Tomorrow, Clear Skies

Belated review - I wanted to finish it a long time ago but delayed it for various reasons. I didn't finish it until today. I thought I would always leave a comment after reading it. The characters in the whole story are pretty good. Whether it's Jian Er, Yang Chen, Xiang Qing or Sheng Qi, the story is worth savoring, but some details need to be polished. Just like the doctor, his image may just be a doctor who cares about patients. He may just be a supporting role. The main plot does not revolve around him, but the plot between him and Jian Er can be improved, and then there is the part where Yang Chen leaves. In fact, he and Xiang Qing should be separated a little more. To put it bluntly, some plots should be added in the middle, because the time when the two of them left is too close. I think you should want to write the kind of story where one friend after another leaves and the only one who can't stand this kind of separation again and again is not as long-term pain as short-term pain, but two paragraphs The sensational part in the middle is still not enough. I just left before leaving a complete image in people's hearts. It cannot form a very deep impression. This book gave me the feeling that it is a group portrait. If I plan to always specialize in group portraits, the character creation and image need to be further polished. The continuous writing of the story is still very good. Through the small stories of the four people's travels, I try to redeem Jian Er, especially the last part of Jian Er. , Committed suicide and couldn't hold on to the description of the conversation with them, and finally decided to redeem herself, and wrote a girl's determination from the wandering in despair to the determination to face the sun. However, I think the ending is still a little hasty. It may be better to read the whole article in vernacular in some places, but overall, the writing style has improved, and the descriptions from different angles are more delicate. Compared with the last story, the clever transition of details has been added. Now I guess it will be a long time before I see the next article. I feel like this comment is a bit long-winded, but it is also based on my feelings. I hope it helps you and keep up the good work 😎