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The writing is really good, but if I want to write female characters in the future. Don't get hung up on descriptions of one person and a group of people. Write it in multiple chapters with frequent interruptions. Don't describe it deliberately. There are many good-looking novels about the female character's emotional deterioration. You must pay attention when writing!

I haven't read such a good novel in a long time.

Well written, he is a real mortal, he can climb the road with only a heart of sword [eating melon]

Good-looking mortal cultivator

Well enough! Looks good.

It's okay so far

A very attractive book

Firm heart, flexible mind, smooth writing, good book

Come on author, I support you

This is the true cultivation of immortality by mortals

This book is very interesting. The protagonist develops steadily and gradually develops into a high-end combat power. It is very interesting.

The writing is concise, the concept is exquisite, and the plot is exciting~