One Punch******

The author's control of the character's growth line is really exquisite. Especially the protagonist's evolution speed from bronze to king in only three chapters. This upgrading rhythm that breaks Newton's law is simply the theory of relativity in the online literature world. It's perfect. The twists and turns are not broken. The author's writing style is particularly delicate. Please change the name. Change it to I'm spinning in the heavens.

Yes, I like it too! As for those little guys, I can only say that you will always find those who recognize the author's writing style! I resonate, don't talk about the timeline with me! I'm reading fan fiction, not the original work, so I'm just rambling here and there. Anyway, the pen is with the author, so I can write whatever I want. If it doesn't look good, I'll be done with it! Let's update three more chapters and read them all night long!

Do you want to give up what's inside the punch?

Yes, I am very pleased

It's just that the timeline is not done right. .

It's really awesome to watch.

So cool, so cool

Why can't I see paragraph comments? Even if I post it myself, I can't see it.

Although it is to catch up with the progress, the protagonist's combat power expands too quickly and does not have that golden spirit. Overall, it is good, but it is too urgent. It can be read as a cool article.

I can't say any other comments, but I think it's pretty good. I saw 29 and I think it's pretty good. Please wait for the rest, I'll take a look.

Too dull, very beautiful

The theme is in the form of a cool article, but some places may be a bit ooc, but it's harmless.

It's okay, but I didn't like the part that seemed like love at the end.

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist is relatively decisive, and there are also some ambiguous scenes. The protagonist is not invincible after getting married, but grows up slowly.

A reasonable and perfect way of fighting. [Like][Learned]