Now That the Music Scene Has Been Cleansed, It's Our Turn to Shine

Thank you all book friends for your companionship. This book does not engage in intrigues, slander, and slander. 😘😘😘 There is only the most ideal entertainment environment, the purest music enjoyment, and the most sincere emotions. [The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food] I hope the content of this book can make you smile, and I will focus on it as a daily companion. 😄😄😄 If you have any reasonable suggestions on writing details, I will listen to them. If there are any songs you want me to write, I will also refer to them. 💕💕💕

The conditions set by the characters are in line with the development of the story, and the overall rhythm is relatively slow. Looking from the first chapter onward, the author describes the reactions of everyone singing in great detail. Transitions are silky smooth. For one chapter and one song, I don't think it's a big problem (compared to those who can't finish a song in two or three chapters) Disadvantages: The writing is too bland and makes people have no desire to read. Suggestion: Some songs can also be inspired by life, so be more descriptive of life. You can also write some songs for festivals with special meanings based on the set story time. For festivals that are repeated, you can also have songs with the same meaning. Overall, there are a lot of songs. Suggestions are suggestions, purely entertaining articles are a highlight.

It's a good book. It doesn't have those pretentious and mentally retarded plots. It's just that the lyrics have too many repetitive paragraphs. A little less would make the reading feel better. The picture of the girl's ears is red and the corners of her mouth are slightly raised. It's too simple.

Let me talk about the areas for improvement. First, there is a band, one man and three women. Except for Su's one, why are the other two as thin as paper figures? Where is the sense of presence? I knew that Su was the heroine, but there were too many scenes, and she took over the main role. Why does this band of four members, one man, three women, only have two names? You said that there are too many leading men and women, and there are only two characters left in the band group portrait, but none of them are like this. The author is not good at portraying characters. It would be better than this to go against the trend of all-male career rock and roll, but the result of starting a band is completely different... Secondly, you can't see it, and the reaction from passers-by is too bland, right? Good songs are played one by one, but your description of the scene is too thin, and it cannot bring out the awesomeness of the protagonist. Just singing, isn't singing just for showing off? I didn't choose the right theme for this one, and the setting of the protagonist group is not attractive either. It's just like the school belle routine at the beginning, which is cliche and unflattering. I just think the heroine is a bit too annoying for the emotional line. In my humble opinion, you can ignore it if you don't want to hear it.

After reading a few chapters, the narrative is a bit straightforward, and the people and events are all bland. As a group portrait, everyone must at least have their own personality and persona, but to me, everyone looks like a product of an assembly line, and there is a sense of literary youth, and the dialogue is like a group of veteran cadres having a meeting. Please, you are a group of college students studying art. Can you be more youthful?

These are all songs I love to listen to, come on!

Are all the band members except for the main character female? Harem?

Come on, update soon

The first few chapters are a little bit poisonous, a band with only pig trotters is all female. Can't live without women?

Is the author a fan of JJ Lin? Most of them are his songs. The band is more suitable for Wang Leehom and Tao Zhe.