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It's great to watch, but I always felt like the protagonist's character was underdeveloped. Can you write more about daily life₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑. The overall look and feel is still very good, but some of the character details feel a bit sloppy, and I feel that the characters' personalities cannot be well reflected, but as a new author, it is already very good (it is also my first time to write a review, and I am very optimistic about you, the author~) (●'◡'●)

Give yourself a five star

Quite pretty. But in the competition in Chapter 20, although I knew that the natural power of the elf was very strong, I didn't want to suppress it completely unilaterally. After reading the introduction, I knew that it was growth, but at least it came and went. I knew that she was a priest, and she didn't have much attack magic. Don't tell me anything because she is the first in the power of nature. The arcane teacher has said before that the only one who can overwhelm him is that elf, so they are first and second, but this is completely unilateral suppression. This is probably the only drawback. Overall, it looks great and deserves five stars. Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Hmm... How should I put it? I quite like the first world, but since the protagonist is given such great strength, why are the subsequent worlds so frustrating? ? ? I don't understand. And I think the protagonist's wishes are very important. Why do you have to accommodate the children of the plane? It's okay to complete the task of world consciousness, but sometimes it feels like any existence can threaten the protagonist and force him to do it, and the protagonist actually compromises? ! ! ! I hope that the protagonist can just play them in the future. If possible, it would be best if the protagonist does not end up with someone who does not know how to respect the protagonist. Also, the magic and white night abilities that the protagonist learned in the first world should not be ignored. I hope that the author can remember to use these learned powers to protect himself when the protagonist is threatened or unwilling. Finally, I hope the author will write more and more wonderfully, come on✊

It's super good-looking, and the protagonist has a strong sense of being cheated on as he rides on multiple boats (on purpose). Cool!

The plot is very compact and interesting, the characters are basically distinct, the combat power has not collapsed, and the foreshadowing is basically recycled normally, but the foreshadowing of the wind elf Thor seems not to be recycled? Maybe I just skipped that part Combat accounts for a large proportion, but the writing is also very good. In the daily stage, I personally feel that I can write more about how to avoid spending time on daily life. Although I feel that in the later stage, writing daily life will become writing one by one (omitted). It's a pretty good article with no big flaws, and it's better than most on this platform. After reading several bad books in succession, this one is still the most in line with my preferences and has no fundamental flaws. As long as it is not as discontinuous as the other books I liked before, it is my favorite at the moment. Follow-up review on March 4, 26 Don't look at it, I'm in the middle of an update. I personally feel that Plane 1 is better looking, but the other protagonists are relatively aggrieved. The golden finger opened by the Son of Plane is a bit too big. The protagonist in Plane 2 is still working as a nanny and doing that. In Plane 3, the situation of being that and that is a little better, but not completely.

Holy shit, I've discovered this novel before, and now I've finally finished reading the first plane. Don't worry, the author is awesome. I'll read it after school. Maybe I can only watch it once a week, ugh. Great author, come on, you write really well.

It's okay, but the world is a bit too long. I personally recommend that the chapters in the early dungeon worlds should not be so long, otherwise it will become a quick travel type.

Please give the puppy a chance to follow the protagonist. Please, the puppy is so pitiful and pitiful. It looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, goes, goes, goes, goes, goes, goes

It's so beautiful that I didn't even have time to rate it, so I kept watching it👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅 👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅🌹🌹 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹👅🌹🌹🌹👅🌹🌹👅

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've read this kind of NP. I feel that the plot is very harmonious and doesn't feel like it's being forced. The author hastily updated it and I've read the latest chapters in one go. I rarely leave a comment without finishing reading it. Now that the first world is finished, I will follow up on the next book...

It looks good. It feels more like a quick-travel series than Infinity. The protagonist is very strong.

Cool! It's so fun to watch! Perfectly matches my xp٩(๑^o^๑)۶

Newcomers are monsters. . .

Where have I been? Is this still a tomato? I'm afraid it's not a flower market

After watching the first world, although I feel a bit complicated and feel a little sorry for Jin Maowei, I am the protagonist, and whatever Ye Ming does is right, I will be fine if Ye Ming is good [Note]

Wow, I really loved watching Shura Field. Our protagonist, Baby Bai Yeming, is simply a succubus [shy]

It's super, super good-looking ❤️🩷💕💕The content is very new, but it's too short! The author, please give me more encouragement! ! [Praise]

I particularly like the protagonist, haha, the Shura field is really beautiful, and the attackers are also very good, and they are well portrayed. I like [blowing kiss]

Immortal product, this is a true immortal product [love]

The plot is very interesting

The writing is good, but the copy is too long, which is not suitable for me who likes to read at a fast pace.

I wish the teacher will not be locked up in a dark room, update Modo Modo, I like Xiao Ming very much [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's so beautiful that I burst into tears ૮₍♡♡₎ა

Very beautiful. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Blow kiss]

I hope it doesn't stop

Love to watch, love to watch, watch more [blowing kiss]

Looks good, give it a good review

Very, very, very beautiful

How embarrassing it is to be so exciting, hehehe