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(18) Green - 20.475 (Four stars -10%) ① Sense of immersion 2; ② Follow-up reading 2 ③Writing style: 2, a bit licky ④Imagination: 3, related to the Ghost Dormitory, the setting is not bad ⑤Plug-in: 3, OK ⑥Background: 2, not involved ⑦Rhythm 2; ⑧Plot 2 ⑨Character 2, don't like it ⑩Logic 3, okay Others: If a woman can't write, can I skip it? The settings are okay, but the operation... Is really torturous!

It feels pretty good. Just read it slowly. It's not a matter of logic or principles. I feel it's well written. Why do you give it a low score just because it's said to be a poisonous thing because of a progression of the plot? It's unnecessary. [What]

It seems to be okay so far, but there is hope for the future

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