The Coldhearted CEO's Contract Husband

I have read both books, and I think your book is good. 1. Your advantage or strong point is that you are good at details and have your own thinking and understanding of many things in life and society. These things together constitute a kind of foundation when you describe details, plots and scenes, daily cooking and eating, understanding and thinking about interpersonal relationships and emotions, and the balance of interests. The excellence in these details is very obvious. I read a few more realistic books today, and there is a gap between these details and your book. These details will affect the meticulous look and feel of each chapter, and can significantly improve the realism of the story or plot described. So your book will look smoother, and each chapter will be more interesting to read. 2. On the contrary, your shortcoming may lie in the construction of the overall outline as you said, and the control of the length of each chapter and the length of different characters. So when you look back at the whole story from an overall perspective, you will feel that some chapters are a little rushed, some characters still have room for further description, or the whole story is not complex enough. However, the flaws are not concealed, and the book is still good-looking. 3. As for the creation of specific characters, because of your logical processing of basic details, these characters will not be too simple and brainless. There are also corresponding motivation arrangements for many things and highly balanced choices, so the overall look and feel of the characters is still okay. But if you want to write about the complexity and fullness of people, there is naturally unlimited room for improvement. 4. Generally speaking, your longboard will make each of your specific chapters easier to read, but these things may also require corresponding readers to have corresponding knowledge reserves and social cognition. In the end, it may take time to test whether your advantages can be reflected in the platform data. 5. But at a more macro level, this kind of framework structure, chapter arrangement progress is slow, this kind of strategic direction thing, I think as you practice and adjust better, the whole work will be improved to a higher level. In short, I enjoyed reading these two works, thank you, and I look forward to your new works.

Five-star praise, this book is the author's ladder to become a god, and the next book will completely become a god! Some people are just good at writing emotional essays!

It's so beautiful. I read this one after reading the guest appearances of Xizhou and Nanfeng in the next one. I have to say that I really like the author's writing style. The narrative is clear and not procrastinating. The foreshadowing in the front is also taken away later. Long live pure love, long live HE!!!

The writing is quite good. I really like the idea of ​​aloof female CEO. This one is more palatable. The male and female protagonists are both talented and beautiful, with online IQs. The conclusion is good and worth watching. It was also very exciting. I started watching it in the middle of the night and stayed up until two o'clock. I got up again at ten o'clock the next morning and watched it until eight o'clock in the evening. Most of the plot is an offensive and defensive battle between family members, including but not limited to drugging, frame-up, murder and other methods. Overall, the heroine feels like she's strategizing, not frustrated. But if you look at it with your brain, there are still many unreasonable things. For example, Song Tianxing used some cheap tricks for a long time. As a villain, his IQ is too impatient. But overall, the portrayal of the male and female protagonists is still okay. There are not many novels about aloof female CEOs that I can keep reading and insist on finishing. You are one of them. Four stars for you!

I started reading the first chapter from the next book, and I clearly felt the improvement in the writing. This book started a little low and started high. The first few chapters actually seemed a bit unremarkable to me. The more I read to the back, the more I felt, and the more I read, the more I read. The author's writing style is also quite good. In fact, I feel that the emotions are quite suitable for the characters in the book. There is no problem with the aloof female CEO who has an emotional disorder and is not good at dating. The Lu Xizhou in the later book felt very awesome and unpredictable. Then this book directly broke my mind and gave me a more realistic understanding of the character. ૮₍ ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ ₎ა The author likes to use some fairy tale-like things to replace that part of the two books. I thought, oh my, this thing can still be written like this (elegant), and it is indeed written in a way that makes people read. The knight from the previous life saw someone who still cared about him after his death, and saw the sacrifice of love that could only be found in books; in his new life, he followed the queen who sacrificed his love for him without hesitation in this life, redeeming himself and her. (The knight in this book is also a prince of a fallen kingdom, so if the Goblin knight in front of the screen is tired from wandering outside, please go back to the cave and the village chief will bring you Coke ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧) Another thing is that the heroines of both books have some... Um... Yandere attributes. There is something wrong with you, the author (-`д´-) I'm looking forward to the author's fourth book, and I'm also looking forward to whether the author will write urban novels in the future. I don't know if it will be in the same timeline. After finishing the book at hand, I will read the author's first book of Tomatoes. 2026.04.10

Very nice, both strong. The author should have worked in a research and development company. It is rare to see novels mention the role of engineers as "X workers". Looking at the author's bookshelf, there is something. I really like the author's view of love, "Financial independence brings personal independence", which is much better than many female protagonists who become the vassal of the male protagonist.

Overall, it's pretty good. There are some subtle flaws in the later stages. In fact, I don't really understand why the male protagonist or the female protagonist would go to the bar to watch male and female models without knowing it clearly from their friends... However, the author just started writing a book and that's not a big problem. If you hate this kind of plot, you'll always feel a pang in your heart after watching it. There is nothing wrong with the writing. The author's next book is obviously much better than this one. Both books are worth reading and they won't be any worse. 4.5 Points, just watch it xdm

Why is the rating so low? I think the author's writing has the feel of a physical romance book that I read in high school. I haven't seen a book that I can get into for a long time. The characters are very deep. I don't know why the rating is so low. There are no surprises. It is very interesting.

In fact, it's quite interesting. At least it attracted me to read on. After reading the author's introspection at the end, I felt it was very sincere. There are many newcomers to Tomato, but few have reached the level of the author. It is a good thing to encourage more outstanding newcomers like this. The first book was in the Cthulhu style. I didn't like reading it recently, so I didn't read it. But I read the new book, and it's an improvement over this one. It can be seen that the author is indeed constantly improving. So come on. The new book is starting to get impatient, I have written a lot, and it should be coming to an end. But the pace has obviously accelerated, the two lines are advancing at the same time, and the transition is very smooth, but it is really too fast. The author's writing style is actually not bad. There is no need to be in such a hurry. It doesn't matter if you write slowly or make it longer. A bit disappointed.

A very good work, one that keeps me up late watching [note][note]