The Second Book by Mo Yun Ran Shan He

First time commenting, the setting is very good. I have been reading books for so many years. This is the first time I have seen this kind of book. It is very attractive to me. I was timid in the early stage but crazy in the later stage. It is well written in some places, the plot is compact and novel, and it breaks out of the fixed thinking. However, the content is incoherent, the plot is not explained, and the relationship between the characters is very good. The system is confusing. I explained it earlier, but I checked it again later. It seems that there are repeated chapters. I skipped through the psychological descriptions of the protagonist's cowardice. The calm ones are more attractive to me. And after so many things, the protagonist must grow up. Don't always be cowardly and timid. The author is playing a big game, and the important part has just begun. I hope it will be better in the later stages. Come on I gave up, it was too messy

It is a good book, but after the chapter of Principal Wang, the subsequent stories are not connected. 🤔 I don't know if it has been swallowed up. What a pity. Now I can only reluctantly give up. The author might as well save it 😢

The plot is quite interesting now, I look forward to its future development, but there are some missing chapters in the middle.

It's really good to watch, and the protagonist also grows up along the way. This is the first time I've read an official novel, and I really enjoyed reading it. I felt like I was hooked. It's great! Show your heart to the author ~ 😘 Sigh... I'm sad... Maybe because there are so many Zhanghe crabs? I couldn't understand the rest of it, the span was too big, and some chapters seemed to be gone. It felt like I just blinked, and suddenly I was fucked from morning to midnight... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... I'm crazy, I can't pick it up, so I'm a bit confused in many places, I don't know if it will pick up later 😢

This book is really well written. I like it very much. It fits my fantasy of a hero as a salty fish. However, there are always chapters missing from the book list. Can you fill them in?

Nice!! But why are there so many chapters missing and some are repeated?

This book is really well written, but author, could you please adjust the chapters [Send my heart] 🥺

It rises and falls together, it looks like a mountain from a distance, it looks like a mountain from a close distance, and the mountain is outside the mountain. It can be read as a refreshing article or as a reasoning article.

The subject matter is novel, the storyline is thrilling and tense, the appearance and psychology of the characters are vividly described, and the writing is great [Love]

It's pretty good, but the chapters are incomplete.