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It's good that the protagonist concentrates on writing, and the pace of writing is just right. I just feel like the protagonist doesn't have a high sense of presence, because the supporting character Li Hao is written too extravagantly, which leads to my impression of the supporting character being higher than that of the protagonist. As well as the editor's review, three reviews including preliminary review + re-review + final review. I read the reviews three times, and some of the review points were repeated. I skipped that big paragraph when I saw it. Maybe I can write more feedback from readers. The protagonist's "writing" ideas and thoughts on the work are quite well written.

The first five-star review. I personally feel that the length of the entire article is just right. Not too fast, not too slow. I've seen quite a few of them, and he can write Sherlock Holmes relatively quickly. There are also some that he just jumps too fast. One moment he wants to write this, and the next moment he wants to write that. There are also some who don't know how to write CP, but in the end it only affects the entire novel. Anyway, I think the rhythm of this novel is better. All in all, it's a five-star review.

The big route is almost the same as Awen's book, but the smaller branches also have their own stories. I happened to see Ayue teaching, and I originally wanted to give it five stars. I felt uncomfortable with this hand, so I deducted one star. I hope the author will write a heroine, not dramatic, not artificial, but gurgling like water, to make up for the regrets about Awen's book.

There are too many descriptions of scenes, which feels like a waste of pen and ink, but the character creation feels okay.

It looks good, there are no unnecessary emotional lines, and the back part is very burning

Do it quickly! Not enough, I finished it in a few hours [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's really nice to see that the male protagonist concentrates on writing, and he doesn't pretend to be cool at all times. What's even more rare is that he doesn't write about all kinds of ambiguities with women all day long, which is really good! ! ! ! !

It's pretty good, give me some encouragement

It's really beautifully written

It's my favorite type, very nice✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*. Come on come on

Yes, it has great potential. I suggest that every reviewer can write it in a different and attractive place in the article.

It's good-looking. Although the ending of dealing with the theft incident doesn't meet my personal ideals, it's really good-looking.

Although some of the plots are borrowed, such as being stolen and robbed in England and France, and the Sherlock Holmes incident, the writing is not bad, and the flaws do not hide the flaws.

You can write Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, right?