Seeing Another Dream, Green Ping Is Reborn, Ziling Is Unlucky

The writing is very good and fits the tone of Qiong Yao's drama. I don't mind having an original male protagonist, but I'm a bit disgusted by the cliché of a strong female protagonist with a stronger male protagonist, and the male protagonist's name is too dramatic [facepalm] If you don't mind, you can watch it, the overall story is okay, and the pace is good.

It's beautiful. The author's writing really captures the essence. Every time I read what they said, I feel like my brain has been refreshed. It is indeed what the characters in Qiong Yao's world can say and do [laugh][laugh][laugh]

It has the flavor of Qiong Yao's characters, but the plot direction is very logical. The writing is very good, the psychological description is very good, and every subtle psychological change is well grasped! ~~Great article! ! !

The author's writing style is very good, and the characters he created are very consistent with the original work, but the male protagonist Fei Ying is really redundant. I know that the author wants to express through Fei Ying that the heroine deserves better after leaving Chu Lian, but it is really unnecessary. A strong heroine is self-reliant and there is no need to prove herself by having a perfect male protagonist.

What you lost was just a leg, but what she lost was love. This sentence shocked me for a long time, so that I can't forget it even after decades. It's not that the love in rare books is so precious, but that I can't understand it at all. I've watched almost all Qiong Yao's dramas, because adults like them, so I can only follow them. There is no one that I can sympathize with. I watched so many people like it. Huan, I thought I didn't fit in with others. When I grew up, I read the author's article. When I think about it again, the central idea of most dramas is: all the pain is caused by good people. If the good people are good enough and make way for the protagonist's love, then everyone will be happy. So the supporting characters are not good enough. Wow, a top PUA brainwashing drama. I admire it. It's not scary if people are bad. It's just that the bad people are educated.

First of all, I am not a bastard! I came in because I was interested in Lu Ping's experience, and the author's writing was really good, and the plot was smooth and refreshing. It also touched my heart, it was really well written. Although not many people have read it, it is indeed a treasure. It won't be too brainless, nor will it be too cheating. Everything is based on the original plot of the TV series, and it won't be too biased. It's fun when it's time to be cool, and it's drama when it's time to be dramatic. Great!

I love watching the story of Lu Ping's rebirth, especially the setting where a man with a broken leg turns into Chu Lian is very enjoyable, and the characters are also very consistent with the original settings, especially Zi Ling, Chu Lian, and Fei Yunfan. They feel so similar to Yilian Youmeng that I watched when I was a child, and it deserves five stars. To be honest, the protagonist Lu Ping, in order to reflect the contrast after rebirth, always said some sarcastic words and some of the dialogues of Fei Yunfan 613, which seemed a bit narrow and inferior. I hope there will be a better way to fight back, or just be beautiful.

The painting style is very Qiong Yao, and the dialogues are very in line with the characters' brain circuits and are not OOC.

It's very interesting, and the author's writing of the original characters (Lu Ping, Zi Ling, Fei Yunfan, Chu Lian) really has the flavor of the original work, which makes people very immersed in the drama. I just feel like the original male protagonist has a little too much writing

It's so right, except for the male protagonist who is airborne, the other parts are so right! Especially the description of Zi Ling, everyone is so similar to the original work! And it is really not generated by AI, the logic is smooth, and there are no duplications or contradictions!

Let me start by saying that even if Grandma Qiong Yao's book has an abstract male and female protagonist, there are still people in the text who slap them in the face~_~ In the original work, Zi Ling had a bad life and Fei Yunfan was not a good person. They lived in the castle after getting married, but Fei Yunfan got angry, so he cold-blooded Ziling and left her alone in the castle. She didn't know the language there, so she came here as a scumbag, and the power in the castle was cut off, which was very painful. Fei Yunfan also said that this was a lesson to Zi Ling. After Luping got divorced, she completely left the person who caused her inner conflict. She lived out her life, went abroad for further studies, continued her studies, and came back to do behind-the-scenes work on the stage. I remember she met someone who also liked the stage. Chu Lian, I don't remember him.

It does a good job of bringing out the heart of the villain who dare not act on TV. The hard-working writer carefully considered each piece of green tea. I give the writer 10086 likes 👍🏻ㄟ(≧◇≦)ㄏ! ! !

The author's writing style is quite good, and it is among the best among all the articles about Lu Ping's rebirth that I have read. I hope there will be more of them. It's good to read.

Stable updates and sophisticated writing. The protagonist of the original book is not completely embarrassed, but after reading the original book and watching the TV series, the psychological process of the character is revealed. The character's current psychology and choices are in line with the character's positioning, and it is refreshing even without OOC. Maybe the characters are based on the soul of Aunt Qiong Yao. In some scenes, you can still feel Ziling's kindness and innocence, as well as the true love between the love triangle. Of course, their selfishness and hypocrisy are also real, and the direction of reality is also very rhythmic, as it should be. The general direction of the book is a preference for Lu Ping, but the one about Zi Ling is more exciting and readable, and it does not deliberately distort Zi Ling and Chu Lian. In that situation, they would indeed make that choice.

Oh my gosh, Qiong Yao's wind control is so accurate that it makes me uncomfortable. I have to frown from time to time, but I don't mean to say bad, it is really interesting. The plot is flowing smoothly, and I can see that the foreshadowing is also very well done.

After reading more than a hundred pictures, Luping's mother finally gave up on this broken marriage, Luping's father married San, Ziling married and divorced Chu Lian, and got together with Fei Yunfan. The two jumped up and down to form an anti-Luping alliance. Hahahaha, I laughed to death. The plot is very good. The only fly in the ointment is that so far Luping doesn't seem to have her own career development line. Although Fei Yunfan's shares were stolen from her earlier, they were later transferred to Fei Ying. She has nothing left in her hands and has to start over her whole life. She hopes Luping won't pin everything on others. Whether it's dancing or business, everyone is involved in their careers. Let's write more about Lu Ping's career line.

The dialogue is very Qiong Yao flavor, and the revenge is also exciting. Every counterattack by Lu Ping hits the mark. But when it comes to the original male protagonist's part, it makes people feel tired. It is no different from the rotten industrial saccharin in Tomato. I deduct one star for the male protagonist.

Chu Lian deserves to have his leg broken due to his indecision, and Fei Yunfan deserves to go bankrupt because he thinks he is the center of the world. Wang Zhanpeng is doomed to have nothing at all in the end. Zi Ling takes love too seriously. In fact, it doesn't matter. As long as it doesn't affect others, everything can be considered romantic. But everything is on the premise that it does not affect other people. What does it mean to build happiness on other people's pain? Many people in the play always ignored Lu Ping's pain and criticized her wantonly. Her pain was ignored and she was helpless. So I was very satisfied to see Chu Lian break his leg. The growth and progress of Shunjuan here is also very interesting, and the mother and daughter Lu Ping finally came to an end after all their hardships🥳Spread flowers🥳

Great writing! I can't wait to see what happens to everyone else except the heroine and her mother.

Four stars, five stars to encourage the author to write better novels. Subjective evaluation, overall the author's writing is good. The advantages are very obvious. The article is logically online and the content is smooth. It not only conforms to the original character's personality, but the added characters are also reasonable and not obtrusive. The only shortcoming is that the character image of Lu Ping after rebirth is too simple and not rich. The content about the character's career can be enriched.

Generally speaking, it is very good, but the scenes of the male and female protagonists have been weakened by the foreshadowing in the early stage. However, it is very enjoyable in the later period. The heroine is not the kind of mother-hearted woman who will take revenge when she has a grudge. The scenes are very enjoyable. I feel that the three views have been brought back. Thank you to the author for giving Luping a fair and opportunity, and also gave me a chance to say sorry to Luping.

The writing is so good. Lu Ping has the essence of Qiong Yao's drama, but also has a normal outlook on life. She also has a mouth and a brain. It makes me feel comfortable watching it.

It's a super nice fanfic that gives the psychopaths in the show their very appropriate trajectories and endings. And it fits the personality of the original characters very well. The writing style is great, and the writing has the flavor of Qiong Yao. People who watched it couldn't stop watching it. They originally wanted to watch it slowly, but ended up staying up all night until dawn😂. Truly a fairy ❤️

The writing is so appetizing! ! ! It's literally written on my heart! ! I just love watching this kind of drama. The author has greatly cured the boredom I felt while watching the drama in those years! ! ! Come and see, sisters! ! !

It's very nice to look at, and there's no character breakdown at all.

The writing is very good! The writing style is very Qiong Yao! No ooc, it's worth watching~

The writing is really good, the plots in it can really match those on TV, and the characters in Ziling can really make people laugh [crying with laughter]

The characters are captured so accurately, the plot development is reasonable, and the twisted psychology of Chu Lian, Fei Yunfan, Ziling, and other protagonists who are different from ordinary people is very accurately depicted. I have read some so-called "anti-Qiong Yao" novels before, which is a no-brainer, but to be honest, it is just a standard vicious villain under the name. This book is really well written, and it is not popular now, which is a pity.

Such a good book is only rated 7.1? ! The plot is very exciting, not an ordinary rebirth novel routine. Especially the subtle changes in Chu Lian's dark psychology after breaking his leg, the writing is very realistic! Leave appropriate space for psychological description to make people recall. I really hate novels that reveal one's own psychology at all times. It's boring, but this novel has very good white space.

It must be rated 5 stars, it made my childhood wish come true. I just don't understand Lu Ping's emotional line.