Hp: Atypical Wizard

Look! The person who has the honor to be the first to comment likes the age setting of the heroine very much. I like the description of the relationship between the heroine and the couple Aberforth and Nico between the parent generation and the child generation. The heroine slowly realizes that she likes Snape. The description of her heart is very careful. There is no abruptness like falling in love right away. She is confused, confused, and uneasy at first. Understanding and then resolutely confirming, it feels like a volcano that has been suppressed for a long time to erupt. It is a perfect capture device for the awkward I-I-Let-You-Guess-I-Don't-Say-Is-You-Say-I-Don't-Speak. I feel that this kind of hot feeling is what Snape would crave🤔. I had a great time watching the latest episode. I can't wait to know how Snape will face the heroine. Is he slowly accepting it or something! Update soon, boss! ! I hope I can read a hundred chapters when I open my eyes tomorrow! ! !

Well, a short article of about 400,000 words is not bad~ The background is set at the transition of the parent-child era, that is, some time before Harry was born... At the beginning, the heroine became the object of the Sri Lankan teacher's attention. The main plot is that the little troublesome heroine grew up lively under the influence of love. She suddenly left school unexpectedly but kept in touch with her through owl. When she grew up, she became an alchemy professor. Then she started an office romance with Sisi. During this period, she assassinated Noseless one, two or three times, and finally they were consummated~ The overall plot is actually very complete. The place where the heroine went when she left school, the reason why the heroine's magic power exceeded the standard, the reason why she didn't feel pain, the rescue of her friends, etc. All came back together. The parent generation developed freely, and the offspring generation changed. However, the changes were very smoothly based on the original plot (for example, the newly returned Voldemort was almost killed by her plotting to trigger a thunder ૮₍ ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ ₎ა)... When she was taking revenge on her family, she accidentally ran into Nurmengard and brought out Gai. This smoothly paved the way for the reconciliation of Albus and ggad, so the whole process was super smooth~ As for the emotional line, I can only say that I expanded my imagination based on the description in the book: it is not that my heart suddenly beats, but that when I have accidents again and again, the person is always there, and I feel relieved, seeing his indifference. The awkwardness and sincerity behind the mask, the subtle tolerance and retreat of each time... Suddenly looking back, I realized that I had already been moved... Then I just hit the straight ball without any stumble ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა... Sisi was actually quite clear on this point. When he was in the most painful time, that silly fufu cat snored and forcibly inserted itself into his closed world, leaving its own breath, disrupting his indulging in painful emotions, and giving him a chance to secretly breathe... After he was firmly confessed, he also gave the other party a chance to refuse (he gave a bunch of inappropriate reasons but did not stop loving you), so he was taken down on the spot... After writing about the heroine's growth and emotional line, the shaping of other characters is much less. It can only be said that the three turtles have always been together, and the friendship line is super sweet~ Then Draco and Harry's relationship broke the ice, and the other two had a very low sense of existence; Gellert, whose ambition has never been extinguished but dare not say or do it (in fact, he thought about it and said it, but not in front of Albus)... The family line with Aberforth is also very nice~ If you want to avoid lightning: everyone survives; ggad appears; Draco is slightly whitewashed; Sirius has unrequited love... Overall, it's still okay ~ I recommend it ~

I also found a good-looking CP by a fan of Sijiao. It was very good-looking and I read it in one sitting. This time card is very good, between the parent generation and the child era. The plot is not the same as other novels, the changes are great. The Sect is not OOC at all, and it's great that the Patronus doesn't change so quickly. I've read several books. Voldemort hasn't been eliminated yet, the danger is still there, Harry is still in danger, and the form of the Patronus changes when he has a slight hint of affection for the heroine. . . So I prefer the author's setting and wait until everything is settled before changing it.

So far, it seems to be a story that accompanies healing. Aberforth, Ariana, and Nico, these people who did not have much writing in the original work, have become vivid images in the author's writing. Aberforth and Ariana take care of Vivi, whose magic power fluctuates. Nico and his wife help Vivi a lot in alchemy and youth education, and Vivi's company warms and heals them, which is very warm. Vivi and Si Jiao, whether it is Vivi who dares to love, do things, is smart and decisive, or Si Jiao, who is hard-spoken and soft-hearted but carries a heavy burden, they all grow up in each other's company. It's quite sweet so far. I look forward to the next story!

This article is very well written and wonderful, the characters are vividly created, and the emotions are described very delicately. It is also the first time I have read an article about Professor Snape. I am very grateful to the author for his great care in giving Snape a happy and warm ending. A very favorite paragraph: "I once thought about trapping you in marriage. You will bear the name of Mrs. Snape and will always be part of my legacy in this world... But my only remaining conscience has awakened me. If I am destined to die in the war, the last thing I want is to trap you here. I hope you will always be alive and free." "I can't say bad words to you. Just thinking about it makes me feel guilty." "Yes, I am a despicable person, and I cannot bear to tie you up with marriage, but I want you to always remember me." "I want to be an important part of your life, your thoughts carry my traces, and your life is related to me." After reading this article, I feel warm in my heart🥰

I have been reading this book during my summer vacation for a while. It was serialized before. I finished it two days ago. It was great. I loved reading it to the end [laughing]. I finished reading this book in two days. First of all, the physical age and soul age of the heroine are not much different from Sif (I think the age difference of about 12 years is acceptable. God knows how much guilt I felt when I watched a lot of Sif in his 30s and the heroine's body age is 11 or 2 years old and her soul age is 30 [ Facepalming]) And the heroine's baby is not a virgin. When I saw the heroine's baby practicing animagus and going to see Harry, I thought she was also a giving type. Looking back, I think the baby went to see Harry because of his own kindness and curiosity about the savior's living environment after losing his parents. In the later period, when the heroine's baby fell in love, she also focused on her career, which gave the ss a sense of crisis (I have to say that Sister Bao did it beautifully [laughing]). The reason was also given at the end of the question about the heroine's baby's magic riot. The author DaDa really writes very well, and the occasional small problems do not affect the overall consumption [laughing] I hope Da Sifu can be happy with Violet in this world, and I hope the author Da DaDa gets better and better and can write better works [Sending Hearts]

Ahhhh! The descriptions in this book are super delicate. Whether it is the warmth between family members, the friendship between friends, or the reluctance and fulfillment when parting with the teacher (I cried while reading it), they are all portrayed so well! Especially the relationship with Severus! The following is quoted from the original text① ("Professor Snape." She stared into his eyes and said word by word with incomparable clarity, "You have said so much. , Listed all the reasons why you think we are not suitable. But you only didn't say... You don't love me.") ② (Violet then said, "Professor, your soul is a plant rooted in the darkest place, with tough bones and silence and wind and frost flowing in its veins - and I have never been a shallow-calyx sunflower that only pursues light and cannot survive without a sunny day.") ③When he opened it again, there were extremely complex emotions surging inside - struggle, fear, helplessness, and a long-buried longing... That he could no longer deny. He didn't speak. But he didn't push her away. This silence is an answer in itself. A heavy, almost resigned... Agreement. ) Really vividly portrays being in love but not being able to love! It's rare to see such excellent writing on Tomato! Thank you so much for the author✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Violet, the alchemist master, is a fluffy snow leopard who is determined and brave. I really like the interaction between the two of them. Sri Lanka gradually opened his heart. When Vivi confessed to her, he didn't say he didn't like it but said it was inappropriate. After completing the agreement in the Screaming Shack, the patron saint turned into a snow leopard like Vivi. In the end, vivi's family, friendship and love are all quite complete, and the tone of the whole story is still warm and joyful.

First of all, praise the writing style. I think writing is the threshold for a good or bad reading experience. Even if the story is boring, it can still be fascinating as long as the writing is excellent. In fact, many times I choose to abandon articles because of the writing style, so I am very happy that I can read this book with gusto! Based on the original work, the author has given the heroine a very complete background setting and character, including snow leopard, alchemy talent, etc. But what I like most is the author's portrayal of Si Jiao. Not only is there no OOC, but it also reflects to a certain extent the contradictory charm of his pride and inferiority when facing himself and love. Although there are still some small flaws, I personally think the flaws outweigh the advantages. Overall, I felt that the background for establishing the relationship between Si Jiao and the heroine was a little insufficient and a little too fast.

It looks good, the writing is smooth and not childish. The plot stands up to scrutiny and all the foreshadowing is filled in. The emotional line is very natural, it's not some time-travel plot where you fall in love with the professor for no reason, no one will dislike it! Hairy! The characters are three-dimensional, without vilifying the Harry trio (referring to writing them as idiots who only get into trouble), nor does it deliberately emphasize that the heroine knows Snape's past, feels sorry for him and has feelings for him, and the heroine has no golden fingers. It did not vilify Malfoy, nor did it deliberately mistreat dogs and wolves. A very beautiful story. Thank you to the author for bringing us beautiful works.

The books I have been able to read are all books that I think are very well written. I like the heroine of this book. She is strong, interesting, and vivid. She has her own friends and her own career. She is not just a tool that revolves around the protagonist. If you read it carefully, you will really fall in love with the heroine. Severus is also well portrayed, no OOC. There are no bugs in the plot. The plot of the original book progresses very quickly. The whole book is neither long nor short. I read it in one day and it was just right. I hope the author will continue to work hard💪

It's a very interesting article. The writing style, setting, and character control are all very good. It deserves 8 points or more. The only dissatisfaction I see now is that the conflict between the Sect and the hijackers has been ignored. I can't imagine the scene of the Sect drinking tea at the Black house, or when Sirius was the only one in the house. But if you just look at the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists, it's still very good.

After reading it for several days, I finally finished it. I have read dozens of Sri Lankan texts, and this one is a good one! The author has a lot of imagination. When I see some clips, I think, "I could still write like this." The private settings are very interesting. Two strong characters, the heroine is very smart, neither of them will stand in the way just because they are worried about the other, love is respect and will always be behind you. Even if they are together, Sijiao will still be venomous and not OOC at all. The relationship between Draco and Harry is not so tense. Both of them trust each other. There are not many scenes with ggad but they are interesting. Nico and his wife shed tears when watching the scene.

Why no rating? The beginning of a good novel must attract people to read it. First of all, the writing is very good, and secondly, the story constructed by the author feels very novel. Although I have only read Chapter 4, it is the first time I see Aberforth as the elder who took care of the childhood heroine. Very few fan fiction will take care of Aberforth's role. The existence of the heroine somewhat soothes the pain caused by Arianna's death. The heroine has powerful magic power. Once she loses control, her influence is comparable to that of Obscurus? And the alchemy that has just emerged indicates that this is a cool article, right? It must be a cool article, right? This is the first time I decided to read on without reading the ending. Please don't kill me.

It's quite good to watch, the logic is online, the plot progress is very reasonable, there is no hydrology, which is great, the whole story line does not involve the heroine as a threesome and the original work, it is rare for Tomato to recommend this good-looking HP fanfic

This book is well written. It is a sweet meal that I love to eat when I am alive. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] But what I love most is vivi's friendship. Best friends can understand each other's emotions with just one look. This is a more precious emotion than love. The little snow leopard and the little parrot 🦜 and the little badger, the Minister of Magic, should always be good friends! And love wishes 99! ! !

This book is really good! Vivi we like you! Watching the heroine grow from a pretty little vivi to a powerful, wise and reliable Professor Garland, omitting 10,000 adjectives, even beauty is only an insignificant part of her. No one is OOC, the ending is very satisfying, the author's writing style is also good, I don't know how to describe the rest, but I just like it (🥰 After watching the ending, I plan to go back and look for foreshadowing🤔

It's a very novel feeling. It's different from many books I've read in the past, but it's also very attractive to me. The things I experienced with the professor, the cuteness of protecting my own people, and the cute tail question mark when I was an animagus really attracted me to continue reading.

It's a very nice book. The main line of the original work is basically preserved, and it's a writing style that's not very common in fan fiction. And because of the intervention of the protagonist, there are more plots without sacrifice, which is really good!

It's good-looking, the heroine is an alchemy genius, super powerful, and the strong female character is amazing [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Many of the plots are also very interesting, in unexpected ways. [Attention] [Attention] [Attention] Mengmeng is very reassuring.

It's good to watch. It has a good ending except for Tom Riddle. Professor Caredi is alive and well. People who were once powerless to save are all saved this time. The heroine is smart, strong and brave, and her family, friends and lovers are complete.

The heroine's own plot line is logically closed, and the family relationship with Nick and his wife is also very touching. However, in the later stage, I felt a little uncomfortable when it came to whether Sri Lanka should go undercover to atone for sin, and it felt like she didn't care about the heroine.

It's very warm and healing. It finally tied up at 4 o'clock in the morning. I can feel that everyone has a happy ending. And who is baby Vivi going to be so adorable?

This book is very meaningful, the plot is not sloppy, and the plot changes are quite thoughtful. The changes made by chance always make me very excited. Everyone is living well, not only the regret of death has also changed, it is the essence of fan fiction. I hope the author will be happy every day. The only thing that I can't see clearly about the whole story is the togetherness, which lacks some ambiguity and pulls the emotional progression, so it's a bit weird and dry, but the rest is really good!

I've finished reading it. It's mainly about the children's generation. The heroine and the teacher are in a teacher-student relationship. I think it's okay.

The author writes like this, so what else can I say? Meet the chef! ! ! ! !

Professor Snape really looks like Snape, so well written.

Nice! I stayed up all night and tied it.

It's beautiful. I love the heroine so much. I don't know why the rating is low. Maybe it's because there are not many people. This book is highly recommended.

Not bad, well written and interesting❤️‍🔥🥰