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[Infinite lifespan] [Easy cultivation of immortality] [Decisive killing] [Fun, scheming, and drama]
After traveling through time, the social animal Gu Yunzhou actually became a remote village in the world of immortality, and accidentally turned into a little girl Yunwu Mian without a father or mother.
Just when he thought there was no hope in life, a system came and granted him the ability of "infinite lifespan", and then left gracefully.
In the vicissitudes of life, times have changed. She has witnessed the rise and fall of countless geniuses, and has witnessed the rise and fall of dynasties and sects.
While others grabbed the opportunity, she shed blood in the fields,
When others broke into the secret realm, she was thinking about how to ambush them.
Four spiritual roots?
God, I'm still a little genius.
But the aloof and talented senior sister, Bing Jing, kept an eye on her and took her with her wherever she went, even forcing her to have a quota in the secret realm.
When others narrowly escaped death and fought bloody battles with monsters,
But she was drinking tea and fishing in the safe zone, picking up an inheritance by the way...
"You're lucky."
"I just want to farm..."
"Why are you the Nine-Colored Golden Pill?"
"I'm still a woman!"
Until one day, senior sister blocked Yunwumian in the corner:
"If you dare to lick my face again, I will freeze you into an ice sculpture."
Yunwumian: "Hey, senior sister, why are you blushing?"
Reader comments
It's quite interesting. I've read too many immortality novels, most of which are sold first, trying to make the protagonist fresh and refined, untainted by the worldly world. But I just don't like this kind of thing. You can just be stubborn, but for the sake of plot development, it's easy to put the cart before the horse.
But the protagonist's plain mentality is very good and very humane. He will help others and hold grudges against others. He will do it if he can't bear it. If he can't stand it anymore, he will not survive when he is pushed. These plots are handled very well, but the protagonist may still be embarrassed in the eyes of others and will not hug Bing Jing's thigh. However, it is this kind of protagonist who never relies on others and practices patiently on his own that attracts Bing Jing's attention. This has been the case from the beginning. If it changes, wouldn't it be different from the previous two characters?
The direction of the plot I'm watching so far is very random. I just go wherever I think and write wherever I go. It may be difficult to see clearly what the author wants to write, but this is exactly an advantage. If the longevity article stays in one place all the time, it will only become more and more boring. Moreover, the protagonist also moves according to his heart and is not rigid. He does what he wants and has a very clear internal drive and goal. So in my opinion, the plots in these sections are not draggy. On the contrary, the pace of some plots is a bit accelerated, but the places that should be omitted are omitted very well, and the readers know what they don't want to see. The author only needs to grasp the "details" in the details.
So the author keeps going, insists on what he wants to write, and adopts some unbiased suggestions. He must be very successful. I am lucky to have read this book, and I look forward to it ⌯oᴗo⌯
Although I haven't read much, I have a general idea of the trouble-making and gossiping text (I say I want to be stubborn, but my actual actions are to cause trouble and offend people everywhere)
It's very interesting to write. [Sending my heart to you]. The plot also has climaxes and a lot of fun parts. More importantly, it's a very good way of writing longevity texts, and the protagonist has grown up a lot. Later, it can be seen that the human race is basically united to the outside world, which is not bad [laughs]
Author, write quickly, I want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see
I really like this kind of immortality flow. Immortality does not necessarily require being a secluded person. In the past, my qualifications for cultivating immortals were not good, so I developed in a wretched way. When I gradually gained strength, I would be high-profile when I should be high-profile. But when I found that my high-profile was too high, I slowly started to be a secluded person again.
Immortality is really desperate, watching countless old friends grow old, their beauty and gray hair.
Looks great, looking forward to finishing it
Good writing, keep it up
Ah ha, it's so much fun [laughs evilly]
I think it's okay, but the author is a woman, because I feel like the main character's boyish psychology was not captured.
I read the chapter written by you the day before yesterday, and the aftertaste lingers in my mind.
I frequently look for updated pages day and night, only to find old articles covered in cold frost.
People in the group like to guess the plot, or talk about the dangers and the dangers.
I know that you need to be fresh when writing, but I still hope that the new chapter will be sent to you soon.
I can only say that it is quite novel, a story about a man who transforms into a woman and has immortality. The male protagonist seems to be a low-key man, but he acts in a high-profile manner. There is a feeling of contrast.
Try to keep the protagonist's name as consistent as possible
Very good book, keep it up
Overall quite interesting.
I think it looks good. [Praise]
Hiss! This book has a bright future and will be popular
Where is her factory evidence?
It's hard to believe it's a new author
Maybe everyone has different tastes. I give this book a perfect score. The back part is super sweet, especially the extras.
I like giving the system directly at the beginning.
Although his character is a bit useless in the early stage, he becomes better looking later on.
Very good. So far, I have read a lot of books with similar themes. This one is handled very well. Yougou is a little bit irritated. I am looking forward to the follow-up.
It feels like a very good book. You don't have to be stubborn to live forever, you can also show your talents. I like it very much. Keep up the good work, the author, and be sure to finish it [crying]
Okay, okay, so far I've seen that it's pretty good. I'll take my time with Changshengwen and improve the quality. [Adoration] [Adoration] can be permanent!
It's quite interesting. I've read too many immortality novels, most of which are sold first, trying to make the protagonist fresh and refined, untainted by the worldly world. But I just don't like this kind of thing. You can just be stubborn, but for the sake of plot development, it's easy to put the cart before the horse. But the protagonist's plain mentality is very good and very humane. He will help others and hold grudges against others. He will do it if he can't bear it. If he can't stand it anymore, he will not survive when he is pushed. These plots are handled very well, but the protagonist may still be embarrassed in the eyes of others and will not hug Bing Jing's thigh. However, it is this kind of protagonist who never relies on others and practices patiently on his own that attracts Bing Jing's attention. This has been the case from the beginning. If it changes, wouldn't it be different from the previous two characters? The direction of the plot I'm watching so far is very random. I just go wherever I think and write wherever I go. It may be difficult to see clearly what the author wants to write, but this is exactly an advantage. If the longevity article stays in one place all the time, it will only become more and more boring. Moreover, the protagonist also moves according to his heart and is not rigid. He does what he wants and has a very clear internal drive and goal. So in my opinion, the plots in these sections are not draggy. On the contrary, the pace of some plots is a bit accelerated, but the places that should be omitted are omitted very well, and the readers know what they don't want to see. The author only needs to grasp the "details" in the details. So the author keeps going, insists on what he wants to write, and adopts some unbiased suggestions. He must be very successful. I am lucky to have read this book, and I look forward to it ⌯oᴗo⌯
Although I haven't read much, I have a general idea of the trouble-making and gossiping text (I say I want to be stubborn, but my actual actions are to cause trouble and offend people everywhere)
It's very interesting to write. [Sending my heart to you]. The plot also has climaxes and a lot of fun parts. More importantly, it's a very good way of writing longevity texts, and the protagonist has grown up a lot. Later, it can be seen that the human race is basically united to the outside world, which is not bad [laughs]
Author, write quickly, I want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see
I really like this kind of immortality flow. Immortality does not necessarily require being a secluded person. In the past, my qualifications for cultivating immortals were not good, so I developed in a wretched way. When I gradually gained strength, I would be high-profile when I should be high-profile. But when I found that my high-profile was too high, I slowly started to be a secluded person again.
Immortality is really desperate, watching countless old friends grow old, their beauty and gray hair.
Looks great, looking forward to finishing it
Good writing, keep it up
Ah ha, it's so much fun [laughs evilly]
I think it's okay, but the author is a woman, because I feel like the main character's boyish psychology was not captured.
I read the chapter written by you the day before yesterday, and the aftertaste lingers in my mind. I frequently look for updated pages day and night, only to find old articles covered in cold frost. People in the group like to guess the plot, or talk about the dangers and the dangers. I know that you need to be fresh when writing, but I still hope that the new chapter will be sent to you soon.
I can only say that it is quite novel, a story about a man who transforms into a woman and has immortality. The male protagonist seems to be a low-key man, but he acts in a high-profile manner. There is a feeling of contrast.
Try to keep the protagonist's name as consistent as possible
Very good book, keep it up
Overall quite interesting.
I think it looks good. [Praise]
Hiss! This book has a bright future and will be popular
Where is her factory evidence?
It's hard to believe it's a new author
Maybe everyone has different tastes. I give this book a perfect score. The back part is super sweet, especially the extras.
I like giving the system directly at the beginning.
Although his character is a bit useless in the early stage, he becomes better looking later on.
Very good. So far, I have read a lot of books with similar themes. This one is handled very well. Yougou is a little bit irritated. I am looking forward to the follow-up.
It feels like a very good book. You don't have to be stubborn to live forever, you can also show your talents. I like it very much. Keep up the good work, the author, and be sure to finish it [crying]
Okay, okay, so far I've seen that it's pretty good. I'll take my time with Changshengwen and improve the quality. [Adoration] [Adoration] can be permanent!