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Apart from not being able to grasp the key points, the dialogue being too dense, the amount of information being too little, and the writing not being strong enough to discuss some philosophies, it was still good and gave me a feeling of watching.

Walk the road you have already traveled and meet the people you have met before This setting is very good, and the author's writing is also good. It can reveal whether the protagonist will regain his past memories or become a new self with a new life through the experiences along the way.

Oh my gosh, how can it be so beautiful? It's also a guaranteed deposit. Your Royal Highness, what would I do without you ♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥ It's delicious. How can the rating be so low? You deserve a 9.5. How to say it? This book is quite boring. It always contains big principles or philosophies. It feels like 80% of the article is about general principles. There are seven or eight chapters or even ten chapters of philosophy. Then after one or two chapters of plot, another person starts to explain the truth. It's so boring.

Delicate writing style, no sign of a novice's technique, just say it's the reincarnation of that old lamp [smile][smile][smile]

Good-looking, clear and organized, not too many twists and turns It is a good book in terms of plot setting and characters, but the author is still unclear about the primary and secondary context. The NPC plot takes over the main role. Spending a long time describing one NPC makes the whole story fall off a cliff. What's even more exaggerated is that the new chapter is very watery. It doesn't feel like the same author is writing the book. The plot is not as eye-catching as it was at the beginning. It is full of nonsense and has nothing to say. Keep up the good work. When will it be changed? When will it be returned to the original five stars? Follow-up review: It's really too procrastinating, like water in the water. It can be felt that the author wants to express his own point of view, but he just likes to describe it in obscure and flashy words. He prefers to abstract the characters from the background of the big story, which makes it difficult for readers to resonate and creates an effect where the author is self-motivated and has nothing to say.

Thin chaff, good emotional lines. Each character has his own story and philosophy, and the protagonist's personality is also good. He sticks to his own path and unconsciously illuminates the light of others. But he is not a perfect saint, but an ordinary person with his own emotions.

Brief review of chapters 1-50 I have only read this much content so far, but according to the plot, it is the end of a chapter. I originally wanted to read the entire book before commenting, but I will forget a lot, so I will elaborate on my views on the current content first. 1. The plot of the story has an obvious feature, that is, almost every directly connected character is described with a lot of words, actions, psychology, demeanor and other aspects (less so on psychology), not just from the perspective of the protagonist lhj. This effect is very obvious. I also have a certain understanding of other characters. Just like other book reviews, they are flesh and blood. At the end, the characters are also very three-dimensional. They are no longer just passers-by who set off the protagonist, but are living individuals with emotions. But in this case, I feel that the problem is also obvious, that is, the amount of information is huge, and sometimes it makes me feel very cumbersome and boring. Everyone has a story, everyone is described in detail, and the length is not an ordinary long qwq. 2. Most of the suspense in the development of the plot is very straightforward to indicate that there is suspense, and then to stop it. As a hint in the early stage of the article, it is probably to pave the way for the following. Many of them are about the story of the saint. I hope the author can make good use of it and don't forget to fill in these pitfalls. 3. The protagonist lhj begins to slowly understand the world from the perspective, but mainly to understand the journey of the saint. From the previous divine saint, the human aspect is slowly added, so that the true image and story of the saint can be slowly revealed. The starting point of the protagonist lhj feels more like a bystander, but he still chooses to take action out of the kindness of his heart. There is an obvious internal contradiction. This twisted feeling in the heart of the original owner and the body of the saint, I guess there may be foreshadowing. The time-travel itself is like an established arrangement. It is not accidental, but the two parties themselves are involved. What I want to say here is the same as 1. A lot of the writing is written by other people, especially on some philosophical issues, which appear many times and are really a bit foggy (like the Riddler). But maybe it was the author's deliberate arrangement: everyone in this story is the protagonist. 4. Most of the stories spread about the Saint are fabricated and rewritten, and her death is also very miraculous. It is the pressure of the world. The idea of ​​the Saint may be that everyone can have the same goal of fighting for a better world, but do not come here because you believe in her. The image that deifies her appears because of her and has the current concept. The Saint always believed that she was just connecting everyone, and that they were all equal partners. Charles and others are obsessed with the saint, and what they think and do are basically good deeds, but are they like a kind of repentance? I don't know what the saint's real thoughts are, but there are a few things that make it possible: she has a strong spiritual heart to follow her example, and she has an extremely pure spirit in order to realize her own wishes. Maybe the saint is the kind of person who has a pure heart for the common people and saves the suffering of all sentient beings? The revelation of human nature later shows that this is not the case. She probably insists on it just out of her own small wish, and has no lofty ideals. The final death may be due to the discovery that the world has not ushered in peace and equality, but has ushered in a new ruler-the Saint. The current comfortable situation is only because the Saint is here. When her era ends, there may be a new round of disputes? The more I think about it, the more confusing it becomes. It depends on how the author writes it later. (My brain is a little messed up. When I mention the saint, I think of Alicia's great love) Finally, I am saying once that the protagonist is like a bystander. It may be used in the early stage to slowly let the protagonist find his true thoughts and awaken to his true thoughts. It may also be that the protagonist always maintains the status quo, just like the title. If possible, I would like to see the protagonist take direct action to bring about change, rather than having an indirect influence or remaining a bystander. Also, the original intention was to watch stories about love and hatred, love and hatred, complicated relationships, reunions after a long separation, and stories about strength and weakness. In the end, it was written in the direction of stories about warmth and pain in the human world, the changing influence of saints in later generations, and profound stories about the conflict and integration of human concepts. I originally wanted to read mainly the short stories of hey hey, supplemented by some deep stories, but it turned out to be the other way around. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ah whiting wheress-ing-comments-and-comments-I-feel-stupid-feeling-deception Brief review of Chapter 51-100 Continuing from the book review above, this time it's really a brief review. 1. As mentioned above, the world view the author wants to express is huge and there are many stories. If you keep this length, it is very possible to write 1,000 chapters. 2. There are as many foreshadowings and hints as ever, everyone has a story and everyone is the protagonist. 3. Finally, I have what I want to see, but it's a bit reserved, like hiding it. 4. The author of this novel should be more attentive, but some places are a bit strange, with a lot of strange and vivid descriptions and a lot of rhetorical descriptions. The multi-party story wants to develop, which makes it a bit confusing to read. Finally, I don't quite understand. What the author wants to write is a post, a growth article, or a recorder. I feel like they should all be added together. 5. Those who are curious can still go and see it. In short This novel may require more patience and time.

Advantages: 1. The writing is good, and the rhythm of the first half before going to sea is quite good. 2. The settings and character descriptions are relatively detailed (as long as they are reflected in the number of words) Personal poison 1. The super insensitive protagonist unique to virtual works is so good for no reason. Is it true that you don't feel it? (Gayako, Le). I feel that the vampire part is still more like Lily, but why does it feel like the heroine is always in a passive state? 2. Destiny (unique big hand) (It's damn it, it's fate that brought me back, "Thunderstorm" is chaotic) 3. The feeling is that there is no freedom, that is, the protagonist is being dragged along, following the mess of the saint who should have disappeared, and is being watched everywhere. Personal opinion (forward-looking) 1. Destiny, with the current rhythm, I feel that the alien traveler part is gone, and it also feels like a repetition of the tragedy of the predecessor. I just can't understand the main plot, and I feel that the plot of the main plot and other characters is not well grasped. 2. The saint returns (reincarnation) and realizes that she is the remnant soul of the saint. Since she cannot escape, she can only resume her predecessor's mission. 3. Suspended death, currently the only part that can return passengers 4. Self, the heroine realizes that she is not her after all, and she should not live in her shadow. She will become herself and act. 5. Become her/last wish (earrings), everyone must understand 6. Returning home, as thousands of people who have traveled through time, I still cannot forget my childhood home, and the fallen leaves return to their roots. West Sea (right hand raised 45º)

The characters are vivid, the conflicts are wonderful, a gentle healing story is accompanied by a little humor, it is undoubtedly a masterpiece, support the author, write slowly, even if it is not popular, it is a very meaningful thing [Like][Like][Like]

It's okay, I like it a lot, but the pace is a little slow, just to pass the time. It looks a bit like Fulilian who was buried and went to the people around the original saint to find the "truth" and enlighten the "old friends". In fact, I really want to see how the reunion with my former partner will be arranged. I'm looking forward to it.

It's pretty good. The narrative style is like a storybook. There are no big ups and downs, just plain and simple. Emmmm But how do I put it? This bland feeling doesn't fit with me who came in staring at the title. How can I put it? Now that I have finished watching the first scene, I am thinking that even if the identity is not directly revealed, I can still take off the earrings and say goodbye to the old man at his last moment. This was the ending I expected, but the author only wrote about the sadness of the older generation, which was not very interesting to me. (Stacked Armor: I just expected the ending. I didn't want to teach the author how to write a book. Summary: The style is a bit bland. I don't feel that it's exciting at the moment, but it would be great if I could get on the airwaves with the author. Come on, author.

It's so pretty, it perfectly fits my image of a saint.

It can be read as a collection of stories, suitable for passionate teenagers. It is a book with heroic ideas. Each character has his own story. The protagonist is a passionate young man who takes everything on himself and cannot bear it anymore. In other words, he is nosy, but that is indeed what he does at this age. If it had been published earlier, I might have liked it very much. Four stars are an affirmation of the author, and one star is for the previous passion👍🏻

It is a good book. The plot logic and narrative rhythm are moderate. It can be seen that the story is written with flesh and blood. Each character has been carefully polished. The dialogue rhythm and the analysis of the big principles in it made me a little doubt whether I read it in Red Persimmon. It can be said to be very philosophical. Maybe the impact is that some suspense is buried a little too much? In short, it's like moving forward in a fog, just like why he was forced to commit suicide in the article and then gave their own reasons. This cannot deny the fact of persecution, but until now in the article, it is more like putting the saint into another game, a game woven by the Supreme, as if she has once again become the person who saves (?) The world. If you don't die in silence, you will explode in silence. I always feel that the Supreme is forcing the Saint to make a choice in his own way. Whether it is the mermaid princess or the emperor's aunt, every time it seems that the Saint is subconsciously regarded as the past. This makes it difficult for me not to suspect that the Saint may be forced again (?) And then have a bad ending (I believe the author will not) In short, it seems that there may be less excitement. If you don't deliberately pursue the excitement, this is a very good novel. With the group portraits like this, there will always be a tendency to gradually forget about the protagonist. It is also difficult to grasp this balance. Also, the title of the book may be a bit dissuasive (?) And the Hero Returns is heavier, but the core logic is different. There is a high probability that you will come here with the mentality of reading a refreshing article (after all, this is how I came here) This is purely a personal opinion, I believe the author will definitely get better and better, come on! Finally, author, I like you. (There is also a confession link)

Although the rating of this book is low, it seems that the author's writing style is really good, and the storyline is also very fascinating. It can be called a rare fairy grass work! I just finished reading the first two chapters and fell in love with it. I give it a five-star review! Big cheers for the author! [Sending Hearts] (PS: It may be because of my strong personal empathy and empathy, plus the psychological shadow of pricking my finger with a needle for doing experiments in real life. The plot at the beginning of this book where the protagonist pricks his own ear with a needle is a bit scary and uncomfortable [face covering]. If there are suggestions that are as unacceptable as mine, skip the fourth and fifth chapters of the book. The plot is about the protagonist going into a cave to take shelter from the rain and encountering the first wave of people who knew him before.)

The writing is really top-notch, and sometimes it can really make people have pictures in their minds. Although the content may progress slowly, it is still quite good. I just hope it can be completed. (There are too many people who liked it and ended up discontinuing the update)

So right, so right, this is what I want, this is the taste. Very good novel and made my brain spin. The writing style is very comfortable to watch, the plot rhythm is moderate, and it is rated as a super-large cup. When you see this review of my book, just read it to death, read it. ——Love comes from Seris.

I have read the best characterization in Western fantasy, one of my favorites. The scenes may not be well described, and the subject matter may not be very novel, but the emotions of each person are well written, and everyone is alive. I always read good books before, but this book has a motivation that keeps me reading, and who is the reincarnation of the author?

1. Philosophical speculation should still be put into the story. Progress is more important than any thinking. 2. Angry Su Lie! When will the saint stand up and blast all the assholes? 3. Is this really what I can see in Tomato? 4. The author's writing style is very good, like the reincarnation of Lao Deng, but you can tell from the text that he is a novice) 5. The title may not look like a group portrait article, but it is actually a group portrait article. Please pay attention. 6. I don't read other platforms, but when it comes to Tomato alone, it is considered rare gold. I know of no more than 30 books of similar quality (I just read more).

The writing is rich and in-depth, but I didn't see the emotional drama. However, I enjoyed watching posts. It's a masterpiece worth watching.

A great novel. For me, the author's chapter is the one with the richest, fullest and most three-dimensional characters I have ever seen. I really like the author's writing style and narrative (put your hands together 🙏) (pious ing)

It's very good, but it looks like it was written by a newbie. Some of the content actually seems delayed or overdone. For example, in chapter 46, a whole chapter is spent describing the departure of the saint. In fact, it is not necessary. Because it is a novel, the main line or main text is what readers want to read. Good writing and narrative are more about enriching the perception. Don't lose the main text because of over-description. The rhythm of the main narrative is the most important. You can try to make the language more concise and subtractive. In other words, you can try to leave blank space instead of describing it carefully. The blank space here refers to the description, character creation and emotional catharsis achieved by piecing together the character plot.

This is not an online novel in the traditional sense. Watching a certain fragment, I felt a faint sense of déjà vu. The author captured the image that left a shallow trace in my memory, and re-created the feeling of relief and healing for people to slowly savor the aftertaste. It's a bitter cup of coffee, and it's packaged like milk tea, which is unique. I thought it was a crematorium for chasing my wife, but it turned out to be a black man carrying the coffin. There are philosophers who want people to slap you twice, there are willful ideals that make people laugh or cry, and there are also warm hugs. The abominable author pulls out the difficult and cruel problems of human nature and combines theoretical thinking, emotional collisions with physical images to create a poetic drama.

It's awesome, surpassing the level of most tomatoes. As for the latest chapter, the krill chapter, I feel that the author is deliberately leaning towards serious literature. Although it is still a bit far away from the concept of "literature", it would be good to go there consciously. The novel with the highest content of Western philosophy that I have seen on Tomato so far

After reading it for so long, I thought I should write a review. It was quite enjoyable to read. The last time I wrote a book review was "Casting Spells to Become a King Without Chanting or Singing". At that time, I was quite fascinated by the war-oriented article, so I wrote a book review of nearly a thousand words in stages. Since I've been reading mostly fan fiction lately, this book was a gold rush. I discovered it by accident. I remember I saw it in Chapter 142. The content in the introduction attracted me, and because I had just read a yandere article, I felt that there might be some yandere here that are more lily-leaning and not so crazy (shouldn't they?). In fact, I have seen a similar kind of wife-chasing crematorium type before. To be honest, this is the first time. It is the first time I have seen a Western fantasy type (laughs) The former saint sacrificed herself to seal the passage due to the differences between the Twelve Supremes, but she returned here for some reason, with no memory, only her body. The "system" told her to live her life, but it seemed that the kindness in her heart made her walk on the same path again. This is a story about salvation and a new life for the saint. Looking forward to Lu Huaijin's choice in the future. Is it a new life, or is it raising the flag again for the people and peace? Looking forward to the author's new plot. 1/16/2026 I basically read it offline, so it seemed short (annoyed). It took me a really long time to read this book.

The book is good, and the writing style is okay, but it would be better if the writing was more novel. The whole book feels like a hodgepodge, especially the introduction of Eastern cultivation systems such as ghost cultivation and so on, which are a bit awkward when used in Western fantasy-style articles. There is also a combat power system and other things, and the hierarchy is relatively old-fashioned. I recommend the author to read Laoman's book, which writes very well about combat or combat systems. In short, the author can look forward to the future

The book is full of thoughts and philosophies, including some of the thoughts exaggerated by Nietzsche and Plato. It can be seen that the author thinks deeply about psychology and the reasons for human behavior. For example, the paragraph about selfish and non-derogatory words made me feel like a close friend of the author. After all, I am also keen on these things, and I have also come to the same conclusion as the author. The difference is that I am somewhat stubborn in thinking that selflessness is anti-humanity, and socialist values ​​​​are also anti-humanity, but they are beneficial to the group and have a restrictive effect on the individual. But the author's point of view is more flexible, allowing me to realize different opinions. At the same time, the author's way of thinking surprised me. He probably asks why everything happens, and always pays attention to the inexplicable feelings in the body and thinks about the causes and circumstances of their occurrence. A year ago, I fell into confusion. The change in environment almost made me forget my own demands and walk with false goals as motivation. However, this motivation could not be sustained, which made me crazy, confused, and pursuing the past. Even though I had read some philosophical and psychological books such as Meditations, I could not help but fall into the quagmire of degeneration. I still know that everything has a purpose, but I have forgotten what I wrote in my notes about recognizing desires and briefly walked on this path with "I should." This is a book that can make people think. In this fast-paced era, few authors have portrayed each character so richly. If you can calm down, you will definitely gain something. By integrating online novels with personal philosophy, even people who are not deeply philosophical can experience and think about it, rather than Zarathustra's need to think about the world by himself. At the same time, the author should have read meter and like to use it to make the text have the beauty of music, or, to put it bluntly, rhyme. Moreover, the author's habit of thinking means that he will not use the same clichés, but describe emotions and environments with his sincere feelings. This makes the article full of unique personal style, commonly known as "writing style". I like the author [blowing kiss] This is the first time I write a long review on Tomato, and it is also the first time I meet the same type of people. In my life, I have always thought that thinking is very lonely. To readers - each of us is walking on the known road and exploring unknown areas. When choosing to read online novels, why not consider yourself a traveler and see what the author thinks about the unknown little world in other people's minds, to compare and meditate, and to change the way you see the world.

The subject matter is okay, the writing has both humor and emotion, thinking about life, the rhythm and characters are developed quickly, suitable for the mainstream rhythm of Tomato, the shortcomings are obvious, I feel that it cannot be too long, judging from the author's development, there is still a lot that can be written at present, come on [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's good to read, I like [Adoration] very much, the author's writing is good, but the novel is more like writing a group portrait [Thinking], I feel that most of the time is spent on enriching the image of the supporting characters, and there is less personal feeling about the protagonist's portrayal, but I am very happy to read it, I hope the author can continue to update [Sending Hearts], and don't stop updating

After reading it, it has the characteristics of being able to read. I am waiting for Shura Field, and I am motivated to read the book only when I am looking forward to it. The form of the dialogue expresses the standpoint, the opposition of the mermaid film, and the feeling of Galaxy and Luchiel. I no longer care about sexual transformation (I have never been interested in it before). I am determined to finish it. I like you!