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It is well worth reading. Although it is a bit repetitive in some places, the emotions of the characters are very three-dimensional. Some of the characterizations of Professor Snape are a bit OOC, but overall the writing style is very good. (This book is by Snape. You must know it if you want to read it. Otherwise, like me, the dog ate the chocolate. Wow, it's so delicious. No, I'm going to die if I stand on the wrong side. Wow, it's so delicious. No. , I'm going to die if I stand on the wrong side😭, wow, it's so delicious😋 no, I'm going to die if I stand on the wrong side😭, wow, it's so delicious😋 no, I'm going to die if I stand on the wrong side😭, wow, it's so delicious😋 no, I'm going to die if I stand on the wrong side😭)

It's so good! Why are there so few people reading this novel? Isn't the copywriting difficult to understand? Author, why don't you change it? When I saw that the CP was Severus, I went straight in and read it. As a result, I found the gold rush. Such a beautiful novel really shouldn't be buried! The emotional line and the career line are intertwined, especially the emotional line is very well written, the author's writing is very delicate, and the emotional progression and emotional changes of the two people are very beautiful. Good news for those who like to watch sweet interactions between young couples! I will watch it all. Different from many other novels that focus on three-person plots, this novel mostly skims over the original plot or only writes about key points. It pays more attention to describing the protagonist's career and feelings, bringing many new plots and new perspectives. It is very well written!

The writing is super good. The pull between the protagonist and Sif is so beautiful. I hope the author can keep writing and never stop updating.

The author's writing is very good, and the characters in the novel, especially Snape, are not OOC. There are many times when I think Snape should do this, and the author's choice of Snape always surprises me. After the accident, I feel a sense of enlightenment - yes, he is Snape, he is a strong and courageous double agent. The male protagonist Zell is also portrayed very well. At first he just wanted to repay a favor, but later he slowly fell in love with Severus. The emotional transition was particularly natural. Their choices are well-founded and well-founded. When reading, you will not feel that the author controls the behavior of the characters in the book, just like the characters have their own thoughts and behaviors. Moreover, the author also works very sincerely and insists on updating basically every day. It can be seen that the profit of this book is not particularly high, but the author has also been insisting on creating. The first long book review on Tomato🍅 is dedicated to the author😚

This book doesn't feel like the kind of cool novel that's invincible all the way. The protagonist's emotions are very delicate, and he wants to repay a favor [crying] and the little side stories written by the author are super interesting. (I want to know whether I was saved in the end or not [crying] [crying] [crying] The name Unsaved is a bit harsh [crying] [crying] [crying]

The writing is excellent and the descriptions are real. It should be the most realistic Sri Lankan religion I have ever seen! I don't know why this book hasn't become popular yet, but it's so well-written that I have to review it. It's very comfortable to listen to and you won't feel embarrassed. You'll even find that it's very well-written, whether it's psychological or demeanor. I listened to it before going to bed, but suddenly I found it to be so good that I couldn't put it down until the early hours of the morning. I rarely write reviews for people, but after half of listening to this book, I woke up in the morning thinking that I wanted to review it! It's really, really good. The plot is very logical. The relationship between Si Jiao and Zell progresses step by step. You may feel it's a bit slow at first, but later on you find that you can't put the book down at all and just wait for the rating to come up.

Here Comes the Goddess - this book is now finished - you can read it with confidence, it is so sweet and reassuring. I can't sit still and I have to write something. There are spoilers below - Teacher, your words have the magic of healing, and every character you write is lifelike - whether it is the gentle, powerful and paranoid silver-haired Zerkes (the protagonist Gong), who uses the eyes of a prophet and unyielding determination to race against fate and time to save everyone's fate from fate. Still silent and reserved but determined, Si Si gradually believed in the light and a "future" in the embrace of another person. There is also ggad who slowly melts the ice with the help of the protagonist... Or Harry who is confused in friendship and destiny, Draco who grows up in family, survival and responsibility... And countless people who work hard for a new and better magical world, and even explores the concept of coexistence of magic and technology-the story is told in detail. It is easier to get close to each other than some apprentices at the beginning (?) The emotional line is not intrusive but the water flow is very smooth - the two-way redemption is excellent - long live he - (I like Ozelle, the shaping is very good, if I can't do it, I will eat this kind of elegant, powerful and paranoid) (Qing Mimi: I hope Harry can apologize to Sisi! Or let them sprinkle dog food in front of him to see what's going on in his heart - (?)

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The writing style is very comfortable and the rhythm is well controlled. Although there are not many chapters at the moment, I can feel that the author is polishing the content with great care. I hope Da Da Da can maintain this status. I will keep chasing it and look forward to unlocking more exciting plots in the future.

Very nice! The author writes about the contradiction, struggle and desire in Sri Lanka's heart. Zelkes is also very powerful. From repaying his kindness to liking him, the whole process is very natural, without any deliberate feeling. I can feel that the author put a lot of effort into it. Recommended [blowing kiss]

Overall it's still very delicious! There was indeed a lot of repetitive narrative in the early stages, but it gradually got better. There were minor flaws but there were also many advantages. Different people have different opinions. Personally, I felt that the characters were very good, very sweet and enjoyable! Zell has great charisma too! I hope the follow-up will get better and better!

The story is great. I like the protagonists' outlook on life and values. The way they behave in the dark world inspired me a lot. I look forward to [sending my heart] to the author. Come on. Although I think Snape is a little too emotional, it does not affect this article.

It's very beautiful. I stayed up late to finish reading it. I feel that it is a rare type of character creation that is very delicate. In short, the author will update soon (no). The current regret is that this article is not finished yet qwq.. And judging from the current progress, I think it will take a while.. I'm ready to watch it again from the beginning...

It's a fanfic worth reading, with novel ideas and settings. The emotional line between Zeerx and Severus is very natural and not awkward or abrupt [tears]. The text of GGAD [tears] can be changed to a more attractive one. I almost missed a good article (just a suggestion) Come on! [Sending Hearts]

I really like this book so much. I stayed up late for two days and one night to read it. The relationship and interaction between GGAD are so good. The description of Sri Lankan education is very suitable in my understanding. The love line of the young couple is very step-by-step, and the interaction is implicit and warm. The ending is still my favorite he [blowing kiss] hahahahahahahaha. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. I will read it again in the future [please update]

I like that the protagonist is really super calm and has a super high IQ. The description of Si Jiao's character is quite consistent!

It's really beautiful. Why is the traffic so bleak😭😭😭The writing is so good, I feel sorry for you. You write so well but no one reads it😭

Come on, it looks good.

Looks good! ! ! Big cheers for the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

A really exciting book! The organization is very clear, the procedures are gradual, the emotions between the two are particularly delicate, the rice is very fragrant and fragrant [full] [full]

It's very sour and delicious. In my opinion, it surpasses more than 90% of CP fans. This pulling feeling is so cool.

The content is really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The teacher writes well, I haven't seen anything too OOC yet. The description is very detailed! The teacher must be very good at Chinese! [Please update] Let me add a long review here! It took me a total of 11 days to read this book from the beginning (to be honest, I thought it was a bit fast). Before chapter 80, I felt that it was not really interesting. I read it intermittently for nearly 7 days before I finished it. But after chapter 80, I got really excited. I love reading novels like this where a chess piece becomes a wife! Specially poke me XP! There's GGAD in there too! (Then I like it even more) The author did not write the prophet as invincible, and there was also backlash, and he paid great attention to the character setting. The emotions in the whole text are very natural. Si Jiao and Zerkes have their own positions, unlike other novels where the young lovers are clingy together (although I also like to read that kind of thing...) The vest of the saint leader is very well created ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧, the vest should come off last! So pretty! In fact, when I saw it at the end, I thought that Zelkes was going to cross over into "The Cursed Child" and get to know Sijiao (I had already thought about the plot at that time) Can the author tell me a little bit about what the extra story is about? (Is there anything about Zerx's Animagus...) Here's wishing happiness to Zeerx and Severus as well as Gale and Albus in the book ˗ˋˏᰔᩚˎˊ˗

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Beautiful, very beautiful

There are quite a lot of tomatoes in this style of writing. I feel uncomfortable with this style of writing that is a bit like a Riddler. Otherwise, I would have a 500,000+ word Sri Lankan text to read.

Zell and Sisi will always be happy (♡ω♡ ) ~♪

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