellent, the writing is excellent, and the description of women's clothing and bodies is spot on. There is zero description of female abortion. I have to say that Chang Yeyue and Tenghuang have a sense of CP. It is not impossible to write this book as a marriage change. The writing is very detailed, the interaction between the live broadcast room and the live battlefield are well interspersed, the battle scenes are well described, and the role-playing routines are old. However, the ending of the book is not surprising. The heroine is the setting of Chang Yeyue's sealed memory. Otherwise, some memories will not be restored as the role of the character increases. In the end, the heroine becomes the real Chang Yeyue. The only shortcoming is that the text layout changes every line after a sentence, which makes listening to the book one after another. The correct skilled and veteran authors will change the characters' dialogues one sentence to one line, and put some appearance descriptions and combat descriptions in one paragraph, so that the listening will not be laggy. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, this story about the fate of the country + the collapse of iron is very well written and worth reading.

It looks good, so far it's pretty good. Is there a Pioneer Star?

This book has made all the poisonous points about the country's fate [laughing and crying] The other five stars are fine, but just because the country's fate is still poisonous, one star was deducted.

The writing is indeed good, the character of Chang Yeyue is not broken, and some details are well grasped. There are just too many barrages, which makes the plot too slow and cumbersome to read. If there were less barrage, more Iron Break plot, or March 7th was called out, this book could improve its score.

It's okay, except for the poisonous points of the national sports writing standards, the pace is a bit slow.

The current national destiny and literature are all filled with doubts, and this is also true

It looks good, but can the number of barrage scenes be reduced?

After reading it, I felt it was okay. Good luck to the author.

Apart from the overly heavy description outside the barrage and the over-homogeneity, it is still worth a look. Take a look at it when you are having instant noodles. After watching the update, instant noodles will be better.

The worst time the Third Young Master was hacked

Why is another good book buried? I don't know if anyone has lowered the rating.

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The writing is good, the writing style is very good, but can the protagonist be given more roles? There are too many scenes in the commentary room and live broadcast. It's a bit boring to watch. There are too many talks. Please update the speed more.

I personally think it's pretty good-looking (((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))

Chang Yeyue and Dan Heng described by the author are very consistent with their characters, so there is no need to worry about their character being ruined.

As long as someone still reads your novel, it is the greatest recognition for you. Don't give up.

It's not bad so far, the author keeps working hard

It looks really good so far

Ha, expect to be stabbed hard in the back.

It's okay, mainly because there are so few books about Chang Yeyue and Tenghuang, so I have to read everything.

[Sneaky laugh] Umbrella Moon Seven's mother, Egg Yolk's mother (beating the tiles...

I wish there were fewer comments and more plot

Alas, no comment, come on! Author, five stars! I'll give it to one when I see you later.

The author's writing is good, and the various descriptions are very accurate.

Come on, author, it looks great

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's so beautiful, the long night moon

Personally I feel pretty good It's better to have less barrages and more main lines, otherwise it will be really boring.

It looks good. If you like it, please buy more ~

Looks good, but there are tricks