Tokyo Literary Giants, They Are My Shura Field

To be honest, it is not a good phenomenon to write about male protagonists falling in love at first sight. This means that they will be biased. This does not mean that the practice will be biased, but the contrast of the atmosphere given will definitely be quite different from that of other female protagonists. The other female protagonists will naturally become foils, which will make people feel It's weird to create the atmosphere of a single female protagonist in a harem novel. After all, readers will like different people in a harem with multiple females, and people will have different feelings of empathy for different female protagonists. Love at first sight is a good way to appear with a single female protagonist, but if there are multiple females, well, it's like a general or The emperor can only treat his subordinates equally, otherwise he will definitely cause dissatisfaction. The author can naturally write characters that won't care, but readers who like different heroines will not buy it just by talking about it. This love at first sight will lead to the previous The heroine in the first film is helpless in gaining favor, and the relationship of the heroine in the later film is even more anchored by this heroine. As long as the heroine does not make principled mistakes and has a bloody plot, many of the actions of the male protagonist towards other female protagonists will be seen as scum even if they are not the author's intention. However, I still quite like the author's writing style. As soon as Love at First Sight is released, we will try not to have too many female protagonists, and then try to find a way to add and subtract a balance between the emotions between the female protagonists that appear. If this is the case, this book still has potential. The evaluation is too early. The protagonist is not very capable and has no system. There is also a strong female protagonist who threatens to engage in violent palace fights. The protagonist does not know it yet. There is no need to think about it. An incompetent protagonist can only be a vain and submissive man. Even if the strong female protagonist will make concessions for the male protagonist, it will also divide the female protagonists into serious grades of three, six and nine. Currently, the ninth grade is the heroine who falls in love with the protagonist at first sight, the sixth grade is the strong heroine, and the third grade is the strong heroine. The sisters are dependent on the male protagonist for their livelihood, and there are external plots against the female protagonist. The male protagonist is destined to be a toy that is squeezed both internally and externally. Look, any external pressure that the male protagonist does not perfectly control and resolve is a huge poisonous point. Internal conflicts and differences are resolved and one will be broken by the other. All the female protagonists are no longer on the same latitude from the moment they appear. Looking at this, the promise to the sister will be the invisible nuclear bomb of the plot.

In fact, I had a very bad impression at first. The male protagonist was always too indecisive. I saw Ueno acting abnormally several times, but he just didn't ask. In the end, it was his friend who finally found out the truth. When the younger sisters moved out, their behavior was inexplicable. I didn't know whether they were gentle or stupid. But the next wave of operations was very enjoyable for me, so I'll give it five stars. The character of the male protagonist is like a standard male protagonist of ancient Japanese light novels. Except that he is sometimes indecisive and a bit difficult, but he is not bad. In addition, it feels like several harems were fucked to death by Kamino Yui alone. If there was no external force, it might just become a 1v1 with Kamino-senpai.

To be honest, it is really rare to see such a high-quality light novel on Tomato. This is the only light novel I read without skipping chapters. Every heroine is not perfect. The sisters only regarded the protagonist as an ATM at the beginning, and the senior sister is a paranoid. The only slightly better Bai Yueguang is from a poor family, not confident, and has high self-esteem. If you think the heroine must be perfect, even if she has shortcomings, it doesn't hurt, then you don't need to read it. , But in my opinion, this is the advantage of this book. No one is perfect. Such a female protagonist can be three-dimensional. In other words, such a female protagonist can look like a real person. However, there are also shortcomings. The male protagonist is as indecisive as most male protagonists in light novels. Although I know that this kind of male protagonist is the best to write, but after all, if I look at it purely from the female protagonist, my expectations may be too high. In the end, will it be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?

Those of you who are talking about the male protagonist🐢, this is your daily life. The essence of this novel is not dealing with beauties but "choosing"! The attitude towards the mutation is the best proof of the male protagonist. He calmly accepted the departure of his two sisters, took the initiative to give up cooperation with the editor, and left his first love girl in order to protect him. Every time the male protagonist made the choice within his ability, the male protagonist is also a human being, as the saying goes " No one is a saint, and no one can make mistakes. "In Tokyo, a foreign world where I am unfamiliar with my life, I rely on my memory to work as a copywriter. In that situation, if it were me, I might not be able to do so well, let alone get admitted to Tokyo University and become a popular new writer! This is based on the premise of the first hundred chapters (in fact, it is a good ending to end after rescuing Jinye). Chapter 86 is the best time of this novel. In the following ten chapters, the male protagonist shows a feeling of incompetence.

Awesome, awesome. I love so much. But the protagonist is soul-piercing. Don't like to wear it. Choose carefully. Although I don't really like Soul Crossing, it's really good, so ignore this. It will be very cool to watch.

Very good! The psychological description of the women around the protagonist is very good! I also think the male protagonist's character is pretty good. But can a sister group still steam? It feels like just one Kamino has blocked the whole game. Apart from the protagonist's strength, I really can't think of any reason why other groups can steamroll.

In fact, many pure Japanese light novels pursue this kind of stomachache feeling. It can even be seen that the author deliberately made some changes to suit the taste of the tomato novel audience, but unfortunately they did not buy it. One day I said that I am a boy, do you have yellow hair or something? If the male protagonist is really at fault, it is because he is too kind and has already made the best solution for himself at the moment. Of course, the plot still has some flaws, but in my opinion the flaws outweigh the flaws. It's a pity that a bunch of wild boars in the comment area can't eat the fine chaff. If it doesn't work, I suggest the author switch to the platform. In fact, the writing is really good.

The male protagonist written by the author is quite good. Responsible, compassionate, and will not turn a blind eye to things within your ability. Although some things are not handled perfectly, this is a normal person! It's impossible to do everything perfectly. You said that the male protagonist is a male, can you handle these messy things like the male protagonist? God's perspective is different from personal experience. The quality of this book has surpassed many books I have read over the years. There is no big poisonous point.

It looks good. I feel like there is something edible in the tomatoes. Isn't two tomatoes a day too little? Author, you are so young, how can you rest? The two younger sisters left the scene too suddenly, and the character of Aoi felt a bit too cowardly. If this kind of pure love harem story is written, it would be interesting if they had to fight. I hope that the two younger sisters can return to the scene later to restrain Aoi, and the fight will be interesting. But overall, the author's writing is very good, but the number of words is too few, and it is gone in one breath.

The writing is quite good, but the male protagonist is a bit awkward. It can be seen that he really hasn't written much, but the plot is quite good and is slowly being improved. Come on👏Don't give up. Everyone has their own opinion. I actually don't think he's a turtle. The male protagonist is a bit indecisive, but there's nothing wrong with him as a human being.

It's okay, but it would be nice if the male protagonist was better portrayed.

Nice plot and interesting plot

The author's writing is quite good, and it can be seen that he has put a lot of effort into characterizing the characters, especially the complexity and contradictions of people. Looking forward to it 😚

Okay, very good

Looks good, come on, come on

After watching it for a long time, it's pretty good.

Come on author, it's great

Good, good, good

In the end, I must marry all 4 (or 5)!

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This book is pretty good, why is it rated so low?

Delicate, but too scattered, with intermittent emotions

I'll give it five stars first, and then look at it later. It's really fun to look at it from the front.

I think it's a pretty good book, but I don't know why it has low ratings and not many people read it...

The writing is a little lacking, but the logic is fine, and it's okay. It makes my stomach hurt. Always stop looking

It's very beautiful and the writing is very delicate. It's not suitable for novices or those who are not interested in this kind of thing. The main reason is that I don't want you to eat so well.

It's very well written. I like it, but there are too few updates every day. I wish there were more. Come on, author.

It's an absolute star-studded masterpiece, as long as the author doesn't collapse the plot later and doesn't write Haji Cheng to death. Also, please update soon!

A very good book, very much like a Japanese light novel

The subject matter is okay, the female characters are three-dimensional and vivid