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I hope it won't be finished this time. It will be the last book and it will cover all the things I want to complete.

It's very good. It's really not easy for me to eat such delicious novels on the eve of school. I've read too much Lily and Student Wen, and I've read Wenquxing. By the way, there are multiple heroines. Is there a key sauce or which one is it? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The writing style is exquisite, the plot is coherent, and there is no poisonous point for me so far. The books in Tomato BA are considered to be of high quality. At the same time, the author works very hard and guarantees three updates a day. In this case, the quality can be guaranteed. It is really amazing [Like] (I'm done, after I'm done, I'm going to start on the omelet😋😋😋)

Wenquxing descends to earth, his front is like sugar and his back is a knife. The ending will make the readers cry. Happiness is slightly yellow, love brings jealousy. Abydos is restored, and the old dream returns. If the princess is destroyed again, the key will no longer be there. The story is not over yet, the author will update soon!

It's so good. I love reading it. Come on, Wen Quxing [laughing evilly] It's been a long time since I found an author with such good writing skills [Thinking] I've also read the author's other BA book. I can only say that it's worthy of Wen Quxing. That one has been read four times.

As expected of Wenquxing, he vividly embodies the image of the teacher in my heart, and what I didn't expect is that although there are many emotional lines, they are not mixed, but more natural. This has already surpassed many ba novels, and there are original poems at the end of some chapters, which really makes me happy, so I passed it with full marks [shy]

Based on the current situation, some "places" (in a broad sense) are a bit jerky, relatively lacking in rationality, and repetitive in emotional sublimation, but overall the sweetness is relatively strong. It is recommended to write in detail. The dialogues of the characters have characters but have similarities with most characters (the high-frequency words in the text are arrogance, surprise, carefulness, warmth, touching..., Because many places are skipped in a hurry. It has a slight composition taste, the emotions and characters are not deeply understood or cannot be well reflected (1. Scene 2. Dialogue 3. Details are slightly lacking in this aspect), the author is enthusiastic (extra points). To summarize a rescue article that is not very cerebral, but I can't give it a point. You can understand the details by yourself. Generally speaking, this is the case. I hope the author can write about the character's inner growth and twists and turns in detail. It's not a good thing to rush through the story too much and it's a bit repetitive. It's important to capture the reader's taste. The story is not a classic but must capture the nuances of the characters, but it must not disappoint readers. I haven't spent much time watching it, but this is just my personal opinion.

It is definitely a super beautiful novel. The writing style is very good and the sentences written are very distinctive.

It doesn't look too explicit, and it feels immersive. It's very good, and it has the potential to develop in a higher direction. I hope this book will be finished, hope the beauty will return, and finally, the family will be reunited

Even after just reading a few chapters, I thought this was a good book, because even if you don't look at the popularity of his three books, plus he is a literary star! Who objects? [Angry][Angry][Angry] And the author, I have chased your books [laughs]

I haven't read much in this book. But for me personally, it feels pretty good. I just want to add some of my own opinions here. The first is that the timeline of this book is earlier than the timeline in the game. In other words, there are many students with problems that can be saved at once. For example, Fox Squad and Seven Prisoners (Mingmei is actually quite good as long as her figure is not particularly extreme). Especially Kaname and Makoto, one is stupid and bad, the other is bad and stupid (at least the plot needs to be rounded out as the game is too abstract). It is best or must not be written according to the character in the game. And Stalow, this also needs to be preached and preached. There is also the seven-edged calamus, which is equivalent to the dream of a hundred ghosts walking at night, and also equivalent to remembering to save someone if they die. Same as Kuzu Ye, I haven't seen the end yet, if you haven't written it yet, please save the key. Finally, the author remembers to reply when he sees it. Are there any plans to collect this book in its entirety?

Author, I will return to the park to go to jail soon. Please update carefully during my absence [crying][crying][crying]

I haven't seen much. When will the protagonist become wise (referring to opening the harem)? This standard two-dimensional all-powerful Asasi template has a classic emotional intelligence equal to 0, but this succubus character is not necessarily free of sex. If you are not sure whether to accept it or not, I personally think this is quite torture.

Witness the coming of Wenquxing, a work that highly integrates the game plot with the author's literary talent. (As expected of a science and liberal arts student)

Come on, author, keep at it, it's very interesting.

Great, it's Wenquxing, we are saved To be honest, the teacher doesn't want to be a teacher, he wants to be a succubus. There is some teacher's ethics but not much. The biggest flaw in ba's fanfic is the teacher's ethics. This book is the same.

Finally, did I finally get the guaranteed food? I really enjoyed it a lot.

It's still a literary star, but there are still relatively few people who only read BA. Prison Dream can try other themes, come on

It's so good and I love reading it. It's the best and most perfect fanfic I've ever seen. The author is going to continue writing. I've already read it three times.

The author's writing is really good. I highly recommend reading it.

I really beg you, please update another chapter, I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body, please, brother, please update another chapter [crying][crying][crying]

The writing is good, and the writing is really sweet, but the protagonist's abilities are a bit out of control, and it looks more like a semi-serial and semi-unit drama. There is insufficient motivation to follow up, the villain is too weak and there is not enough conflict to arouse emotions.

It's nice to read. The author's books are all good. I picked this up from the last one. Come on.

Wc, I suddenly remembered that I seemed to have seen the author's name before. I was still researching the author's name at that time.

This... Is... Written by Wenquxing in the sky! Show them all to me!

Oh my God, it's like a literary star descending to earth

Although there will be some slight embarrassment in the plot, it is not enough to judge the innocence we pursue in this story, the beautiful fairy tale, and the utopia under this land [eating melon]

I've read more than 100 chapters, so I'm going to give you a review. After the book The Succubus in the Chicken Coop, which was banned, this one is also pretty good👍

This book's score is really low. The author's writing is so good that it shouldn't be so low. The plot is also good [Adored]

The flowing wind is like snow, fluttering and leaving endless aftertaste Invincible! ! It's super beautiful, the author Wenquxing descends to earth! !