Weird Stories About Rules: Marrying a Ghost Wife at the Beginning

The first story line is okay, but the distinction between good and bad is too clear. It is just a master, scary but not scary, there is no sense of tension, the rules are too simple, I don't feel sorry for S's evaluation at all, it is really too obvious, there is nothing fake in it, if S can't pass below this level, then it really has an IQ problem, the male protagonist's useful information is basically told by the female protagonist, and the male protagonist has independent thinking but not much. In the first story, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is inexplicable. There is no emotional line and it feels more like friendship. You can add a rule. After getting married, the relationship between the two parties will be more and more deeply affected. Also, the story about the female protagonist breaking through the dungeon restrictions and reaching the male protagonist's world is too poorly written and feels confusing. Once you escape that mansion, you will come to the male protagonist's world. The setting is too Ridiculous, if this is the case, can ghosts be able to come to the real world at will? This gate is bound to the male protagonist, or with the help of the male protagonist's natural ability and the moment when the dungeon is about to collapse, modify the rules that she cannot leave the dungeon, and pull her into the real world to be bound to the male protagonist; or can the female protagonist enter the second dungeon at will? Then she is not invincible. You set the female protagonist to directly follow the male protagonist into the second dungeon. Isn't this choice random? At the beginning of the second dungeon, those people will directly follow the male and female protagonists? If you don't show any special abilities, those people will just leave. . . . Also, the male protagonist's power of command comes out of nowhere, and it seems a bit like he is not a complete command power, but more like a leader.

It's okay, quite interesting.

Very nice 😍

The author's writing is very good. I hope he can keep updating it. The content is very beautiful.