[Demining: unlimited flow, bl, twelve constellations]
What will the dying person look like when he holds the thin diagnosis sheet from the hospital?
Is it hysterical madness, helpless helplessness, heart-wrenching crying, bitter self-deprecation, or complete self-destruction?
When the twelve crystal balls line up at the door without any warning, the countdown switch of your life has been pressed. At this moment, what will be your first reaction? Unfortunately, the crystal ball will not give you any response. The Star Gods are already standing in front of you. No matter you question, punch, or cry, they just calmly take out their pocket watches.
The hands are ticking, and each tick is counting down the time you have left.
——To survive, you must survive before the Star God's pocket watch stops.
——This is a gift from the Star Lord to you.
Reader comments
After reading part of it, I feel that some paragraphs are too long and not very good for the senses; some details are well described, but some descriptions are not necessary. I don't know what to express at the moment. Can I describe some important details in detail, which can be regarded as a foreshadowing for the key points later? ; Also, I feel that the protagonist is a bit dull. I feel that passing the first dungeon depends entirely on the boss. Can you enrich the protagonist's er, specific image? Or maybe add more of the main character thinking? I just felt that the main character was mediocre and tasteless. (I haven't written an article, so it's just a simple suggestion. If it's not very good, don't worry about it. Just say your own words and it's very unique (︡ω︠))
I just read the first few chapters, but I don't know what happens next.
However, the cover and title of the book are very beautiful! There are quite a few updates every day! Come on (•́⌄•́๑)૭✧
After reading part of it, I feel that some paragraphs are too long and not very good for the senses; some details are well described, but some descriptions are not necessary. I don't know what to express at the moment. Can I describe some important details in detail, which can be regarded as a foreshadowing for the key points later? ; Also, I feel that the protagonist is a bit dull. I feel that passing the first dungeon depends entirely on the boss. Can you enrich the protagonist's er, specific image? Or maybe add more of the main character thinking? I just felt that the main character was mediocre and tasteless. (I haven't written an article, so it's just a simple suggestion. If it's not very good, don't worry about it. Just say your own words and it's very unique (︡ω︠)) I just read the first few chapters, but I don't know what happens next. However, the cover and title of the book are very beautiful! There are quite a few updates every day! Come on (•́⌄•́๑)૭✧