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The love story between the young couple in the article is very sweet. Any misunderstandings will be solved in the next chapter, and the plot is also very good. So far, there are no big loopholes. From the beginning, Lani was like a passerby watching the adventures of the Iron Triangle, and later she gradually participated in it and became one of the founders of DA. The growth line is particularly beautiful, and there is another protagonist, Seifei, who silently protects her from the beginning to the end. The growth line in the middle as she becomes stronger is also very nice, as if you are watching her tear apart the cage that trapped her step by step. Secondly, there are not many changes to the original text in the early stage, and there are more private settings in the later stage, but they are all developing in a good direction. All in all, it is worth checking out. If you are used to reading books with soundtracks, I recommend Heart Like Fireworks, a very warm song, which feels more in line with the tone of the article. The writing is very delicate, but I feel that the people who died in the original work will most likely not survive. After all, Sirius did not survive [crying]

Slytherin and Gryffindor are so delicious [crying], both treasures are very good, Lanie accompanying Sephie to rebel against the family is really delicious [love]

The author wrote this very delicately, and I think he very well described the two protagonists' step-by-step attraction to each other. Very very nice. It is healthy and can be eaten.

I've finished reading it. It's a HP Lily partner with a rare original protagonist. The last time I saw a well-written one was "Ouroboros". The settings and descriptions of the two female protagonists are very good, and the writing is very comfortable to read. Although there are not many emotional scenes in the first half, it is visibly heating up. Love that has experienced war is really damn sweet (🚬) I hope to see more such excellent fan works [Sending Hearts] Even though I ate so much in my last breath🍬, I still felt like it wasn't enough. It would be nice if I could add a little more to the article. Seifei has been walking on thin ice. At the end, the sudden explosion of the small universe feels that the span of strength is a bit large, although it feels quite satisfying to directly crush the enemies to death [eating melon] Finally, I look forward to more works from the author [Blowing Kisses]

The relationship line is arranged quite reasonably. Even if it is written by AI, I'd better check it. It's a bit difficult for Sirius to win the Easter match by fighting like this.

The writing is really strong. ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨

The description of emotions is very delicate, step by step, and you can see your own heart clearly bit by bit. The two people are very sweet, beautiful, and make people want to read on.

The writing is very delicate, and the interaction between the two cubs is also very sweet.