Eternal*******

The content is very organized, but the combat power system is not clear, which makes it unclear about the true strength of the protagonist group (because there is magic in this world, but the protagonist group should seem to be at the strength level of normal soldiers? Shouldn't it be too weak for this world, but the performance is alternately strong and weak) The appearance of some characters is a bit abrupt, and I feel that some places are not very smooth, but overall it is still worth reading.

After reading dozens of chapters, I personally think that the flavor of traditional Western fantasy is quite sufficient, and it is very close to the Celtic style in my mind. This alone is enough to outshine most domestic Western fantasy novels. Coupled with this writing style, it can be said to be a masterpiece. It is a masterpiece, but the only shortcoming is that the writing style and wording seem to be a little redundant, that is, the gorgeousness is a bit too heavy, which makes the book a little tired after careful reading. I hope the author can streamline this point in the future. At the same time, I would like to give a suggestion to the author, hoping that the author can go to Qidian to develop in the future. The author's strength seems to be a bit inferior here. In addition, in terms of the current tomato environment, the author's type of writing (western fantasy) and style are not suitable for development. I would like to take this book as an example. If it were published to Qidian, I think even if it is not popular, the popularity will not be very low. At least it won't be buried here like this at this moment. One last word, don't criticize if you don't like it: All the above content is based on the premise of non-AI "batch" generation (appropriate use does not count), because this too gorgeous writing style really made me think of this.

Good content, I like the style

Come on, hold on, author

A very nice book

Good-looking, good-looking, like it

I like to watch traditional western fantasy. It feels epic from the beginning. It's good. Come on, author.

I've read a few chapters, and the beginning is really interesting, and the writing style is also very mature.

The writing is smooth and enjoyable to read.

It's pretty good. There's no particularly exaggerated protagonist, and the characterization is also very delicate.

Keep up the good work, the plot is still very attractive now

Great, great! It's really great

I've read a few chapters, but luckily I didn't make anything up, and it's basically reasonable. I hope to continue.

It's okay, it's better looking than others, it has a story, and the writing skills are also very good.

A very interesting storyline, no fancy or exaggerated situations, simple little characters.