Despair************

I haven't seen much at the moment, but I've summarized some, hoping it will be helpful to the author. I will most likely continue reading when I have time. First of all, the subject matter is quite good. The writing style is a bit green but it does make people think wildly. It does make people feel like Omega and Archer. Overall, it's not bad. Let's talk about the plot. I think the biggest unreasonable thing is that you forget to fight after losing your memory. In fact, if the protagonist can be sent to perform such an extremely dangerous task, he must be experienced in hundreds of battles and have good abilities. After all, he may be slightly inferior to the Ultra Brothers. For a existence like this, even after losing his memory, Fighting should not be forgotten, because fighting is actually an existence that tends to be instinctive, just like human beings have lost their memory, but they still know how to use chopsticks when they get them. I think the protagonist shown in the article is like the feeling when the headphone baby Aix merged with the earth for the first time, which is quite inconsistent and weird. Of course, I understand the author's thoughts. The author most likely watched the episode in which Max lost his memory. However, the amnesia in that episode is actually quite different from the amnesia of the protagonist. The amnesia of Cat is that it disrupts the brain waves of Max and humans, thus interfering with memory. But in fact, just like Max still remembers that he wants to transform and that he wants to enlarge his moves, the posture is wrong due to interference. Therefore, this part seems a bit poisonous to me, and it feels a bit forced to suppress the combat power. I think it is better to write that the protagonist forgets most of the skills and some boxing skills, and retains part of the fighting instinct. This kind of amnesia is better. What is different from other Doomsday-style Ultra stories is that the protagonist in this book has the Kingdom of Light behind him, and based on the fact that the heroine knows Hypajton and the protagonist knows Grizza, it is probably speculated that it is at least the Kingdom of Light universe after Saga. At this time, I think it is quite good to arrange Sai Rabbit to come in to save the situation. Finally, that's it. Cheers, author✊On another note, the first few episodes of Omega are really ugly, comparable to the original episode, but the rest is okay. I have to say that since Zeta, Tsuburaya has become less and less interested in Xin'ao. I look forward to next year's big movie of Sai Rabbit and the origin of Ultra to make my eyes shine.

There are very few high-level fanfics. . Come on [blowing kiss]